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← Older revision		Revision as of 20:45, 25 June 2020
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	'''Make sure to use these templates for your three sentences in your paragraph about Schippeitaro. Fill in the blanks with your answers where the ________ are.		'''Make sure to use these templates for your three sentences in your paragraph about Schippeitaro. Fill in the blanks with your answers where the ________ are.
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		+	The first sentence that explains
		+	what Cinderella got from her fairy god mother is that the fairy god mother gave her as a wish was gold cloths. The second sentence that explains what did Cinderella get from her fairy god mother is that she was given two buitiful shoes ever made.

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 See how I filled in the blanks in the template I created for you under the "For your Johnny-cake paragraph" heading? This is an example of a good paragraph. Your first sentence should answer the question with a '''specific answer.''' This is why your first sentence in your original paragraph isn't needed. The edited paragraph also shows you how to put a quote from the story in. Just find a sentence from the story that helps answer the question and put it in your paragraph!
-== For your Schippeitaro paragraph: ==
+== For your Cinderella paragraph: ==
-Sentence 1: Schippeitaro captured the Cat King by ____________.
+Sentence 1: The fairy God-Mother gave Cinderella  ____________.
 Sentence 2: According to the story, "______________."
 Sentence 3: This proves that ______________.
 '''Make sure to use these templates for your three sentences in your paragraph about Schippeitaro. Fill in the blanks with your answers where the ________ are.

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 See how I filled in the blanks in the template I created for you under the "For your Johnny-cake paragraph" heading? This is an example of a good paragraph. Your first sentence should answer the question with a '''specific answer.''' This is why your first sentence in your original paragraph isn't needed. The edited paragraph also shows you how to put a quote from the story in. Just find a sentence from the story that helps answer the question and put it in your paragraph!
 Sentence 1: Schippeitaro captured the Cat King by ____________.
 Sentence 2: According to the story, "______________."

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	See how I filled in the blanks in the template I created for you under the "For your Johnny-cake paragraph" heading? This is an example of a good paragraph. Your first sentence should answer the question with a '''specific answer.''' This is why your first sentence in your original paragraph isn't needed. The edited paragraph also shows you how to put a quote from the story in. Just find a sentence from the story that helps answer the question and put it in your paragraph!		See how I filled in the blanks in the template I created for you under the "For your Johnny-cake paragraph" heading? This is an example of a good paragraph. Your first sentence should answer the question with a '''specific answer.''' This is why your first sentence in your original paragraph isn't needed. The edited paragraph also shows you how to put a quote from the story in. Just find a sentence from the story that helps answer the question and put it in your paragraph!
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		+	Sentence 1: Schippeitaro captured the Cat King by ____________.
		+	Sentence 2: According to the story, "______________."
		+	Sentence 3: This proves that ______________.
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		+	'''Make sure to use these templates for your three sentences in your paragraph about Schippeitaro. Fill in the blanks with your answers where the ________ are.

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	Johnny-cake feels that he can win against every character in a race. According to the story, he says, “I've outrun an old man, and an old woman, and a little boy, and two well-diggers, and two ditch-diggers, and a bear, and a wolf, and I can outrun you too-o-o.” This proves that Johnny-cake feels he can win every race, because he has won in the past.		Johnny-cake feels that he can win against every character in a race. According to the story, he says, “I've outrun an old man, and an old woman, and a little boy, and two well-diggers, and two ditch-diggers, and a bear, and a wolf, and I can outrun you too-o-o.” This proves that Johnny-cake feels he can win every race, because he has won in the past.
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		+	See how I filled in the blanks in the template I created for you under the "For your Johnny-cake paragraph" heading? This is an example of a good paragraph. Your first sentence should answer the question with a '''specific answer.''' This is why your first sentence in your original paragraph isn't needed. The edited paragraph also shows you how to put a quote from the story in. Just find a sentence from the story that helps answer the question and put it in your paragraph!

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 <br> Sentence 3: This proves that Johnny-cake feels ____________, because __________.
-        There are a few facts that explain
+== Johnny-cake ==
-how Johnny cake feels about winning against people in a race. According to the story I think that Johnny cake feels good about winning people in races because he said he would not lose against him.These are all the facts that explain how does Johnny feel about winning a race against other people.
+Please make sure to see my edited paragraph below:

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 == For your Johnny-cake paragraph: ==
 <br> '''Please add your answers right into this to make your next paragraph:
-<br> Sentence 1: Johnny-cake feels that  ____________.
+<br> Sentence 1: Johnny-cake feels that  _____________
 <br> Sentence 2: According to the story, "____________." ''' (Make sure you use a quote from the story and put quotation marks around the quote. Quotation marks go around a sentence that you have copied word-for-word from the story.)
 <br> Sentence 3: This proves that Johnny-cake feels ____________, because __________.

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 Jack became a very rich man by making a girl who was very rich, but not able to talk, laugh.
-    '''Please notice that I took out your first sentence! The kind of sentences that you keep using for your first sentence aren't needed, so start with sentences like your second sentence, that answer the question! I used "rich man" instead of "rich boy," because in the story, Jack doesn't become rich till he is a man and marries the rich man's daughter. Also, '''your second sentence is a run-on sentence, which means it is too long and should be split into 3 sentences.'''
+    '''Please notice that I took out your first sentence! The kind of sentences that you keep using for your first sentence aren't needed, so start with sentences like your second sentence, that answer the question!''' I used "rich man" instead of "rich boy," because in the story, Jack doesn't become rich till he is a man and marries the rich man's daughter. Also, '''your second sentence is a run-on sentence, which means it is too long and should be split into 3 sentences.'''
 According to the story, the girl was not able to talk until someone made her laugh, and Jack made her laugh.

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 <br> '''Please ask me questions if you don't understand something that I've said!''' I'm excited to see your next paragraph!
-                  A few things that have describe that how Jack became a very rich boy
+Original paragraph:
-from poor. According to the passage the poor became a very rich boy is that because Jack was able to make the girl that was very rich but not able to talk laugh and the story said she will not be able to talk until someone makes her laugh and Jake made the girl that was rich laugh so the girl that was very rich but could not talk but Jake made her laugh so when they grew up they married and so the girl was rich and now can talk so Jake became a very wealthy man. These are all the details that explain how did the young poor boy become a very rich and wealthy man.
+A few things that have describe that how Jack became a very rich boy from poor. According to the passage the poor became a very rich boy is that because Jack was able to make the girl that was very rich but not able to talk laugh and the story said she will not be able to talk until someone makes her laugh and Jake made the girl that was rich laugh so the girl that was very rich but could not talk but Jake made her laugh so when they grew up they married and so the girl was rich and now can talk so Jake became a very wealthy man. These are all the details that explain how did the young poor boy become a very rich and wealthy man.
 == For your Johnny-cake paragraph: ==
 <br> '''Please add your answers right into this to make your next paragraph:
 <br> Sentence 1: Johnny-cake feels that  ____________.
-<br> Sentence 2: According to the story, "____________."
+<br> Sentence 2: According to the story, "____________." ''' (Make sure you use a quote from the story and put quotation marks around the quote. Quotation marks go around a sentence that you have copied word-for-word from the story.)
-<br> Sentence 3: This proves that Johnny-cake feels ____________, because __________.'''
+<br> '''Sentence 3: This proves that Johnny-cake feels ____________, because __________.'''