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		+	learned a lot of things about this article. The number of people that have the virus increased because people are going to crowded places without masks.This shows why people are getting sick.Also I learned that people can also get the covid-19 by sneezing into someone and the droplets will go to the other person and to there lungs.This shows that u should not go near to someone.In conclusion this I what I learned from this article.
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	I learned a lot of new things from this article.For example scientists found out that some fast food wraps have chemicals and toxic inside them.This shows that u have to be careful of what u eat.Also in some of the fast food wraps their are chemicals that are called “forever chemicals”.In conclusion this is what I learned from this article.		I learned a lot of new things from this article.For example scientists found out that some fast food wraps have chemicals and toxic inside them.This shows that u have to be careful of what u eat.Also in some of the fast food wraps their are chemicals that are called “forever chemicals”.In conclusion this is what I learned from this article.
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−	I learned a lot of things about this article. The number of people that have the virus increased because people are going to crowded places without masks.This shows why people are getting sick.Also I learned that people can also get the covid-19 by sneezing into someone and the droplets will go to the other person and to there lungs.This shows that u should not go near to someone.In conclusion this I what I learned from this article.	+	I learned a lot of new things from this article.For example scientists found out that some fast food wraps have chemicals and toxic inside them.This shows that u have to be careful of what u eat.Also in some of the fast food wraps their are chemicals that are called “forever chemicals”.In conclusion this is what I learned from this article.
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		+	learned a lot of things about this article. The number of people that have the virus increased because people are going to crowded places without masks.This shows why people are getting sick.Also I learned that people can also get the covid-19 by sneezing into someone and the droplets will go to the other person and to there lungs.This shows that u should not go near to someone.In conclusion this I what I learned from this article.

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−	I learned a lot of things about this article. The number of people that have the virus increased because people are going to crowded places without masks.This shows why people are getting sick.Also I learned that people can also get the covid-19 by sneezing into someone and the droplets will go to the other person and to there lungs.~~THis~~ shows that u should not go near to someone.In conclusion this I what I learned from this article.	+	I learned a lot of things about this article. The number of people that have the virus increased because people are going to crowded places without masks.This shows why people are getting sick.Also I learned that people can also get the covid-19 by sneezing into someone and the droplets will go to the other person and to there lungs.This shows that u should not go near to someone.In conclusion this I what I learned from this article.

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		+	I learned a lot of things about this article. The number of people that have the virus increased because people are going to crowded places without masks.This shows why people are getting sick.Also I learned that people can also get the covid-19 by sneezing into someone and the droplets will go to the other person and to there lungs.THis shows that u should not go near to someone.In conclusion this I what I learned from this article.
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	I think people should stay home and not go outside where people dont where masks during pandemic for many reasons.For example in the text it says that (should I go out for a hair cut?).This means that they are making a decision whether they should go or not.Also,in the text it says that (during the coved-19 pandemic carry implication for personal and Public health ,in some cases life or death).This means that people are going to places where people are not wearing face masks and getting sick.In conclusion this is why i think that people should stay home instead of going outside and spread the covid-19 to other people like there family and relatives.		I think people should stay home and not go outside where people dont where masks during pandemic for many reasons.For example in the text it says that (should I go out for a hair cut?).This means that they are making a decision whether they should go or not.Also,in the text it says that (during the coved-19 pandemic carry implication for personal and Public health ,in some cases life or death).This means that people are going to places where people are not wearing face masks and getting sick.In conclusion this is why i think that people should stay home instead of going outside and spread the covid-19 to other people like there family and relatives.

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−	I think people should stay home and not go outside during pandemic for many reasons.For example in the text it says that (should I go out for a hair cut?).This means that they are making a decision whether they should go or not.Also,in the text it says that (during the coved-19 pandemic carry implication for personal and Public health ,in some cases life or death).This means that people are going to places where people are not wearing face masks and getting sick.In conclusion this is why i think that people should stay home instead of going outside and spread the covid-19 to other people like there family and relatives.	+	I think people should stay home and not go outside where people dont where masks during pandemic for many reasons.For example in the text it says that (should I go out for a hair cut?).This means that they are making a decision whether they should go or not.Also,in the text it says that (during the coved-19 pandemic carry implication for personal and Public health ,in some cases life or death).This means that people are going to places where people are not wearing face masks and getting sick.In conclusion this is why i think that people should stay home instead of going outside and spread the covid-19 to other people like there family and relatives.

