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-                                                                      ESSAY ON WHALES
 Of all the creatures in the earth, none can compare to the amazingly and humongous interesting mammals.

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		+	ESSAY ON WHALES
		+	Of all the creatures in the earth, none can compare to the amazingly and humongous interesting mammals.
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		+	Of a ll the fish and mammals, nothing currently on the earth compares to the size of the whale. To begin with a whale is 82 ft and weighs about 8,000-12,000 lbs. To add on, whales eat up to 6,000 lbs of krill in 1 day.
		+	Lastly, whales breathe by using a hole on top of their body. In conclusion, whales have many physical characteristic.
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		+	The whale is a very cool animal that lives in many different places. To start with, it is one of the few animals to live on water. Another way is since they live in water they must use their blow holes to breathe. Lastly, whales were evolved millions of years ago to live in salt water. In final analysis, whales live in many habitats.
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		+	Many whales are in danger by many different sort of things. To start with, whales have been on the watched endangered list since 1987. Also, all over the world whale were hunted for their blubber and oil. Lastly, they are currently on the Japanese hunt whales for whales meat and tradition. In conclusion, whales have many special circumstances and they are endangered as well.
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		+	In final analysis, of all the creatures on the earth, none can compare to the amazingly humongous mammal. I think whales are very fascinating and loving animals.
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	The goat and the fox were very different and similar for may reasons. To begin with, they were different because, the goat was very kind And foolish while the fox was very mean and smart. Also, they were similar because, they were both trying to escape/get out of the well after drinking water. In conclusion, the goat and the fox are very similar and different.		The goat and the fox were very different and similar for may reasons. To begin with, they were different because, the goat was very kind And foolish while the fox was very mean and smart. Also, they were similar because, they were both trying to escape/get out of the well after drinking water. In conclusion, the goat and the fox are very similar and different.

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	The goat and the fox were very different and similar for may reasons. To begin with, they were different because, the goat was very kind And foolish while the fox was very mean and smart. Also, they were similar because, they were both trying to escape/get out of the well after drinking water. In conclusion, the goat and the fox are very similar and different.		The goat and the fox were very different and similar for may reasons. To begin with, they were different because, the goat was very kind And foolish while the fox was very mean and smart. Also, they were similar because, they were both trying to escape/get out of the well after drinking water. In conclusion, the goat and the fox are very similar and different.

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 The goat and the fox were very different and similar  for may reasons. To begin with, they were different because, the goat was very kind And foolish  while the fox was very mean and smart. Also, they were similar because, they were both trying to escape/get out of the well after drinking water. In conclusion, the goat and the fox are very similar and different.
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 <br><br> In coclusion, the fox and got were different and similar in many ways. One way they were different is, they were Bothe the oppisite of each other. They were also similar because they were both in the same mess. If I were the fox I wouldn't miss treat the poor foolish gat cause that isn't nice. If I were the goat instead, I would try and figure out what would happen if I helped the fox.

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	The goat and the fox were very different and similar for may reasons. To begin with, they were different because, the goat was very kind And foolish while the fox was very mean and smart. Also, they were similar because, they were both trying to escape/get out of the well after drinking water. In conclusion, the goat and the fox are very similar and different.		The goat and the fox were very different and similar for may reasons. To begin with, they were different because, the goat was very kind And foolish while the fox was very mean and smart. Also, they were similar because, they were both trying to escape/get out of the well after drinking water. In conclusion, the goat and the fox are very similar and different.

−	<br><br> To begin with, the fox and the goat are different in many ~~reasons~~. One way they were different is that the goat was nice enough to help the fox but, she was very foolish to help the fox. The text states “ When the goat upbraided him for breaking his promise, he turned around and cried out, “You foolish old fellow! If you had as many brains in your head as you have hairs in your beard, you would never have gone down before you had inspected the way up, nor have exposed yourself to dangers from which you had no means of escape.” This shows that the goat is different from the fox. Another way is	+	<br><br> To begin with, the fox and the goat are different in many ways. One way they were different is that the goat was nice enough to help the fox but, she was very foolish to help the fox. The text states “ When the goat upbraided him for breaking his promise, he turned around and cried out, “You foolish old fellow! If you had as many brains in your head as you have hairs in your beard, you would never have gone down before you had inspected the way up, nor have exposed yourself to dangers from which you had no means of escape.” This shows that the goat is different from the fox. Another way is, the fox was the opposite of the goat. The fox was mean but smart. According to the story it says "If,” said he, “you will place your forefeet upon the wall and bend your head, I will run up your back and escape, and will help you out afterwards.” The goat readily assented and the fox leaped upon his back. Steadying himself with the Goat’s horns, he safely reached the mouth of the well and made off as fast as he could. " To clarify, the fox was very mean and outsmarted the goat. In conclusion, the goat and the fox are different in many ways.
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		+	<br><br> To add on, the fox and goat are also similar in may ways. For instance, the goat went to the well to get water like the fox. The story says "A goat, overcome with thirst, came to the same well, and seeing the fox, inquired if the water was good." This means, both the fox and goat wanted water so they went to the well. Another reason they are similar is, they both were trying to escape the well after the fox was stuck and the goat drank water. The story "The Fox and the Goat" states "The Goat, mindful only of his thirst, thoughtlessly jumped down, but just as he drank, the fox informed him of the difficulty they were both in and suggested a scheme for their common escape." So, the both of them were sick in the well not knowing how to get out. In final analysis, the goat and fox were similar in may ways as well.
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		+	<br><br> In coclusion, the fox and got were different and similar in many ways. One way they were different is, they were Bothe the oppisite of each other. They were also similar because they were both in the same mess. If I were the fox I wouldn't miss treat the poor foolish gat cause that isn't nice. If I were the goat instead, I would try and figure out what would happen if I helped the fox.

