Zila's Writing Page The two opposing views is Blasio thinks that the school will be closed until the next school year while Cuomo thinks that school will open in April 29. In Blasio view he thinks that school will start next year because the Coronavirus can be easily spread. The text states, New York City's will not reopen this academic year. So, Blasio thinks that this year there will be no school. In Cuomo's view he thinks that the school will reopen in April 29. He says this because the pandemic can change its route. The text states, Depends on the course of the Pandemic. So, Cuomo thinks the course of the Novel can change and allow schools to start again.
One reason why Tiger salamanders are reappearing is because of reproduction. Since the species almost died out some survived and made new more salamanders. The text states, Checked sites where egg masses flourished. So, the reason why they are coming back is because they are laying eggs to create more of its species. Another reason on why Tiger salamanders are reappearing is because they hid away from humans. Since they mostly live under ground they are very hard to spot and they hunt at night. The text states, Dig underground burrows in loose, sandy soil, where they spend most of their lives. So. Tiger salamanders could have been hiding underground where they are hard to spot.
For clarity: One reason why Tiger Salamanders are reappearing is because of their reproduction.
For fluidity, clarity: While the species almost went extinct, some survived and repopulated the area they formerly inhabited.
The text states, humans "checked sites where egg masses flourished."
With the structure of this sentence, it would be best if your quote was a full sentence, for clarity purposes.
For fluidity: So, the reason why the salamander population is growing is because they are laying eggs to create more of the species.
For grammar: Another reason why Tiger Salamanders are reappearing is because they hide away from humans.
For grammar, clarity: Since they mostly live underground, they are very hard to spot. They also hunt at night.
For structure, grammar, clarity:As the text states, they "dig underground burrows in loose, sandy soil, where they spend most of their lives."
See previous comment about quotes. Also, if a sentence ends within the quotation, the punctuation is within the quotation mark as well.
For grammar: So, Tiger Salamanders could have been hiding underground, where they are hard to spot."
Fully Edited Summary: One reason why Tiger Salamanders are reappearing is because of their reproduction. While the species almost went extinct, some survived and repopulated the area they formerly inhabited. The text states, humans "checked sites where egg masses flourished." So, the reason why the salamander population is growing is because they are laying eggs to create more of the species. Another reason why Tiger Salamanders are reappearing is because they hide away from humans. Since they mostly live underground, they are very hard to spot. They also hunt at night. As the text states, they "dig underground burrows in loose, sandy soil, where they spend most of their lives." So, Tiger Salamanders could have been hiding underground, where they are hard to spot.
Nice work, but remember to capitalize proper nouns!
- Edited by Hailey
The difference between a regular moon and a super moon is a super moon is 7% bigger than a regular moon. This is because sattilites that have an oval orbit make the moon come closer and further. The text states, The distance between the Moon and Earth varies because of the sattilites oval Orbit. So, the reason a super moon looks bigger is because it moves closer to Earth because of the oval orbit of satellites. Another reason why the super moon is different than a regular moon is because it is 15% brighter. This occurs because the moon meets with the Lunar perigee which causes the moon to shine brighter. The text states, Occurs when the full moon concides with the lunar perigee. So, the moon shines brighter because it coincides with the Lunar perigee.
For clarity: The difference between a regular moon and a super moon is that a super moon is 7% bigger than a regular moon.
Nice! I just added a "that" so the sentence makes a little more sense.
For spelling, clarity: This is because the satellites that have an oval orbit make then moon come closer and further than a circular orbit would.
If you use a superlative, such as "closer" and "further", make sure the reader knows what you are comparing to!
For spelling, grammar: The text states, "The distance between the Moon and Earth varies because of the satellite's oval orbit."
So, the reason a super moon looks bigger is because it moves closer to Earth because of the oval orbit of satellites.
Good!
Another reason why the super moon is different than a regular moon is because it is 15% brighter.
This occurs because the moon "meets with the Lunar perigee", which causes the moon to shine brighter.
Double check your quotes!
For spelling: The text states, "Occurs when the full moon coincides with the lunar perigee.
So, the moon shines brighter because it coincides with the Lunar perigee.
Fully Edited Summary: The difference between a regular moon and a super moon is that a super moon is 7% bigger than a regular moon. This is because the satellites that have an oval orbit make then moon come closer and further than a circular orbit would. The text states, "The distance between the Moon and Earth varies because of the satellite's oval orbit." So, the reason a super moon looks bigger is because it moves closer to Earth because of the oval orbit of satellites. Another reason why the super moon is different than a regular moon is because it is 15% brighter. This occurs because the moon "meets with the Lunar perigee", which causes the moon to shine brighter. The text states, "Occurs when the full moon coincides with the lunar perigee." So, the moon shines brighter because it coincides with the Lunar perigee.
