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           Is police brutality real? And to what extent?
 Police brutality is a terrible and very real problem. Just because you have an authority and ability to get away with things that a normal citizen won’t doesn’t mean you should use it for personal gain and to your advantage. In America cops are supposed to protect their citizens but it seems like they’re protecting the corrupt system they’re in more. We can easily see how bad police brutality is in America by statistics and numbers. Ever since 2015, 5000 murders have been committed by cops, and most of them go off without consequences.
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       There’s a bee named Wallace’s giant bee, a size of a walnut. With a wingspan of the size of our thumbs. It lives in the Indonesian jungle and had been discovered in 1981.
        This bee is like a fictional creation. Being the largest bee and having jaws strong as a stag beetle. It had been placed in the most wanted list in 2015 in the lost species project. “It was more magnificent then I thought, even in death,” said entomologist Eli Wyman.

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 COVID and its seriousness
         COVID 19 is a pandemic right now, caused by the novel coronavirus. Symptoms could range from a dry cough to a fever, and, there sometimes could be no symptoms! Corona killed many of its patients mainly ranging from age 60+ or people with underlying health problems due to their lack of good and strong immune system. A great way to avoid this pandemic is to social distance and stay home, social distancing is the act of isolating yourself at least 6 feet from others. This is very important, especially since COVID numbers are skyrocketing right now. Although the numbers are skyrocketing right now the US still has been slower then the rest of the other countries to implement testing and safety laws. What you can do to reduce the spread of COVID is to wash your hands frequently, social distance and stay hygienic.

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   Cuba’s amazing views
-Jardines de la Reina, a 60 mile reserve in Cuba, is known for having pristine reefs, and an amazing view for scuba-diving.
+Jardines de la Reina, a 60 mile reserve in Cuba, is known for having pristine reefs, and an amazing view for scuba-diving. The reserve has many unique animals and a whole ecosystem. Some of the animals include: Many different types of sharks like the Caribean reef shark, nurse shark, whale shark, hammerheads, crocodiles, goliath groupers, and many more species. An unknown amount of Great Hammerhead sharks (not to be confused with their cousins the Hammerhead shark) use Jardines de la Reina as a pit stop on their way migrating.
 Jardines de la Reina has amazing views, unique and numerous animals, and has a flourishing ecosystem
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 Yellowstone bears
-For half a century grizzly bears have been on the endangered list, but thankfully they have been recovered. But a new concern is coming, since grizzlies are off the endangered list 3 Western states are allowed to hold strict hunting seasons for the bear.
+For half a century grizzly bears have been on the endangered list, but thankfully they have been recovered. But a new concern is coming, since grizzlies are off the endangered list 3 Western states are allowed to hold strict hunting seasons for the bear. Arguments over if grizzles can even survive a hunting,and if grizzles should be hunted for sports started to pop up, though some people claim if hunting is limited and maintained correctly hunting would not affect the population too much. The low estimate of how many Yellowstone bears are in the Greater Yellowstone area is 700 but it is more likely that there are 1,000. Overall the recovery and potential hunting of the Yellowstone Grizzly Bear was a controversial subject.

