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| − | | + | All people who enter the program don't become astronauts. One reason is there are many challenging parts to the astronaut training, and the candidates must successfully complete them all. Another reason is over 12,000 people applied and currently only 48 are accepted. This is because many people show interest which is very strong in the US space program. Therefore, all people who enter the program don't become astronauts. |
| − | In order to avoid becoming infected by the COVID-19 virus you should wash your hands and shower because you never know if you have germs. Another way how you can avoid becoming infected is by not traveling to different countries so you can stop spreading the COVID-19 virus.
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| − | Therefore, these are two ways you can avoid becoming infected by the COVID-19 virus.
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| − | <br>For fluidity, clarity: '''In order to avoid being infected by the COVID-19 virus, you should shower and wash your hands often. You never know if you have come into contact with the virus.'''
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| − | <br>For fluidity: '''Another way to avoid infection is to avoid traveling to/from different countries that have COVID-19, so you do not spread the virus further.'''
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| − | '''Therefore, these are two ways you can avoid becoming infected by the COVID-19 virus.'''
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| − | '''In order to avoid being infected by the COVID-19 virus, you should shower and wash your hands often. You never know if you have come into contact with the virus. Another way to avoid infection is to avoid traveling to/from different countries that have COVID-19, so you do not spread the virus further. Therefore, these are two ways you can avoid becoming infected by the COVID-19 virus.'''
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| − | Good information! Just make sure you are not too "wordy"--it hinders the clarity of the summary.
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| − | *Edited by Hailey
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Revision as of 22:49, 15 April 2020
All people who enter the program don't become astronauts. One reason is there are many challenging parts to the astronaut training, and the candidates must successfully complete them all. Another reason is over 12,000 people applied and currently only 48 are accepted. This is because many people show interest which is very strong in the US space program. Therefore, all people who enter the program don't become astronauts.
