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 The story of the fox and the goat is about a fox that fell into a well and was trapped but nearby there was a goat coming to drink water and the fox hid his gloomy face and tricked the goat into jumping in saying that the water was excellent beyond belief and told the goat the water was tasty but they were stuck and the fox lied saying that he would jump off the goat's horns and and find help but he did not know that the fox was lying and he was trapped.
-Atagahi the enchanted lake
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		+	The story of the fox and the goat is about a fox that fell into a well and was trapped but nearby there was a goat coming to drink water and the fox hid his gloomy face and tricked the goat into jumping in saying that the water was excellent beyond belief and told the goat the water was tasty but they were stuck and the fox lied saying that he would jump off the goat's horns and and find help but he did not know that the fox was lying and he was trapped.

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 The Atagahi lake is a magical purple lake that heals wounds and is well hidden from hunters.
-'''***Make sure to capitalize proper nouns, like Atagahi.'''
+<br>'''***Make sure to capitalize proper nouns, like Atagahi.'''
 Since it can heal wounds, the animals that are injured go there to heal themselves.
 It is said to be so well hidden that people think it is dried up and gone. But people who watch the lake all day see it at daybreak as wide and shallow.
-'''***I split this part into 2 sentences to keep them short and sweet!'''
+<br>'''***I split this part into 2 sentences to keep them short and sweet!'''
 In the lake, there are all kinds of fish, reptiles, and birds.
-'''***I added “in the lake” for clarification. I also combined “fish, reptiles, and birds” together so you don’t say “and” twice.'''
+<br>'''***I added “in the lake” for clarification. I also combined “fish, reptiles, and birds” together so you don’t say “and” twice.'''
 The animals hide the lake since hunters being able to access it would be a danger to themselves.
-'''***I took out the first time you said "so hunters are not able to access" because you repeated that part twice.'''
+<br>'''***I took out the first time you said "so hunters are not able to access" because you repeated that part twice.'''
 In conclusion, the Atagahi lake is mystical and magical in many ways.
-'''***Make sure to put a comma after your concluding phrase like this: “In conclusion,” I added “-al” to mystic, because “mystical” is the adjective form.'''
+<br>'''***Make sure to put a comma after your concluding phrase like this: “In conclusion,” I added “-al” to mystic, because “mystical” is the adjective form.'''
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 == Comments about Atagahi, the Enchanted Lake ==
- <br> 1. Make sure you put separate your sentences out with correct punctuation (periods) and capitalizing the first letter of each sentence. Look below to see how I split up your paragraph into individual sentences so that it is easy to read!
+. Make sure you put separate your sentences out with correct punctuation (periods) and capitalizing the first letter of each sentence. Look below to see how I split up your paragraph into individual sentences so that it is easy to read!
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	<br> 1. Make sure you put separate your sentences out with correct punctuation (periods) and capitalizing the first letter of each sentence. Look below to see how I split up your paragraph into individual sentences so that it is easy to read!		<br> 1. Make sure you put separate your sentences out with correct punctuation (periods) and capitalizing the first letter of each sentence. Look below to see how I split up your paragraph into individual sentences so that it is easy to read!