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Social distancing(cons and pros)

There are negative and positive reasons for practicing social distancing. One positive reason why you should practice social distancing is so you can limit the spread of COVID-19 According to the text it states, "To limit the spread of the coronavirus that causes COVID-19, health experts say people should practice social distancing".This shows that social distancing can sometimes prevent people from getting the virus.  A negative reason why you shouldn't practice social distancing is because even being 6 feet away can also spread germs. According to the text it states, "To limit the spread of the coronavirus that causes COVID-19, health experts say people should practice social distancing. In the text it also states,"Even standing 6 feet apart from one another, people can spread the virus through droplets from coughs and sneezes. To enumerate, social distancing can still result to spread of the virus.

All in all, this is why it is negative and positive for practicing social distancing.

There are some ways students can learn best while studying online.To begin with they can move distractions away from them.In the text it states"Remove any distractions from the space, and if possible, make it separate from your bed or sofa. A clear distinction between where you study and where you take breaks can help you focus."To clarify,moving distractions can help you focus.To add on,friends can help you.The text says" Saying or thinking what you’re going to do may not be enough to complete the work you have set for yourself. Sometimes telling your friends about the h.w., projects, classes, or courses you’re taking help keep you to completing them as well as posting achievements to your social media accounts. Having a community and support network of friends and family to cheer you on makes a difference."To elaborate,its good sharing what you finished.In short,these are some of the ways students can learn best while studying online.

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How to Learn Best During Online Studying

There are some ways students can learn best while studying online.
This is a good opener for what you're going to talk about, but you still need a little more of an introduction to the topic.
Studying online can be a challenge for students, but there are many ways to still learn well while working from home.

To begin with they can move distractions away from them.In the text it states"Remove any distractions from the space, and if possible, make it separate from your bed or sofa.
Make sure that you're putting space between the end of each sentence (ex. "...away from them. In the text..." instead of "...away from them.In the text.."). Since these two sentences are saying the same thing, go ahead and combine them to make it flow better.
The texts recommends that you "Remove any distractions from the space, and if possible, make it separate from your bed or sofa."

A clear distinction between where you study and where you take breaks can help you focus."
I took this part of the quotation out so that you could include more of your words and work on summarizing. So, instead of just putting the quote, you can write in your own words what you have read.
Separating the study space from the place where you relax can be helpful in focusing.

To clarify,moving distractions can help you focus.
Since your paragraph is about ways to help students focus and do well in online classes, we can assume that the reader has realized that moving the distractions can help you focus, so you don't need this sentence. Instead of saying things like "to clarify" in a new sentence, you can just add more details in a new sentence in the future.

To add on,friends can help you.The text says" Saying or thinking what you’re going to do may not be enough to complete the work you have set for yourself. Sometimes telling your friends about the h.w., projects, classes, or courses you’re taking help keep you to completing them as well as posting achievements to your social media accounts.
Again, make sure you're separating the ends of your sentences, and watch where you have quotations (make sure it's directly against the first word inside the quotations: "Saying..." instead of " Saying...")! Since this quote is kind of long, I took it out and used that as another opportunity to summarize and combine sentences.
The text also mentions that friends and social media accounts can be helpful, saying that telling them about any sort of school responsibilities you have is useful in holding you accountable and making sure you're completing your tasks.

Having a community and support network of friends and family to cheer you on makes a difference."
Having a strong support network like this can make a big difference in success, and sharing what you've accomplished is a useful way to encourage good work.

To elaborate,its good sharing what you finished.In short,these are some of the ways students can learn best while studying online.
Make sure that you leave space between a comma and the following word ("elaborate, it's..." instead of "elaborate,it's") and still make sure you're keeping sentences separate! You've done a good job elaborating on why friends and social media are useful for doing well in online classes, so the first sentence here isn't necessary. Lastly, good job using transitional phrases! However, your concluding sentence is almost identical to your opening sentence. Make sure your concluding sentence wraps up your paragraph without directly quoting the beginning. If your concluding sentence is good enough, you won't even need a phrase like "in short"!
For students everywhere, studying online is new and maybe challenging, but there are still many steps that we can take to learn well while working online.

How to Learn Best During Online Studying

Studying online can be a challenge for students, but there are many ways to still learn well while working from home. The texts recommends that you "Remove any distractions from the space, and if possible, make it separate from your bed or sofa." Separating the study space from the place where you relax can be helpful in focusing. The text also mentions that friends and social media accounts can be helpful, saying that telling them about any sort of school responsibilities you have is useful in holding you accountable and making sure you're completing your tasks. Having a strong support network like this can make a big difference in succes. s, and sharing what you've accomplished is a useful way to encourage good work. For students everywhere, studying online is new and maybe challenging, but there are still many steps that we can take to learn well while working online.

I can see you using transitional phrases and using quotes from what you've read - great job! Just make sure you're separating your sentences and be careful of your quotation placement. It can be helpful to read back over what you've written to check for any careless errors. This is a good start, keep working hard! Edited by Lainey Morris