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-<br>The first snake ever found was a baby from the dinosaur age. The snake is ten centimetres long, and the snake was from 100 years ago. The snake was also from an island in the Indian Ocean. The snake got trapped in sap, and the sap hardened as the island drifted north and became a part of the country of Myanmar. Scientists also found an amber that had a piece of skin shed by the same species of snake. Finding a snake fossil was extremely rare since only fifteen had been found around the world during the dinosaur age.
+<br>The first snake ever found was a baby from the dinosaur age. The snake is ten centimeters long, and the snake was from 99 million years in the past. The snake was also from an island in the Indian Ocean. The snake got trapped in sap, and the sap hardened as the island drifted north and became a part of the country of Myanmar. Scientists also found an amber that had a piece of skin shed by the same species of snake. Finding a snake fossil was extremely rare since only fifteen had been found around the world during the dinosaur age.
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-Earth 1.5 billion years ago
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-            How was Earth 1.5 billion years ago? Well, it was vastly different from Earth as we know today. Earth 1.5 billion years ago was submerged in water everywhere except for 1 continent. But, continents starting forming after plate tectonics 'thrusted' the continent upwards.
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-COVID Sniffers
+<br>How was Earth 1.5 billion years ago?
-             As the Coronavirus is still ongoing there's a new resource to help prevent the spread of COVID, dogs. Dogs have been trained to sniff out people with COVID, with their 300 million sent receptors they have a high potential of figuring out if someone has COVID in public places like hospitals and airports where it can easily spread. Labs are being trained for 3 weeks by using an process called 'oder imprinting', what happens in this process is these labs are exposed to saliva that are positive with COVID. After, they'll be tested by picking figuring out who has COVID. This is extremely great since this can decrease the spread of the current pandemic, COVID.
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-          Source: https://www.smithsonianmag.com/smart-news/dogs-are-being-trained-detect-covid-19-180974796/
+<br>'''---Good opening with the question!'''
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+<br>Well, it was vastly different from Earth as we know today.
 <br>'''---Remember to put article titles at the beginning of all of your articles!! I added titles for the articles without them for now, but put them on the next one you do!'''
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		+	How was Earth 1.5 billion years ago? Well, it was vastly different from Earth as we know today. Earth 1.5 billion years ago was submerged in water everywhere except for 1 continent. But, continents starting forming after plate tectonics 'thrusted' the continent upwards.

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		+	COVID Sniffers
		+	As the Coronavirus is still ongoing there's a new resource to help prevent the spread of COVID, dogs. Dogs have been trained to sniff out people with COVID, with their 300 million sent receptors they have a high potential of figuring out if someone has COVID in public places like hospitals and airports where it can easily spread. Labs are being trained for 3 weeks by using an process called 'oder imprinting', what happens in this process is these labs are exposed to saliva that are positive with COVID. After, they'll be tested by picking figuring out who has COVID. This is extremely great since this can decrease the spread of the current pandemic, COVID.
		+	Source: https://www.smithsonianmag.com/smart-news/dogs-are-being-trained-detect-covid-19-180974796/
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+<br> <br>'''Are Standardized Tests Beneficial?'''
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+<br>People are starting to wonder the efficiency of standardized tests.
-People are starting to wonder the efficiency of standardized tests. Many people are realizing that these tests might be to hard on the students. The Washington Street Posts says that in Texas many of the high stake tests contain questions that are worded very poorly and vaguely. This is costing students high risks to their grades even though the test makers were the one at fault. Also, another thing found is that many ELA test’s difficulty were found 2 grades above their own. How are students supposed to expected to excel at these exams when they aren’t given the appropriate questions and texts that they were supposed to be ready for? This can extremely affect grades, as the Washington Post says kids who were usually exceeding and hard working were now suddenly failing due to the incompetence of the teachers and test makers.
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-Source: https://www.washingtonpost.com/education/2019/02/25/are-these-standardized-test-questions-too-hard-kids/
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+<br>Many people are realizing that these tests might be to hard on the students.
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+<br>'''---Edited for word choice:''' Many scientists are realizing that these tests might be too hard on the students.
-The first snake ever found was a baby from the dinosaur age. The snake is 10cm long and the snake was from 100 years ago, the snake was also from an island in the Indian Ocean. When the snake got trapped in the sap, the sap hardened as the island drifted north and became a part of Myanmar. The scientist also an amber that has a piece of skin shed by the same species of snake. Finding a snake fossil is extremely rare since only 15 had been found around the world in the dinosaur age.
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+<br>The Washington Street Posts says that in Texas many of the high stake tests contain questions that are worded very poorly and vaguely.
-Source: https://www.nationalgeographic.com/science/2018/07/first-baby-snake-amber-burma-dinosaurs-fossils-paleontology/
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