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		+	The goat and the fox were very different and similar for may reasons. To begin with, they were different because, the goat was very kind And foolish while the fox was very mean and smart. Also, they were similar because, they were both trying to escape/get out of the well after drinking water. In conclusion, the goat and the fox are very similar and different.
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		+	<br><br> To begin with, the fox and the goat are different in many reasons. One way they were different is that the goat was nice enough to help the fox but, she was very foolish to help the fox. The text states “ When the goat upbraided him for breaking his promise, he turned around and cried out, “You foolish old fellow! If you had as many brains in your head as you have hairs in your beard, you would never have gone down before you had inspected the way up, nor have exposed yourself to dangers from which you had no means of escape.” This shows that the goat is different from the fox. Another way is
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	I think the farmer was irritated and displeased by what the raven said to him because the raven said that it was done helping the farmer and the raven kept on saying that he helped the cattle and the raven would bring them home.		I think the farmer was irritated and displeased by what the raven said to him because the raven said that it was done helping the farmer and the raven kept on saying that he helped the cattle and the raven would bring them home.

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-To start, the farmer was irritated because raven claimed it took care of the cattle. <br>
+To start, the farmer was irritated because the raven claimed it took care of the cattle. <br>
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     According to the story, the farmer was irritated and displeased by what the raven said to him. The raven said that it was done helping the farmer and that he helped bring the cattle home.
-   To start, the farmer was irritated because raven claimed it took care of the cattle. The text states, "One evening, as some cattle were wending their way home, a raven rode on the horns of a bull in the herd; and as he approached the cottage, cried to the farmer, 'Friend, my work for the day is over; you may now take charge of your cattle.' 'What was your work?' asked the farmer. 'Why,' said the raven, 'the arduous task of watching these cattle and bringing them home.'" his means that the farmer was irritated by the raven and didn't like that he was coming to the farm just to pretend to help. To add on, the farmer was also displeased because the raven was lying. The farmer was also not happy that the raven was trying to look good and steal the credit for all the hard work that he did. The text states, "'Am I to understand you have been doing all the work for me?' said the farmer. 'Certainly,' said the raven, and flew away with a laugh. Quoth the farmer with surprise, 'How many there are that take credit for things which they have never done!'" This shows that the farmer was very displeased because he worked really hard on taking care of the cattle and making sure they all came home, but the raven was trying to take all the credit.
+   To start, the farmer was irritated because the raven claimed it took care of the cattle. The text states, "One evening, as some cattle were wending their way home, a raven rode on the horns of a bull in the herd; and as he approached the cottage, cried to the farmer, 'Friend, my work for the day is over; you may now take charge of your cattle.' 'What was your work?' asked the farmer. 'Why,' said the raven, 'the arduous task of watching these cattle and bringing them home.'" his means that the farmer was irritated by the raven and didn't like that he was coming to the farm just to pretend to help. To add on, the farmer was also displeased because the raven was lying. The farmer was also not happy that the raven was trying to look good and steal the credit for all the hard work that he did. The text states, "'Am I to understand you have been doing all the work for me?' said the farmer. 'Certainly,' said the raven, and flew away with a laugh. Quoth the farmer with surprise, 'How many there are that take credit for things which they have never done!'" This shows that the farmer was very displeased because he worked really hard on taking care of the cattle and making sure they all came home, but the raven was trying to take all the credit.
     In conclusion, the farmer was irritated and displeased by what the raven had to say to him. The farmer felt this way because of how disrespectful the raven behaved. If I were the farmer, I would be really mad and annoyed because I would have worked pretty hard for everything. <br>
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 I think the farmer was irritated and displeased by what the raven said to him because the raven said that it was done helping the farmer and the raven kept on saying that he helped the cattle and the raven would bring them home.
 <br><br> To start with, the farmer was irritated because when the farmer asked what the raven it  helped with it was saying that he was done for the day because helped with the cattle and took care of them. The story states "... One evening, as some cattle were wending their way home, a raven rode on the horns of a bull in the herd; and as he approached the cottage, cried to the farmer, "Friend, my work for the day is over; you may now take charge of your cattle." "What was your work?" asked the farmer. "Why," said the raven, "the arduous task of watching these cattle and bringing them home." This means, the farmer was irritated by the raven and didn't like why he was coming to the farm so it could just pretend it was helping. To add on, the farmer was also displeased because the raven was lying and was saying stuff that wasn't true. The farmer was also not happy how the raven was trying to look good and steal all the hard work that he did. According to the story it says "... "Am I to understand you have been doing all the work for me?" said the farmer. "Certainly," said the raven, and flew away with a laugh. Quoth the farmer with surprise, "How many there are that take credit for things which they have never done!" This shows, the farmer was very displeased because he worked really hard on taking care of the bull and making sure they would all come home but the raven was trying to take all the credit.
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		+	I think the farmer was irritated and displeased by what the raven said to him because the raven said that it was done helping the farmer and the raven kept on saying that he helped the cattle and the raven would bring them home.
		+	<br><br> To start with, the farmer was irritated because when the farmer asked what the raven it helped with it was saying that he was done for the day because helped with the cattle and took care of them. The story states "... One evening, as some cattle were wending their way home, a raven rode on the horns of a bull in the herd; and as he approached the cottage, cried to the farmer, "Friend, my work for the day is over; you may now take charge of your cattle." "What was your work?" asked the farmer. "Why," said the raven, "the arduous task of watching these cattle and bringing them home." This means, the farmer was irritated by the raven and didn't like why he was coming to the farm so it could just pretend it was helping. To add on, the farmer was also displeased because the raven was lying and was saying stuff that wasn't true. The farmer was also not happy how the raven was trying to look good and steal all the hard work that he did. According to the story it says "... "Am I to understand you have been doing all the work for me?" said the farmer. "Certainly," said the raven, and flew away with a laugh. Quoth the farmer with surprise, "How many there are that take credit for things which they have never done!" This shows, the farmer was very displeased because he worked really hard on taking care of the bull and making sure they would all come home but the raven was trying to take all the credit.
		+	<br><br> In conclusion, the farmer was irritated and displeased by what the raven had to say to him. The farmer wasplike this because of how disrespectful the raven was being. If I were the farmer, I would be really mad and annoyed because I would have worked pretty hard for everything.
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	The monkey was able to escape himself from his unlawful sentence by use his fiddle and to play a song. He also, scared fo the animals and they all went to new places. This happened because the lion told the monkey that he would give the monkey his whole kingdom and whatever he wanted but he refused and disobeyed so everyone was surprised an left because they were scared.		The monkey was able to escape himself from his unlawful sentence by use his fiddle and to play a song. He also, scared fo the animals and they all went to new places. This happened because the lion told the monkey that he would give the monkey his whole kingdom and whatever he wanted but he refused and disobeyed so everyone was surprised an left because they were scared.

