The World for Freedom

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Franklin Tjong

P.Y.E short response

In order to prevent yourself from getting the virus, some ways to protect yourself are to wash your hands for at least 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue instead of sneezing in the air. the article states "reducing the spread of viruses. Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds." this is saying that student or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce virus spread. Furthermore, the article states "Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets. This quote is explaining that it is recommended to cough or sneeze in tissues to stay safe. This is how the article proves that there are some ways to protect yourself like washing your hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.

In order to prevent yourself from getting the virus, some ways to protect yourself are to wash your hands for at least 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue instead of sneezing in the air.

• • • Many viruses exist, so state the full name of the virus to tell the reader which one is discussed here. Make sure the verb forms are consistent — wash, cough, sneeze. Additionally, use the third person point of view (instead of “I” or “you”). This helps keep the focus on the subject and lets the reader know that this information can apply to anyone.

Edited sentence: In order to prevent people from getting the coronavirus disease (COVID-19), some ways that people can protect themselves are to wash their hands for at least 20 seconds and cough or sneeze into a tissue instead of in the air.

the article states "reducing the spread of viruses.

• • • Capitalize the first word in each sentence. This sentence is also incomplete. One way to fix this is to combine this sentence with the next sentence.

Edited sentence: To reduce the spread of the virus, the article states, “Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds.”

Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds."

• • • Good.

this is saying that student or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce virus spread.

• • • Capitalize the first word in each sentence. “student” should be plural since this sentence is about multiple people.

Edited sentence: This is saying that students or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce the spread of the virus.

Furthermore, the article states "Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets.

• • • This sentence is good except that the end of this sentence needs a quotation mark since it ends with a quote.

Edited sentence: Furthermore, the article states, “Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets.”

This quote is explaining that it is recommended to cough or sneeze in tissues to stay safe.

• • • Good.

This is how the article proves that there are some ways to protect yourself like washing your hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.

• • • This is good, but remember to avoid using second person (“yourself,” “you”) and use third person instead.

Edited sentence: This is how the article proves that there are some ways people can protect themselves, like washing their hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.

Edited paragraph:

In order to prevent people from getting the coronavirus disease (COVID-19), some ways that people can protect themselves are to wash their hands for at least 20 seconds and cough or sneeze into a tissue instead of in the air. To reduce the spread of the virus, the article states, “Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds.” This is saying that students or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce the spread of the virus. Furthermore, the article states, “Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets.” This quote is explaining that it is recommended to cough or sneeze in tissues to stay safe. This is how the article proves that there are some ways people can protect themselves like washing their hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.

Original paragraph:

In order to prevent yourself from getting the virus, some ways to protect yourself are to wash your hands for at least 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue instead of sneezing in the air. the article states "reducing the spread of viruses. Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds." this is saying that student or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce virus spread. Furthermore, the article states "Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets. This quote is explaining that it is recommended to cough or sneeze in tissues to stay safe. This is how the article proves that there are some ways to protect yourself like washing your hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.

Summary # 2

        Someways students can learn best while studying online by removing all distractions and scheduling their plans so they can do online studying. For example, the article has stated "having a dedicated space at home to take online courses can make your learning more effective. Remove any distractions from the space, and if possible" This is stating that to learn you should remove all distractions as possible. Furthermore, the article also stated ". Open your calendar and choose a predictable, reliable time that you can dedicate to watching lectures and completing assignments. This helps ensure that your courses won’t become the last thing on your to-do list. So, schedule time to study on your calendar." This quote is stating that you should make time for online studying. This is someways students can learn best while studying online by removing distractions and scheduling their plans.