Surprising Attack
A tsunami hit Indonesia without any sign of warning. Many scientists are blaming it geology for this disaster. When the tsunami first hit it was a 6.1 magnitude which barely damage any housing but for unknown reason the tsunami began to grow stronger to a 7.5 magnitude which later on causing huge damage and killing many people. Now everyone is working together to save the remaning people affected by the tsunami. https://www.nationalgeographic.com/environment/2018/09/indonesia-tsunami-sulawesi-explained-science-geology/
Darwin Thoughts
Darwin was the person who believed that species evolve as time and was the first to draw the tree of life. But he later found the third kingdom of life called archaea. However, when he first found out he believed that they are another type of bacteria. Which later on he found out that he was wrong and ended up making a new discovery which was published in the New York Times in 1997. Now there are another kingdom that are found and now scientists are trying to find the relationship between every living things. https://www.nationalgeographic.com/science/2018/09/darwin-evolution-crispr-microbiome-bacteria-news/
NASA Watching Over
NASA is now able to see the melting glaciers over the world. Thanks to the new satellite, called ICESat-2 which give researchers more precise look of the melting glaciers. This melting ice will cause sea level to rise and the satellite provide a good evidence for that. NASA concluded that the measure of the ice sheet in Antartica and Greenland is about a sixth of an inch. Now NASA coming up with more satellite to determine the amount of vegetation in a region. https://www.nytimes.com/2018/09/14/climate/nasa-ice-satellite-launch.html?rref=collection%2Fsectioncollection%2Fscience&action=click&contentCollection=science®ion=rank&module=package&version=highlights&contentPlacement=8&pgtype=sectionfront
Donating Blood
Donating blood are becoming common, there are four different types of blood: A,B,AB, and O. It is important that the right type of blood to the patients. If not the person will face severe disease or death. But O blood type can be tranfer to any blood type, making it the universal donor blood. Now scientists believed that they can turn the 3 different types of blood types to O by switching the enzymes. Then we don't have to worry about blood transfusion. https://www.popsci.com/type-o-blood-gut-enzyme
Is Arctic Still Cold?
Arctic known as one of the coldest place on earth, might not be as cold as before. Nikita Zimov was teaching his students about ecological fieldwork, when he notice something. THe frozen land might be thawing faster than before. It not possible for a place with 40 degrees below zero Fahrenheit to have soil that are thawing faster. This can lead to major concern about how much carbon are we putting into the air. https://www.nationalgeographic.com/environment/2018/08/news-arctic-permafrost-may-thaw-faster-than-expected/
Is Arctic Still Cold?
- Don't forget to use your definite and indefinite articles. Though most continents do not use "the", the Northern area of our world is known as "the Arctic"; Is the Arctic Still Cold?
Arctic known as one of the coldest place on earth, might not be as cold as before.
- Same here: The Arctic, Also the first part of the sentence does not have a verb. You need to add "is". When you use "one of the", you must have the noun as plural, so " One of the places. Lastly, you need to combine both sentences with a conjunction, use "but", and the second part of the sentence does not have a subject, use "it" ; The Arctic is known as one of the coldest places on earth, but it might not be as cold as before.
Nikita Zimov was teaching his students about ecological fieldwork, when he notice something.
- The verb noticed must be in the past tense because you used "was teaching"
Nikita Zimov was teaching his students about ecological fieldwork, when he noticed something. THe frozen land might be thawing faster than before.
- Watch out for capitalizing words that don't need it, if you do this in school they take points off for mechanics based on sloppiness. Also try not to end to many sentences with prepositions. You've done this twice with the word " before". It is incorrect to use a preposition at the end of a sentence.; The frozen land might be thawing faster than it has in the past.
It not possible for a place with 40 degrees below zero Fahrenheit to have soil that are thawing faster.
- Do not start a sentence with "it" because using it makes the subject unclear. Soil is an uncountable noun so you should not use the plural be verb "are", use is. When you use an adjective in the comparative form (more or er), then you need another noun to compare it to. So, just write "as fast as it is."; For a place with 40 degrees below zero Fahrenheit weather to have soil that thaws as fast as it is, something else must be happening.
