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I think the meaning of"Company" is a military force.  I think this because the article talks about soldiers.  Also the article mentions something about a boy believing that the blessed land calling upon her sons to defend her from the parricidal blow of the traitor.
 
I think the meaning of"Company" is a military force.  I think this because the article talks about soldiers.  Also the article mentions something about a boy believing that the blessed land calling upon her sons to defend her from the parricidal blow of the traitor.
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I think the meaning of"Company" is a military force. I think this because the article talks about soldiers.
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***Edited for spacing and fluidity: I think the meaning of "Company" is a military force because the article talks about soldiers.
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***Add a space before "Company." You can combine these two sentences. This also clarifies that "Company" is an article.
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<br>Also the article mentions something about a boy believing that the blessed land calling upon her sons to defend her from the parricidal blow of the traitor.
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***Edited for comma and clarity: Also, the article mentions something about a boy believing that the blessed land calling upon her sons to defend her from the parricidal blow of the traitor.
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***Add a comma after "also." Please revise this sentence and clarify who is "her" in this sentence.
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I think the meaning of "Company" is a military force because the article talks about soldiers. Also, the article mentions something about a boy believing that the blessed land calling upon her sons to defend her from the parricidal blow of the traitor.
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***Please revise the second sentence (clarify the people).
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Edited by Ashley Leung

Revision as of 02:50, 7 May 2020

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I think the meaning of"Company" is a military force. I think this because the article talks about soldiers. Also the article mentions something about a boy believing that the blessed land calling upon her sons to defend her from the parricidal blow of the traitor.


I think the meaning of"Company" is a military force. I think this because the article talks about soldiers.

      • Edited for spacing and fluidity: I think the meaning of "Company" is a military force because the article talks about soldiers.
      • Add a space before "Company." You can combine these two sentences. This also clarifies that "Company" is an article.


Also the article mentions something about a boy believing that the blessed land calling upon her sons to defend her from the parricidal blow of the traitor.

      • Edited for comma and clarity: Also, the article mentions something about a boy believing that the blessed land calling upon her sons to defend her from the parricidal blow of the traitor.
      • Add a comma after "also." Please revise this sentence and clarify who is "her" in this sentence.


Final Edited Version: I think the meaning of "Company" is a military force because the article talks about soldiers. Also, the article mentions something about a boy believing that the blessed land calling upon her sons to defend her from the parricidal blow of the traitor.

      • Please revise the second sentence (clarify the people).

Edited by Ashley Leung