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The boy was able to get out of the fish's stomach by cutting off a piece of its liver, which caused the fish to vomit up the boy. According to the text,”... he became very hungry. The boy looked around and saw the fish's liver hanging right over his head. Thinking it was dried meat, he tried to cut off a piece with a muscle shell he had been playing with before and still held in his hand. The boy made the fish sick when his liver was cut open and it vomited the boy out. So, the boy got hungry and cut a piece of the fishes liver and the fish vomited him out. | The boy was able to get out of the fish's stomach by cutting off a piece of its liver, which caused the fish to vomit up the boy. According to the text,”... he became very hungry. The boy looked around and saw the fish's liver hanging right over his head. Thinking it was dried meat, he tried to cut off a piece with a muscle shell he had been playing with before and still held in his hand. The boy made the fish sick when his liver was cut open and it vomited the boy out. So, the boy got hungry and cut a piece of the fishes liver and the fish vomited him out. | ||
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The boy was able to get out of the Stomach of the fish by cutting of a piece of the liver, therefore, the fish vomited up the boy. According to the text,”... he became very hungry, the boy looked around and saw the fishes liver hanging right over his head. Thinking it was dried meat, he tried to cut of a piece with a muscle shell he had been playing with before and still held in his. Wile the operation sickens in the stomach it vomited the boy out. So, the boy got hungry and cut a piece of the fishes liver and the fish vomited him out
In conclusion, the boy was able to get out of the fish because it vomited him out.
Corrections:
The boy was able to get out of the Stomach of the fish by cutting of a piece of the liver, therefore, the fish vomited up the boy.
- Change "the" liver to "its liver." Try: "
According to the text,”... he became very hungry, the boy looked around and saw the fishes liver hanging right over his head.
- Edited for spelling. The plural for fish is still fish, not fishes. Additionally, the liver "belongs" to the fish, therefore it's possessive. It should be changed to: "fish's..."
Wile the operation sickens in the stomach it vomited the boy out. So, the boy got hungry and cut a piece of the fishes liver and the fish vomited him out
- I'm not quite sure what you were trying to say here. Let's change it to: "The boy made the fish sick when his liver was cut open and it vomited the boy out."
Fully Edited Version: The boy was able to get out of the fish's stomach by cutting off a piece of its liver, which caused the fish to vomit up the boy. According to the text,”... he became very hungry. The boy looked around and saw the fish's liver hanging right over his head. Thinking it was dried meat, he tried to cut off a piece with a muscle shell he had been playing with before and still held in his hand. The boy made the fish sick when his liver was cut open and it vomited the boy out. So, the boy got hungry and cut a piece of the fishes liver and the fish vomited him out.
July 21
The monkey played the song the scarecrow on his fiddle the music was sooooo bad that the wolf admired that the fiddle was not actual his and that the bow and arrow belonged to the monkey.