Good work on this. Keep an eye on your spelling, though!
- Edited by Hailey
The bad thing about social distancing is that you have keep away away from others. This is bad because you can't do things you do when you meet a friend. The text states, It is difficult to keep away from others in some situations. So, practicing social distancing can be hard because you might wanna hug your friend that doesn't know she or he has the virus. The good thing about social distancing is you have less of a chance of getting the virus from other people around you. If don't keep your distance then you can end up spreading the virus. The text states, people can spread the virus through droplets from coughs and sneezes, Social distancing limits the chances of that. So, Social distancing can keep you safe and others from harm done to people around you and yourself.
For grammar: The bad thing about social distancing is that you have to keep away from others.
For fluidity: Therefore, you can't do the things you might do when you meet a friend.
The text states, "It is difficult to keep away from others in some situations."
For grammar: So, practicing social distancing can be hard because you might want to hug your friend that doesn't know if she or he has the virus.
"wanna" is not a word!
For fluidity: "An advantage of social distancing is that you have less of a chance of getting the virus from other people around you."
For grammar: If you don't keep your distance, then you can end up spreading the virus.
For structure: The text states, "People can spread the virus through droplets from coughs and sneezes. Social distancing limits the chances of that."
For fluidity: So, social distancing can keep you safe and others from harm.
You do not always need extra words! Good ending, though.
Fully Edited Summary: The bad thing about social distancing is that you have to keep away from others. Therefore, you can't do the things you might do when you meet a friend. The text states, "It is difficult to keep away from others in some situations." So, practicing social distancing can be hard because you might want to hug your friend that doesn't know if she or he has the virus. An advantage of social distancing is that you have less of a chance of getting the virus from other people around you. If you don't keep your distance, then you can end up spreading the virus. The text states, "People can spread the virus through droplets from coughs and sneezes. Social distancing limits the chances of that." So, social distancing can keep you safe and others from harm.
Good job! You should do one final read-through before uploading your summary, however. I think you will find and correct some "silly" mistakes!
- Edited by Hailey
How J.K Rowling thinks that her new webpage is that she feels it can educate people. Also, she thinks this because you can be able to then run a business successfully. The text states, Number of resources related to international franchise.So, this is why she thinks this webpage is educational. Another reason on why she thinks that her webpage is helpful is because it can entertain many fans. She thinks this because many people now go online so they don't get bored. The text states, Hogwarts has been an escape for all, for readers and fans from young to old. So, this mean Rowling does this to entertain people.
For fluidity: J.K. Rowling feels that her new webpage can educate people.
For fluidity: She believes this because she has been able to run a successful business based off her books.
For structure, clarity: The text states, a "number of resources related to international franchise" are present on the website.
So, this is why she thinks this webpage is educational.
Good!
For fluidity: Another reason why she thinks her webpage is helpful is because it can entertain many fans.
She thinks this because many people now go online so they don't get bored.
Good reasoning!
For structure: The text states, Hogwarts has been an escape for all, for readers and fans from young to old."
If you are quoting a complete sentence, the punctuation goes before the last quotation mark.
For fluidity: So, this means Rowling created this franchise and website to entertain people.
Make sure your sentences are very clear, so the reader knows what you are talking about!
Fully Edited Summary: J.K. Rowling feels that her new webpage can educate people. She believes this because she has been able to run a successful business based off her books. The text states, a "number of resources related to international franchise" are present on the website. So, this is why she thinks this webpage is educational. Another reason why she thinks her webpage is helpful is because it can entertain many fans. She thinks this because many people now go online so they don't get bored. The text states, Hogwarts has been an escape for all, for readers and fans from young to old." So, this means Rowling created this franchise and website to entertain people.
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One fun sounding game is indoor basket ball. I picked this because you can be competitive and it can help you have better aim. The text states, Enlist siblings for games like knockout out or horse. So, I think this game is fun because it is a competitive game and help your aim. Another game that sounds fun is snowball fights. I picked this because you run around and be laughing. Also, because it can get some of your energy out of you. This can help you get exercise an have fun with your family. The text states, An indoor snowball fight is a fun way to burn off some energy as a family. So, this indoor fight can burn some energy and you have fun with family members.
For fluidity: One game that sounds fun is indoor basketball. I picked this game because you can be competitive. It can also help you have better aim.
The text states, Enlist siblings for games like knockout out or horse.
Good quote!
For purpose: So, I think this game is fun because it is a competitive game and helps you practice your aim.
For clarity: Another game that sounds fun would be a snowball fight.
For grammar: I picked this game because you can run around while laughing.
For fluidity: Also, the game can get some of your energy out of you.
Good sentence and idea, you just need to have the subject of the sentence (which I added)
For fluidity, grammar: This game also gets you to exercise and have fun with your family.
