The World for Freedom

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        There are many ways for students to learn best while studying online. For instance, you will absorb more information, recall information, and will complete your assignments with greater productivity. According to the text it states, You'll absorb more information and complete assignments with greater productivity and ease than if you were trying to do many things at once. This proves that you will be able to absorb more information and complete your assignments. It also proves that you don't multitask you will be able to absorb more information and will also be able to complete assignments with ease. Also in the texts it states, Open your calendar and chose predictable, reliable time that you can dedicate to watching lectures and completing assignments. I chose this quote because it helps you remember what you need to do.                   
   
    Original: There are many ways you can use to prevent infection. For example, you can wash your hands for 20 seconds each time you use the  bathroom. If there is no water or soap at the moment you get your hands dirty, you should use hand sanitizer or wipes to clean your hands. You should also stay at home and avoid contact with other people if you have nothing important to do outside. According to the text it states,  Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds-about the length of the Alphabet Song-before and after eating or after coughing and sneezing,also in the text it states ages 10-19 have died based on the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention's guidance to doctors. This proves that staying home is important.  These are the many ways you can use to prevent yourself from getting an infection.

Comments:

There are many ways you can use to prevent infection.For example, you can wash your hands for 20 seconds each time you use the bathroom.

• • • edited for fluidity- What are the best ways to prevent becoming infected by the COVID_19 virus? There are many ways to prevent infection, though the top solution is washing your hands for 20 seconds each time you use the bathroom.

According to the text it states, Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds-about the length of the Alphabet Song-before and after eating or after coughing and sneezing. So this shows that you can prevent yourself from getting COVID-19. Washing your hands is very important. You must do it for 20 seconds so that you can clean your hand and wrist.

• • • Edited for fluidity- According to the text, Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds-about the length of the Alphabet Song-before and after eating or after coughing and sneezing. Therefore, washing your hands and wrist is very important in preventing the infection of COVID-19.

-I switched these sections.

If there is no water or soap at the moment you get your hands dirty, you should use hand sanitizer or wipes to clean your hands.

• • • Edited for fluidity- A quick alternative to soap is hand-sanitizer with an alcohol-base, that according to the text "require students to continue using them for up to 2 minutes in order to truly disinfect their skin."

You should also stay at home and avoid contact with other people if you have nothing important to do outside. Either way avoid public gatherings

• • • Edited for fluidity- For those considered medically vulnerable, it is recommended that they stay home and practice social distancing.

Another thing you should do is stay at home. Also in the text it states ages 10-19 have died based on the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention's guidance to doctors. This proves that staying home is important. I think this because those kids that died, I bet they got the virus by going outside to a gathering or not washing their hands.

• • • edited for fluidity- The text states that "Worldwide, no one under 9 has died from COVID-19, and 0.2 percent of those ages 10-19 have died based on the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention's guidance to doctors." Basically, for students considered medically vulnerable, practicing social distancing and staying home never hurts.

- read the text and make sure you understand the context of the quotes you use.

I think this because those kids that died, I bet they got the virus by going outside to a gathering or not washing their hands. If you really have to go outside for groceries, you must avoid contact with people passing by or at least be 6 feet away. These are the many ways you can use to prevent yourself from getting an infection.

• • • edited for fluidity- However, in necessary situations, like grocery shopping, it is advised to stay at least 6 feet away from others. These are just some of the many ways you can prevent yourself from getting infected by COVID_19.

Final Copy:

There are many ways to prevent infection, though the top solution is washing your hands for 20 seconds each time you use the  bathroom. According to the text,  Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds-about the length of the Alphabet Song-before and after eating or after coughing and sneezing. Therefore, washing your hands and wrist is very important in preventing the infection of COVID-19. A quick alternative to soap is hand-sanitizer with an alcohol-base, that according to the text "require students to continue using them for up to 2 minutes in order to truly disinfect their skin." For those considered medically vulnerable, it is recommended that they stay home and practice social distancing. The text states that "Worldwide, no one under 9 has died from COVID-19, and 0.2 percent of those ages 10-19 have died based on the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention's guidance to doctors."  Basically, for students considered medically vulnerable, practicing social distancing and staying home never hurts.