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 The princesses were different form each other.  The youngest princesses love the sun and she has a garden that looks like the sun and while the other princesses decorate their gardens with things they found in shipwrecks.  Her other sisters made a flower patch in the shape of a whale and a mermaid.


The princesses were different form each other.

      • Edited for spelling: The princesses were different from each other.
      • Misspelled "from."


The youngest princesses love the sun and she has a garden that looks like the sun and while the other princesses decorate their gardens with things they found in shipwrecks.

      • Edited for grammar (singular/plural, run-on sentence): The youngest princess loves the sun and has a garden that looks like the sun while the other princesses decorated their gardens with things they found in shipwrecks.
      • The youngest princess is singular. To avoid having a run-on sentence, take out the "she" in "she has a garden." No need for the "and" before "while."


Her other sisters made a flower patch in the shape of a whale and a mermaid.

      • Good!


Final Edited Version: The princesses were different from each other. The youngest princess loves the sun and has a garden that looks like the sun while the other princesses decorated their gardens with things they found in shipwrecks. Her other sisters made a flower patch in the shape of a whale and a mermaid.

      • Overall, good! Please focus on your singular/plurals and avoid creating run-on sentences.

Edited by Ashley Leung