Though the cause is not clear, concerns about how much carbon we are putting into the air has come up as a possible cause.
Can Human Kill Robot?
It hard to turn down the offer when a robot is begging not to. Scientists chose students from 89 colleges to team up and work on a robot called Noa. The challenge started with the scientists asked the students to turn of the robot. This create stress due to the robot begging not to since their relationship began to built up. Scientists believed that the students treat the robot as a human after having it as a partner. https://www.popsci.com/humans-killing-robots
Why Elephant Have Low Risk of Cancer
One of the biggest mammal should be more prone to cancer risk than smaller animals. But, elephant have fewer risk of having cancer than humans. This is because of their trunk, which have extra tumor-suppressing gene called P53, while human only have one, elephant have 20. The gene can detect DNA damage and is able to kill it. Since elephant have more P53 than human, it is more likely that elephant have a lower chance of having skin problems than humans. https://www.nationalgeographic.com/science/2018/08/news-cancer-elephants-genes-dna-new-research/
Seafood
If human population continue to boom, the food production need to be double from now. So now researchers are now focusing on fish, as fish have high enough of proteins. Now researchers are considering high sea fishing which is very expensive. They also came up with another solution, having farm-raised fish. Perdicting that by 2030, 62% of the world's seafood will be farm-raised. So far there is no real solution for food production besides depending on seafood. https://www.nationalgeographic.com/environment/2018/08/news-fisheries-aquaculture-food-security/
Health Issues
Ever since Trump became president, having a insurence become challenging. Medicare played an important role for everyone, especially for elders. Having insurence can lower medicial bills and make medication more affordable. But recently Trump cut out all the benefits and the $500 billion fund. Now affording medication is harder due to no insurence to help and now 70% of older Americans suffer from periodontal disease and 20% live with decay tooth. So medicare is needed, especailly for the elders. https://www.washingtontimes.com/news/2018/jun/26/the-future-of-medicare-dental-vision-and-hearing-c/
Soil Causing More Carbon Dioxide
After trees die, microbes in the soil consume the carrbon and exhale out the carbon dioxide back into the air. Temperature rising can cause this process to speed up much faster. The microbes are able to break down more carbon due to high heat which later extracted to the atmosphere. To prevent this from happening, we can perserve or regrow forest. But this won't be enough compare to other damages that happened. https://www.popsci.com/rising-temperatures-are-causing-soil-to-dump-more-carbon-dioxide-into-air#page-5
Poisioning Wildlife
Two herdsmen in Kenya's Osewan region had enough of the trouble the lions has cause to his livestocks. So they went and decided to make poison darts in which they killed one female and a male. But this didn't stop the predators, so then they began to poison their livestocks in order to kill the lions. The people only use poison to catch preys for food and to protect themselves. Now wildlife animals are decreasing as time pass due to humans. https://www.nationalgeographic.com/magazine/2018/08/poisoning-africa-kenya-maasai-pesticides-lions-poachers-conservationists/
How Much Are You Consuming?
Athletes and trainers have a belief on consuming alot of proteins when they exercise. That is usually not the case, body need protein to break up into amino acids, which are used to make other proteins like collagen. But too much protein can be bad for the kidneys. So eating too much protein don't really improve your strength but strain your kidneys. In general, the amount of proteins you need to consume have to do with how much you exercise. So it is important to watch your intake on proteins and also to eat other nutrients. https://www.popsci.com/how-much-protein#page-4
No More Plastic
By the January 2019, Dominica plans on fully banning all platic and styrofoam use food containers. The government restrict on the imports of non-biodegradable containers. Dominica have much larger goals, they also hoped to have a stable climate. Since in summer there are many migrating sperm whales inhabitants. So reducing plastic waste can also protect the marine mammals.
