The World for Freedom

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The main idea of this story is about animals taking advantage of humans while the humans stay inside. The text states "The first animal to take advantage of human absence were Annie and Edward,two rockhopper penguins who reside at Chicago's Shedd Aquarium."This is what the main idea of this article is about.

The positive good reasons of praticing social distancing is to limit the spread of the coronavirus that causes COVID-19. One detail is "Even standing six feet apart from one another, people can spread the virus through droplets from coughs and sneezes."This is the positive good reason for practicing social distancing.

The reason for the 2020 Olympics in Japan being postponed is because of COVID-19. One detail is that" The 2020 Summer Olympic Games, in Tokyo, Japan, will be postponed for about a year. This is because of the coronavirus pandemic." This is the reason why the 2020 Olympics is being postponed in Japan.

Original: This two activities called Board Games and Card Games seem to be more Fun in home!

I chose these two games because it is fun to play with. The reason why I chose Board Games is that the game Monopoly is a good Board Game . It is a fun way to practice math skills , while also Monopoly teaches savings. So its like learning and fun together .

The reason why I chose Card Games is that games like Uno and Go fish and Old Maid, they are cheap and are easy to find . So you can play cards whenever you want to and wherever you want to , and I promise playing cards is very good

This is why I think these two games will be fun to play with.

Edits: This two activities called Board Games and Card Games seem to be more Fun in home! I chose these two games because it is fun to play with.

Edited for clarity, grammar and fluidity: Two activities that I enjoy playing at home are board games and card games.
Even though I took out the word 'this', it should have been 'these.'

The reason why I chose Board Games is that the game Monopoly is a good Board Game . It is a fun way to practice math skills , while also Monopoly teaches savings.

Edited for punctuation, grammar and clarity: Monopoly is one of my favorite board games because it's a great way to practice math skills and also teaches me the importance of saving money.
This should be one sentence. Also, when using punctuation, do not put a space after the word.

So its like learning and fun together.

Edited for clarity, fluidity and grammar: I enjoy Monopoly because I always have fun when playing it and it also helps me learn.
'its' should be 'it's' because it is a contraction.

The reason why I chose Card Games is that games like Uno and Go fish and Old Maid, they are cheap and are easy to find .

Edited for grammar, punctuation and fluidity: I enjoy card games because some of my favorite games to play are Uno, Go Fish, and Old Maid. These games are very cheap and super easy to find in stores.
Remember, no space before a punctuation.

So you can play cards whenever you want to and wherever you want to , and I promise playing cards is very good.

Edited for fluidity, punctuation and grammar: Having cards handy makes it very easy to play whenever I want, wherever I want which is why I enjoy these two types of games.

Final Edit: Two activities that I enjoy playing at home are board games and card games. Monopoly is one of my favorite board games because it’s a great way to practice math skills and also teaches me the importance of saving money. I enjoy Monopoly because I always have fun playing it and also helps me learn. I enjoy card games because some of my favorite games to play are Uno, Go Fish, and Old Maid. These games are very cheap and super easy to find in stores. Having cards handy makes it very easy to play whenever I want, wherever I want which why I enjoy these two types of games.