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One bad effect about social distancing is that it takes a lot of work to do it but the good thing is that you can avoid sick people by not get closer than 2 feet. one reason it is bad is because you cant you cant tell if your staying 6feet direct or more or less then six feet. the good news is you can stay away from others that seem to be 6 feet direct. in the text it says the u.s centers for disease control and prevention say that social distancing is a great idea. the reason why the u.s centers for disease control and prevention said that social distancing is good because you would not get disease.

For fluidity: One consequence of social distancing is that it takes a lot of work to do it, but the good thing is that you can avoid sick people by not getting closer than 2 feet away.

For structure, fluidity, clarity: One reason social distancing is difficult is because it is hard to tell if you're staying exactly, more, or less than 6 feet. 

                      "Your" is possessive. "You're" is the contraction of "you are". This is very important to remember!


For structure, fluidity: The good news is that you can stay away from others that seem to be 6 feet away exactly. 

                       "Direct" is not a synonym for "exactly".

For fluidity: The text mentions that the U.S. Center of Disease Control and Prevention believes that social distancing is a great way to stay safe. 

                      Is this a quote? If so, remember the quotation marks! Also, a singular noun would have "says" following, as opposed to "say".

For fluidity: The reason why the U.S. Center for Disease Control and Prevention said that social distancing is good is because you will be less likely to get the virus.

Fully Edited Summary: One consequence of social distancing is that it takes a lot of work to do it, but the good thing is that you can avoid sick people by not getting closer than 2 feet away. One reason social distancing is difficult is because it is hard to tell if you're staying exactly, more, or less than 6 feet. The good news is that you can stay away from others that seem to be 6 feet away exactly. The text mentions that the U.S. Center of Disease Control and Prevention believes that social distancing is a great way to stay safe. The reason why the U.S. Center for Disease Control and Prevention said that social distancing is good is because you will be less likely to get the virus.

I am glad to see your first piece of writing! Please capitalize your sentences. I also think that there is a lot of information that could have been used in this summary, so try your best not to repeat the same ideas!