https://www.nationalgeographic.com/environment/2018/08/news-dominica-plastic-styrofoam-ban/
DNA Connection
Dogs are known as men best friend for it well-behaved behaviors. But dogs are descended from wolves so, how are dogs tameable. So researchers believed that breeding the friendliest fox can domesticate them. Belyaev proved himself right by breeding fearless foxes which resulted a socialable and adventerous babies. Now researchers still kept on breeding 40 generations of friendly and aggressive foxes to find the connection of the genetic that made it wild to tame. https://www.nationalgeographic.com/animals/2018/08/fox-dogs-wild-tame-genetics-study-news/
Grizzly Bear Survival Rate
Grizzly bear had been in the endangered species list. Since then researchers have been collecting data from bears for the future species. After the recovery of the popluation, the government began to open up hunting ground for the bears. But if the hunter kill a female bear and the popluation decreases, then the hunting ground will be closed. So far there are about 700 bears in the Greater Yellowstone Area and 1,000 wander in the remote mountains and valleys. https://www.nationalgeographic.com/animals/2018/07/can-grizzly-bears-survive-hunting-animals/
Jupiter's New Moon: Weirdo
Jupiter has 53 moons in total founded by Galileo Galilei backed in 1610. But 16 of those weren't named and the two that were discovered last year make it 69 moons in total. The most recent discoveres is finding 10 more moons to make it 79 moons in total. Out of the 79 moons each of the moons were put into a group. Out of the 12 moons one of the moon wasn't orbiting like the rest of the moons. Many scientists believed that once the moon was collided with something, since it function a bit differently. Being different from the rest of the moons, scientists named it Weirdo.
Parasite Alert!
Toxoplasama gondii is a cat poop parasite that have both infected not just humans but other rodents as well. T. gondii would likely infected warm blooded animals that come to close contact. Causing it to have less fears, for example, infecting a mouse would cause it to have less fear of cats. Getting infected will change one judgement, personality, and mental health. Researchers also found that many people who are infected will choose career that is challenging and risky.
U.S. Is Vulnerable to Big Disasters
Locations is one main reasons why disasters occures. Seven of the 10 largest areas in U.S. are near to the coast and more than 60 million people live there. Another factors is over-population since it hard to fit many people in one small spaceand city need advanced infrastructure for houses. Next, factors is no emergancy funds in case if money is needed.Last factors is limited amount of supplies, since most of our supplies are mostly imported, it is important to have enough supplies when needed. In order to protected for big disasters we need everything listed be prepared.
Fire vs. Animals
Fire can destoryed just about anything especailly in a forest. Animals have the abilities to escape the heat, for example, birds will fly, mammals will run, amphibians will burrow underground, and elks and other animals will stay in stream and lakes. Having a forest fire can benefit predators who pray on fleeing animals. Not much animals are harmed by the fire while there are some death but not a severed amount ever recorded. After the fire life in the forest will revive and new live began.
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Shakes Extinction
- A proper title is missing from this article, which is important to reinforce the main idea of your article. Consider trying a more relevant title: " Hazards of Shark Overfishing".
Shakes all around the world are trageted for one thing and it is its liver, known as squalene.
- Various misspellings- "shakes" and "trageted should be "sharks" and "targeted". Furthermore, the phrase "one thing and it is" is excessive. Try using a more straightforward and concise wording: " Sharks throughout the world are targeted specifically for their livers." Also, the term "squalene' refers to the organic compound itself obtained from shark liver oil, not the liver itself. And thus the sentence should read: "Sharks throughout the world are targeted specifically for their liver oils, which possess both commercial and health value. This helps in transitioning to the next sentence as well."
Squalene contains specail oil that is essential for moisturizing and have many nutrients that is good for your skin.
- As noted earlier, squalene refers to the organic compound found in shark liver oil. Therefore, it does not contain the oil, and is within the oil. The sentence should read: " The squalene found in shark liver oil.." The phrase "have many nutrients..." is using the wrong tense. The word "have" should be replaced with has". Altogether, it should sound like this: " The squalene found in shark liver oil is an exceptional moisturizer, and has many nutrients that is beneficial for your skin.
