Article Page Keep Calm and "Go[..] Gentle:" In recent years, in avoidance of living low quality lives, more people are changing their lifestyle habits. Social interaction is a signifier of the quality of one's death because at an older age having someone to confide in is healthy- emotionally and mentally. Elders living in empty residents far from familiar people when involved in health accidents have a greater risk of developing a long term disability than those who are more sociall active. Though uncomfortable and able to misinterpret, sitting down with your parent to plan their living will, talk about the possibility of death. A 2017 study showed that more people in America pass away at home than in any other surveyed location. It is never too late in life to change habits that can lead to fulfillment. Source: https://www.knowablemagazine.org/article/health-disease/2019/end-of-life-care
One Size (Protein) Fits All (Common Colds):
Viruses are always mutating to form cells that are resistant to drugs, which causes proteins or other virus-fighting agents difficulty in binding to the right cells. Microbiologist Jan Carette and his team researches for a universal vaccine that will defend against the common illness. When exposed to infections, some cells developed illnesses; Carette's team intended to track which genes were missing in cells that continued to flourish even after the infection. To test the effectiveness of protein SETD3 against viruses, Carette and his colleagues introduced numerous distinct viruses into separate SETD3-deficient cell dishes and was surprised to discover that the dishes lacking SETD3 had a significantly less virus replication rate. However, through an experiment done on rats, Carette uncovered that the lack of the protein SETD3 leads to difficulty in females giving birth because SETD3 modifies actin, which is an important protein that contributes to cell division and shaping. Working backward, Carette's team is still working with SETD3 protein to find the drug for its target.
Source: https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/a-newly-identified-protein-may-be-the-key-to-vanquishing-the-common-cold/
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One Size (Protein) Fits All (Common Colds):
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Viruses are always mutating to form cells that are resistant to drugs, which causes proteins *or* other virus-fighting agents difficulty in binding to the right cells.
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Microbiologist Jan Carette and his team ***researches*** for a universal vaccine that will defend against the common illness.
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***When exposed to infections, some cells developed illnesses***;*** *** Carette's team ***intended to*** ***track*** which genes were missing in cells that continued to flourish even after the infection.
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To test the effectiveness of protein SETD3 against viruses, Carette and his colleagues introduced numerous distinct viruses into separate SETD3-deficient cell dishes and ***was*** surprised to discover that the dishes lacking ***SETD3 had a significantly less virus replication rate.
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However, through an experiment done on rats, Carette uncovered that the lack of the protein SETD3 leads to difficulty in females giving birth because ***SETD3*** modifies actin, which is an important protein that contributes to cell division and shaping.
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Working ***backward***, Carette's team is still working with *** SETD3 protein to find ***the*** drug for its target.
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One Size (Protein) Fits All (Common Colds):
Viruses are always mutating to form cells that are resistant to drugs, which causes proteins and other virus-fighting agents difficulty in binding to the right cells.
Microbiologist Jan Carette and his team have been researching for a universal vaccine that will defend against the common illness. They conducted experiments wherein some cells developed illnesses after being exposed to infections, and Carette's team tracked which genes were missing in cells that continued to flourish even after the infection. To test the effectiveness of protein SETD3 against viruses, Carette and his colleagues introduced numerous distinct viruses into separate SETD3-deficient cell dishes and were surprised to discover that the dishes lacking this gene had a significantly less virus replication rate. However, through an experiment done on rats, Carette uncovered that the lack of the protein SETD3 leads to difficulty in females giving birth because the gene modifies actin, which is an important protein that contributes to cell division and shaping.
Working backwards, Carette's team is still working with the SETD3 protein to find a drug for its target.
Source: https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/a-newly-identified-protein-may-be-the-key-to-vanquishing-the-common-cold/