Zila's Writing Page The bad thing about social distancing is that you have keep away away from others. This is bad because you can't do things you do when you meet a friend. The text states, It is difficult to keep away from others in some situations. So, practicing social distancing can be hard because you might wanna hug your friend that doesn't know she or he has the virus. The good thing about social distancing is you have less of a chance of getting the virus from other people around you. If don't keep your distance then you can end up spreading the virus. The text states, people can spread the virus through droplets from coughs and sneezes, Social distancing limits the chances of that. So, Social distancing can keep you safe and others from harm done to people around you and yourself.
For grammar: The bad thing about social distancing is that you have to keep away from others.
For fluidity: Therefore, you can't do the things you might do when you meet a friend.
The text states, "It is difficult to keep away from others in some situations."
For grammar: So, practicing social distancing can be hard because you might want to hug your friend that doesn't know if she or he has the virus.
"wanna" is not a word!
For fluidity: "An advantage of social distancing is that you have less of a chance of getting the virus from other people around you.
For grammar: If you don't keep your distance, then you can end up spreading the virus.
For structure: The text states, "People can spread the virus through droplets from coughs and sneezes. Social distancing limits the chances of that."
For fluidity: So, social distancing can keep you safe and others from harm.
You do not always need extra words! Good ending, though.
Fully Edited Summary: The bad thing about social distancing is that you have to keep away from others. Therefore, you can't do the things you might do when you meet a friend. The text states, "It is difficult to keep away from others in some situations." So, practicing social distancing can be hard because you might want to hug your friend that doesn't know if she or he has the virus. An advantage of social distancing is that you have less of a chance of getting the virus from other people around you. If you don't keep your distance, then you can end up spreading the virus. The text states, "People can spread the virus through droplets from coughs and sneezes. Social distancing limits the chances of that." So, social distancing can keep you safe and others from harm.
Good job! You should do one final read-through before uploading your summary, however. I think you will find and correct some "silly" mistakes!
How J.K Rowling thinks that her new webpage is that she feels it can educate people. Also, she thinks this because you can be able to then run a business successfully. The text states, Number of resources related to international franchise.So, this is why she thinks this webpage is educational. Another reason on why she thinks that her webpage is helpful is because it can entertain many fans. She thinks this because many people now go online so they don't get bored. The text states, Hogwarts has been an escape for all, for readers and fans from young to old. So, this mean Rowling does this to entertain people.
For fluidity: J.K. Rowling feels that her new webpage can educate people.
For fluidity: She believes this because she has been able to run a successful business based off her books.
For structure, clarity: The text states, a "number of resources related to international franchise" are present on the website.
So, this is why she thinks this webpage is educational.
Good!
For fluidity: Another reason why she thinks her webpage is helpful is because it can entertain many fans.
She thinks this because many people now go online so they don't get bored.
Good reasoning!
For structure: The text states, Hogwarts has been an escape for all, for readers and fans from young to old."
If you are quoting a complete sentence, the punctuation goes before the last quotation mark.
For fluidity: So, this means Rowling created this franchise and website to entertain people.
Make sure your sentences are very clear, so the reader knows what you are talking about!
Fully Edited Summary: J.K. Rowling feels that her new webpage can educate people. She believes this because she has been able to run a successful business based off her books. The text states, a "number of resources related to international franchise" are present on the website. So, this is why she thinks this webpage is educational. Another reason why she thinks her webpage is helpful is because it can entertain many fans. She thinks this because many people now go online so they don't get bored. The text states, Hogwarts has been an escape for all, for readers and fans from young to old." So, this means Rowling created this franchise and website to entertain people.
One fun sounding game is indoor basket ball. I picked this because you can be competitive and it can help you have better aim. The text states, Enlist siblings for games like knockout out or horse. So, I think this game is fun because it is a competitive game and help your aim. Another game that sounds fun is snowball fights. I picked this because you run around and be laughing. Also, because it can get some of your energy out of you. This can help you get exercise an have fun with your family. The text states, An indoor snowball fight is a fun way to burn off some energy as a family. So, this indoor fight can burn some energy and you have fun with family members.
For fluidity: One game that sounds fun is indoor basketball. I picked this game because you can be competitive. It can also help you have better aim.
The text states, Enlist siblings for games like knockout out or horse.
Good quote!
For purpose: So, I think this game is fun because it is a competitive game and helps you practice your aim.
For clarity: Another game that sounds fun would be a snowball fight.
For grammar: I picked this game because you can run around while laughing.
For fluidity: Also, the game can get some of your energy out of you.
Good sentence and idea, you just need to have the subject of the sentence (which I added)
For fluidity, grammar: This game also gets you to exercise and have fun with your family.
The text states, An indoor snowball fight is a fun way to burn off some energy as a family.