People used the squalene and used it to produce make-up, lipsticks, loions, and sunscreens.
- When discussing events that are still ongoing, use present tense instead of past tense. Replace "used" with use". In addition, the word "people" is vague and does not specify any specific group, thus making it applicable to all people. Use "companies" or "entrepreneurs" to fix this issue. Subsequently, to clarify the sentence even further, categorize the products listed that squalene is used in. In whole, the sentence should read: "In fact, companies utilize squalene in various health and beauty products, such as make-up, lipsticks, lotions, and sunscreens." The transition "in fact" helps to link your sentences together and streamline the ideas.
But not only were the sharks targeted for oils but for seafood known as shark fin soup mostly served in China.
- This sentence is run-on, and sounds clunky and disorganized. Use a better transition word to illustrate a shift in topic and use commas when necessary to fix this issue, or consider dividing the sentence into two parts: "However, sharks are not only overfished for their oils. Sharks are commonly used in seafood dishes such as the infamous shark fin soup, served primarily in China."
As more and more sharks are fished the harder for the sharks to reproduce and harder for them to grow.
- Commas are missing from this sentence, making it run-on. Additionally, the phrase "sharks to reproduce and harder for them to grow" can be compacted to make it sound less wordy: " As sharks are continually overfished, it becomes more difficult for sharks to reproduce and grow."
This can lead to extinction to some species of sharks.
- Leading this sentence with the word "this" sounds bland and lacking. Try using words/phrases such as "As a result," or " Due to this,", which indicates a conclusion or consequence: "As a result, some species of sharks are approaching extinction."
Full Edited Article: Sharks throughout the world are targeted specifically for their liver oils, which possess both commercial and health value. The squalene found in shark liver oil is an exceptional moisturizer, and has many nutrients that is beneficial for your skin. In fact, companies utilize squalene in various health and beauty products, such as make-up, lipsticks, lotions, and sunscreens. However, sharks are not only overfished for their oils. They are commonly used in seafood dishes such as the infamous shark fin soup, served primarily in China. As sharks are continually overfished, it becomes more difficult for sharks to reproduce and grow. As a result, some species of sharks are approaching extinction.
Jupiter's New Moon: Weirdo
Jupiter has 53 moons in total founded by Galileo Galilei backed in 1610. But 16 of those weren't named and the two that were discovered last year make it 69 moons in total. The most recent discoveres is finding 10 more moons to make it 79 moons in total. Out of the 79 moons each of the moons were put into a group. Out of the 12 moons one of the moon wasn't orbiting like the rest of the moons. Many scientists believed that once the moon was collided with something, since it function a bit differently. Being different from the rest of the moons, scientists named it Weirdo.
Parasite Alert!
Toxoplasama gondii is a cat poop parasite that have both infected not just humans but other rodents as well. T. gondii would likely infected warm blooded animals that come to close contact. Causing it to have less fears, for example, infecting a mouse would cause it to have less fear of cats. Getting infected will change one judgement, personality, and mental health. Researchers also found that many people who are infected will choose career that is challenging and risky.
U.S. Is Vulnerable to Big Disasters
Locations is one main reasons why disasters occures. Seven of the 10 largest areas in U.S. are near to the coast and more than 60 million people live there. Another factors is over-population since it hard to fit many people in one small spaceand city need advanced infrastructure for houses. Next, factors is no emergancy funds in case if money is needed.Last factors is limited amount of supplies, since most of our supplies are mostly imported, it is important to have enough supplies when needed. In order to protected for big disasters we need everything listed be prepared.
Fire vs. Animals
Fire can destoryed just about anything especailly in a forest. Animals have the abilities to escape the heat, for example, birds will fly, mammals will run, amphibians will burrow underground, and elks and other animals will stay in stream and lakes. Having a forest fire can benefit predators who pray on fleeing animals. Not much animals are harmed by the fire while there are some death but not a severed amount ever recorded. After the fire life in the forest will revive and new live began.
