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| − | | + | The traits that Ivan had to allow him to be blessed with luck and wealth were trust and understanding because when Ivan listened and followed the master's advice luck and wealth started to come his way. For example, the article has stated "they took the new road Ivan kept to the old one. And robbers fell upon them before they had gone far from Ivan as they were going by the fields of the houses in the meadow." This quote is proving that Ivan had understood his master's advice and went through the old road and misfortune did not fall upon him but to the ones who had taken the new road. Furthermore, the article has also stated "When they came to the place where they used to lodge, Ivan, said, "I must see the host." "The host," they cried; "what do you want with the host? Here is the hostess, and she's young and pretty...So he went into the kitchen to see the host; he found him a weak old man turning the soup. "Oh! oh!" quoth Ivan, "I'll not lodge here, but will go next door."...they were taken and carried to prison, till at last Ivan came to them. "Alas! alas! Ivan," cried they, "bad luck sticks to us; our host was kidnapped last night, and we shall be imprisoned for it." " This shows that Ivan had also trusted his master because he decided to heed his master's advice and luck was on his side. This shows how the traits Ivan had allowed him to be blessed with luck and wealth. |
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| − | In order to prevent yourself from getting the virus, some ways to protect yourself are to wash your hands for at least 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue instead of sneezing in the air. the article states "reducing the spread of viruses. Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds." this is saying that student or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce virus spread. Furthermore, the article states "Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets. This quote is explaining that it is recommended to cough or sneeze in tissues to stay safe. This is how the article proves that there are some ways to protect yourself like washing your hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.
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| − | Edited sentence: To avoid getting the coronavirus disease (COVID-19), you can protect yourself by washing your hands for at least 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue instead of in the air.
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| − | Edited sentence: To reduce the spread of the virus, the article states, “Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds.”
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| − | To avoid getting the coronavirus disease (COVID-19), you can protect yourself by washing your hands for at least 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue instead of in the air. To reduce the spread of the virus, the article states, “Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds.” This means that students or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce the spread of the virus. Furthermore, the article states, “Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets.” This quote is explaining that coughing or sneezing into tissues is recommended to stay safe. This is how the article proves that there are some ways to protect yourself from COVID-19, like washing your hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.
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| − | In order to prevent yourself from getting the virus, some ways to protect yourself are to wash your hands for at least 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue instead of sneezing in the air. the article states "reducing the spread of viruses. Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds." this is saying that student or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce virus spread. Furthermore, the article states "Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets. This quote is explaining that it is recommended to cough or sneeze in tissues to stay safe. This is how the article proves that there are some ways to protect yourself like washing your hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.
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The traits that Ivan had to allow him to be blessed with luck and wealth were trust and understanding because when Ivan listened and followed the master's advice luck and wealth started to come his way. For example, the article has stated "they took the new road Ivan kept to the old one. And robbers fell upon them before they had gone far from Ivan as they were going by the fields of the houses in the meadow." This quote is proving that Ivan had understood his master's advice and went through the old road and misfortune did not fall upon him but to the ones who had taken the new road. Furthermore, the article has also stated "When they came to the place where they used to lodge, Ivan, said, "I must see the host." "The host," they cried; "what do you want with the host? Here is the hostess, and she's young and pretty...So he went into the kitchen to see the host; he found him a weak old man turning the soup. "Oh! oh!" quoth Ivan, "I'll not lodge here, but will go next door."...they were taken and carried to prison, till at last Ivan came to them. "Alas! alas! Ivan," cried they, "bad luck sticks to us; our host was kidnapped last night, and we shall be imprisoned for it." " This shows that Ivan had also trusted his master because he decided to heed his master's advice and luck was on his side. This shows how the traits Ivan had allowed him to be blessed with luck and wealth.