Nice!
For fluidity: So, this indoor fight can burn some energy. In the meantime, you will have fun with family members.
Fully Edited Summary: One game that sounds fun is indoor basketball. I picked this game because you can be competitive. It can also help you have better aim. The text states, Enlist siblings for games like knockout out or horse. So, I think this game is fun because it is a competitive game and helps you practice your aim. Another game that sounds fun would be a snowball fight. I picked this game because you can run around while laughing. Also, the game can get some of your energy out of you. This game also gets you to exercise and have fun with your family. The text states, An indoor snowball fight is a fun way to burn off some energy as a family. So, this indoor fight can burn some energy. In the meantime, you will have fun with family members.
Make sure that your sentences are not repetitive! Sometimes you repeat information/ideas that you had already similarly stated.
There are many ways for a student to learn best online. One of these ways is to clear all distractions so you can focus and make your goals for the day and try to achieve it. The text states, Setting a clear goal can help you stay motivated and beat procrastination. So, if you make a goal to try to reach each day then you can try your best and have a motivation to keep on going and put in all your effort. Another way to learn the best you can is by making a schedule and follow it so you can make time to do what you were supposed to do. Also , you can go to a area where you first learned the certain lesson because it help you with memory. The text states, its easier to recall information if your in the same place where you first learned it, Time and schedules are important for many things and studying well need time and schedules. So, if you make time for work and go to certain places you can help yourself and make yourself better and organized.
For fluidity: There are many ways for a student to learn successfully online.
For fluidity, grammar: One of these ways is to clear your environment of all distractions, so you can focus, create goals, and achieve them.
The text states, Setting a clear goal can help you stay motivated and beat procrastination.
Good!
For fluidity: So, if you make a goal and try to reach it each day, then you will be able to have the motivation to try your best, keep on going, and put in all your effort.
For fluidity: Another way to learn to the best of your ability is to make a schedule and follow it, so you can make the time to do all the things you were supposed to do.
For grammar: Also, you can go to an area where you first learned the certain lesson because it help you with memory.
Good point!
For grammar: The text states, "It's easier to recall information if you're in the same place where you first learned it. Time and schedules are important for many things and studying well needs time and schedules.'
For fluidity: So, if you make time for work and create positive learning environments, you can help yourself become more organized.
Fully Edited Summary: There are many ways for a student to learn successfully online. One of these ways is to clear your environment of all distractions, so you can focus, create goals, and achieve them. The text states,Setting a clear goal can help you stay motivated and beat procrastination. So, if you make a goal and try to reach it each day, then you will be able to have the motivation to try your best, keep on going, and put in all your effort. Another way to learn to the best of your ability is to make a schedule and follow it, so you can make the time to do all the things you were supposed to do. Also, you can go to an area where you first learned the certain lesson because it help you with memory. The text states, "It's easier to recall information if you're in the same place where you first learned it. Time and schedules are important for many things and studying well needs time and schedules. So, if you make time for work and create positive learning environments, you can help yourself become more organized.
Great work on this!
There are many ways to prevent infections from the Corona virus. One of these ways is to wash your hands with soap and water. The text states, Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds. So, it would be good to wash your hands because you kill the bacteria that is on your skin. Another way to prevent infection of the corona virus is to sanitize your hands and sneeze in a tissue or elbow joint. The text states, Every class are relying on Alcohol-based Hand sanitizer, Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the Crook of your elbow can help reduce the spread of the airborne virus droplets. So, if you sneeze into your elbow or tissue you can reduce the spread fo the corona virus if you don't know if you have it.
For spelling: There are many ways to prevent infections from the coronavirus.
One of these ways is to wash your hands with soap and water. The text states, Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds. So, it would be good to wash your hands because you kill the bacteria that is on your skin.
Good work!
For spelling: Another way to prevent infection of the coronavirus is to sanitize your hands and sneeze into a tissue or elbow crook.
For capitalization: 'The text states, "Every class are relying on alcohol-based hand sanitizer, coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of your elbow can help reduce the spread of the airborne virus droplets.
For spelling, grammar: So, if you sneeze into your elbow or tissue, you can reduce the spread of the coronavirus, even if you don't know if you have it.
Fully Edited Summary: There are many ways to prevent infections from the coronavirus. One of these ways is to wash your hands with soap and water. The text states, Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds. So, it would be good to wash your hands because you kill the bacteria that is on your skin. Another way to prevent infection of the coronavirus is to sanitize your hands and sneeze into a tissue or elbow crook. The text states, "Every class are relying on alcohol-based hand sanitizer, coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of your elbow can help reduce the spread of the airborne virus droplets. So, if you sneeze into your elbow or tissue, you can reduce the spread of the coronavirus, even if you don't know if you have it.
Nice work!