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−	I think people should stay home and not go outside during pandemic for many reasons.For example in the text it says that (should I go out for a hair cut?).This means that they are making a decision whether they should go or not.Also,in the text it says that (during the coved-19 pandemic carry implication for personal and Public health ,in some cases life or death).This means that people are going to places where people are not wearing face masks and getting sick.In conclusion this is why ~~it issue to~~ stay home.	+	I think people should stay home and not go outside during pandemic for many reasons.For example in the text it says that (should I go out for a hair cut?).This means that they are making a decision whether they should go or not.Also,in the text it says that (during the coved-19 pandemic carry implication for personal and Public health ,in some cases life or death).This means that people are going to places where people are not wearing face masks and getting sick.In conclusion this is why i think that people should stay home instead of going outside and spread the covid-19 to other people like there family and relatives.

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		+	I think people should stay home and not go outside during pandemic for many reasons.For example in the text it says that (should I go out for a hair cut?).This means that they are making a decision whether they should go or not.Also,in the text it says that (during the coved-19 pandemic carry implication for personal and Public health ,in some cases life or death).This means that people are going to places where people are not wearing face masks and getting sick.In conclusion this is why it issue to stay home.
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	<br> '''Original Article'''<br />		<br> '''Original Article'''<br />
	<br> Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. Captain crewe said he would give anything that Sara wanted.For example in the text says Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired.This shows that Captain Crew really cares about Sara.Also captain Crew did a lot of things for Sara.This is another reason.In conclusion this is why I think Captain crew and Sara show their love in many ways.<br />		<br> Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. Captain crewe said he would give anything that Sara wanted.For example in the text says Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired.This shows that Captain Crew really cares about Sara.Also captain Crew did a lot of things for Sara.This is another reason.In conclusion this is why I think Captain crew and Sara show their love in many ways.<br />

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 <br> '''Original Article'''<br />
 <br> Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. Captain crewe said he would give anything that Sara wanted.For example in the text says Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired.This shows that Captain Crew really cares about Sara.Also captain Crew did a lot of things for Sara.This is another reason.In conclusion this is why I think Captain crew and Sara show their love in many ways.<br />
 <br> Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. <br />
 <br> ***Good! <br />

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−	Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. Captain crewe said he would give anything that Sara wanted.For example in the text says Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired.This shows that Captain Crew really cares about Sara.Also captain Crew did a lot of things for Sara.This is another reason.In conclusion this is why I think Captain crew and Sara show their love in many ways.	+	<br> '''Original Article'''<br />
−		+	<br> Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. Captain crewe said he would give anything that Sara wanted.For example in the text says Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired.This shows that Captain Crew really cares about Sara.Also captain Crew did a lot of things for Sara.This is another reason.In conclusion this is why I think Captain crew and Sara show their love in many ways.<br />
		+	<br> Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. <br />
		+	<br> ***Good! <br />
		+	<br> Captain crewe said he would give anything that Sara wanted.<br />
		+	<br> ***Crewe should be capitalized. Let's change this sentence a tiny bit: Captain Crewe said he would give Sara anything she wanted.<br />
		+	<br> For example in the text says Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired. <br />
		+	<br> ***This sentence is very good, but we have to add in a few things. First, there should be a comma after "For example". Then, it should be "in the text it says" (you just forgot the word "it"). Lastly, we need quotation marks for the quote. Edited sentence: For example, in the text it says that Captain Crewe was a "rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired." <br />
		+	<br> This shows that Captain Crew really cares about Sara. <br />
		+	<br> ***Good! But don't forget to hit the space bar before you start a new sentence. <br />
		+	<br> Also captain Crew did a lot of things for Sara. <br />
		+	<br> ***I want to combine this sentence with the next one. It might look something like: Another reason is that Captain Crewe did a lot of things for Sara. <br />
		+	<br> In conclusion this is why I think Captain crew and Sara show their love in many ways. <br />
		+	<br> ***In formal/argumentative writing, you want to avoid the phrase "I think" as it makes you sound unsure in proving your point. Let's try: In conclusion, Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. <br />
		+	<br> '''Final Edits'''<br />
		+	<br> Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. Captain Crewe said he would give Sara anything she wanted. For example, in the text it says that Captain Crewe was a "rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired." This shows that Captain Crew really cares about Sara. Another reason is that Captain Crewe did a lot of things for Sara. In conclusion, Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. <br />
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+Captain Crewe and Sara show their love in many ways. Captain crewe said he would give anything that Sara wanted.For example in the text says Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired.This shows that Captain Crew really cares about Sara.Also captain Crew did a lot of things for Sara.This is another reason.In conclusion this is why I think Captain crew and Sara show their love in many ways.
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 <br> Based on the story i think that  Demi is a nice guy for many reasons..For example in the text it says that (Demi is one of the children who show painful the effect of intellegent love and care).This shows that demi is a nice guy.Another reason is in the text it says that (he was unusuallybright and beautiful).this is another reason why demi is nice.In conclusion this is why i think Demi is nice.<br />