The text states, An indoor snowball fight is a fun way to burn off some energy as a family.
Nice!
For fluidity: So, this indoor fight can burn some energy. In the meantime, you will have fun with family members.
Fully Edited Summary: One game that sounds fun is indoor basketball. I picked this game because you can be competitive. It can also help you have better aim. The text states, Enlist siblings for games like knockout out or horse. So, I think this game is fun because it is a competitive game and helps you practice your aim. Another game that sounds fun would be a snowball fight. I picked this game because you can run around while laughing. Also, the game can get some of your energy out of you. This game also gets you to exercise and have fun with your family. The text states, An indoor snowball fight is a fun way to burn off some energy as a family. So, this indoor fight can burn some energy. In the meantime, you will have fun with family members.
Make sure that your sentences are not repetitive! Sometimes you repeat information/ideas that you had already similarly stated.
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There are many ways for a student to learn best online. One of these ways is to clear all distractions so you can focus and make your goals for the day and try to achieve it. The text states, Setting a clear goal can help you stay motivated and beat procrastination. So, if you make a goal to try to reach each day then you can try your best and have a motivation to keep on going and put in all your effort. Another way to learn the best you can is by making a schedule and follow it so you can make time to do what you were supposed to do. Also , you can go to a area where you first learned the certain lesson because it help you with memory. The text states, its easier to recall information if your in the same place where you first learned it, Time and schedules are important for many things and studying well need time and schedules. So, if you make time for work and go to certain places you can help yourself and make yourself better and organized.
For fluidity: There are many ways for a student to learn successfully online.
For fluidity, grammar: One of these ways is to clear your environment of all distractions, so you can focus, create goals, and achieve them.
The text states, Setting a clear goal can help you stay motivated and beat procrastination.
Good!
For fluidity: So, if you make a goal and try to reach it each day, then you will be able to have the motivation to try your best, keep on going, and put in all your effort.
For fluidity: Another way to learn to the best of your ability is to make a schedule and follow it, so you can make the time to do all the things you were supposed to do.
For grammar: Also, you can go to an area where you first learned the certain lesson because it help you with memory.
Good point!
For grammar: The text states, "It's easier to recall information if you're in the same place where you first learned it. Time and schedules are important for many things and studying well needs time and schedules.'
For fluidity: So, if you make time for work and create positive learning environments, you can help yourself become more organized.
Fully Edited Summary: There are many ways for a student to learn successfully online. One of these ways is to clear your environment of all distractions, so you can focus, create goals, and achieve them. The text states,Setting a clear goal can help you stay motivated and beat procrastination. So, if you make a goal and try to reach it each day, then you will be able to have the motivation to try your best, keep on going, and put in all your effort. Another way to learn to the best of your ability is to make a schedule and follow it, so you can make the time to do all the things you were supposed to do. Also, you can go to an area where you first learned the certain lesson because it help you with memory. The text states, "It's easier to recall information if you're in the same place where you first learned it. Time and schedules are important for many things and studying well needs time and schedules. So, if you make time for work and create positive learning environments, you can help yourself become more organized.
Great work on this!
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There are many ways to prevent infections from the Corona virus. One of these ways is to wash your hands with soap and water. The text states, Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds. So, it would be good to wash your hands because you kill the bacteria that is on your skin. Another way to prevent infection of the corona virus is to sanitize your hands and sneeze in a tissue or elbow joint. The text states, Every class are relying on Alcohol-based Hand sanitizer, Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the Crook of your elbow can help reduce the spread of the airborne virus droplets. So, if you sneeze into your elbow or tissue you can reduce the spread fo the corona virus if you don't know if you have it.
For spelling: There are many ways to prevent infections from the coronavirus.
One of these ways is to wash your hands with soap and water. The text states, Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds. So, it would be good to wash your hands because you kill the bacteria that is on your skin.
Good work!
For spelling: Another way to prevent infection of the coronavirus is to sanitize your hands and sneeze into a tissue or elbow crook.
For capitalization: 'The text states, "Every class are relying on alcohol-based hand sanitizer, coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of your elbow can help reduce the spread of the airborne virus droplets.
For spelling, grammar: So, if you sneeze into your elbow or tissue, you can reduce the spread of the coronavirus, even if you don't know if you have it.
Fully Edited Summary: There are many ways to prevent infections from the coronavirus. One of these ways is to wash your hands with soap and water. The text states, Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds. So, it would be good to wash your hands because you kill the bacteria that is on your skin. Another way to prevent infection of the coronavirus is to sanitize your hands and sneeze into a tissue or elbow crook. The text states, "Every class are relying on alcohol-based hand sanitizer, coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of your elbow can help reduce the spread of the airborne virus droplets. So, if you sneeze into your elbow or tissue, you can reduce the spread of the coronavirus, even if you don't know if you have it.
Nice work!
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