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 The monkey was able to escape himself from his unlawful sentence by use his fiddle and to play a song. He also, scared fo the animals and they all went to new places. This happened because the lion told the monkey that he would give the monkey his whole kingdom and whatever he wanted but he refused and disobeyed so everyone was surprised an left because they were scared.
 <br><br> To begin with, when the monkey was there, he was charged with a sentence. So, he was still allowed to have his bow and arrow and he was also till able to play his fiddle. When he started playing, he mad everyone dance wit the humor of the fiddle. The text states “... He was a master player of his time, and in addition to this came the wonderful power of his charmed fiddle. Thus, when he struck the first note of "Cockcrow" upon it, the court began at once to show an unusual and spontaneous liveliness, and before he came to the first waltzing turn of the old tune the whole court was dancing like a whirlwind. Over and over, quicker and quicker, sounded the tune of "Cockcrow" on the charmed fiddle, until some of the dancers, exhausted, fell down, although still keeping their feet in motion.” This shows, he was able to make everyone move and dance to have fun so they were all now in a good mood but, the monkey hadn’t even noticed because he was too busy playing strongly. To add on, when both the lion and wolf asked him to stop he didn’t really hear so ignored them without knowing. But the second time, the lion was desperate at to the monkey he would give the monkey his kingdom and everything but he refused and didn’t want the request. According to the text it says “... Wolf was the first to cry out in pleading tones breathlessly, "Please stop, Cousin Monkey! For love's sake, please stop!"But Monkey did not even hear him. Over and over sounded the resistless waltz of "Cockcrow.” After a while, Lion showed signs of fatigue, and when he had gone the round once more with his young lion wife, he growled as he passed Monkey, "My whole kingdom is yours, ape, if you just stop playing.""I do not want it," answered Monkey, "but withdraw the sentence and give me my bow and arrow, and you, Wolf, acknowledge that you stole it from me... The court and other animals were so afraid that he might begin again that they hastily disbanded to new parts of the world.” To clarify, because the monkey didn’t want the trade/request, all the court people moved to different places because they were afraid about what would happen net so they all left immediately.
 <br><br> In final analysis, the monkey was able to escape from his unlawful sentence. One way was he used his fiddle to play a song and for some reason his fiddle playing pleased the court people and they started to dance until their feet hurt. Another way he escaped it was since he obeyed the offer the lion king gave to him, everyone was scared about what would happen next if they kept fighting like that so man people lef the town or place because of it. If i were in the monkeys position, I would never have thought that I would ave been able to escape a sentence so I would definitely feel grateful, confused, relived and definitely also feel a little scared if the animal would come back and wanted to go to court again.