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 <br> Just 1 Hour of Playing A Game <br />
 <br> ***Good title! Sounds intriguing. <br />
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 Sharks
     Sharks are very interesting, so these are cool fact about sharks. Did you know that sharks aren't actually, sharks? There actually fishes that weigh 2.5 tons or more! Another cool fact about sharks is that they eat humans, only because they think that they are seals. The main reason why that sharks eat seals, is because sharks favorite meal is seals. The last thing that sharks can do is sharks can actually eat other sharks, and when they mate, they let the babies alone to live by themselves! These are some cool interesting facts about sharks.
-https://www.nationalgeographic.com/animals/fish/g/great-white-shark/
+https://www.nationalgeographic.com/animals/fish/g/great-white-shar

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-Just 1 Hour of Playing A Game
+<br> Just 1 Hour of Playing A Game <br />
+<br> ***Good title! Sounds intriguing. <br />
-     Scientists from the University of Electronic Science say that 1 hour of playing games help the brain be active. The scientists got 29 males to play a game called, League Of Legends. Some of the kids have been playing for at least 2 years, the rest of them have been playing fewer than 6 months. The group of 2 years were in the top of the players, this is relevant because this proves that the kids that have more experience are better. And this can help the brain because the brain focuses more. But the people that has less experience only got to the bottom 11%. The reason why they came at the bottom was because they weren't focused. This shows that playing a game in 1 hour can help your attention and help you focus more.
+<br> '''Original Article'''<br />
+<br> Scientists from the University of Electronic Science say that 1 hour of playing games help the brain be active. The scientists got 29 males to play a game called, League Of Legends. Some of the kids have been playing for at least 2 years, the rest of them have been playing fewer than 6 months. The group of 2 years were in the top of the players, this is relevant because this proves that the kids that have more experience are better. And this can help the brain because the brain focuses more. But the people that has less experience only got to the bottom 11%. The reason why they came at the bottom was because they weren't focused. This shows that playing a game in 1 hour can help your attention and help you focus more. <br />
-https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/320943.php
+<br> Source: https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/320943.php <br />
+<br> '''The Edits'''<br />
+<br> Scientists from the University of Electronic Science say that 1 hour of playing games help the brain be active. <br />
+<br> ***Small edit for word choice: Scientists from the University of Electronic Science say that 1 hour of playing games helps the brain stay active. <br />
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 Largest Bee

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 Largest Bee
 <br> ***This title is very simple; let's spice it up a bit! Edited title: Largest Bee Is The Size Of A Walnut! <br />
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 https://www.dogonews.com/2019/7/6/national-ice-cream-month-has-begun

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 Largest Bee
+<br> ***This title is very simple; let's spice it up a bit! Edited title: Largest Bee Is The Size Of A Walnut! <br />
-   There’s a bee named Wallace’s giant bee, a size of a walnut. With a wingspan of the size of our thumbs. It lives in the Indonesian jungle and had been discovered in 1981.
+<br> '''Original Article'''<br />
-This bee is like a fictional creation. Being the largest bee and having jaws strong as a stag beetle. It had been placed in the most wanted list in 2015 in the lost species project. “It was more magnificent then I thought, even in death,” said entomologist Eli Wyman.
+<br> There’s a bee named Wallace’s giant bee, a size of a walnut. With a wingspan of the size of our thumbs. It lives in the Indonesian jungle and had been discovered in 1981. This bee is like a fictional creation. Being the largest bee and having jaws strong as a stag beetle. It had been placed in the most wanted list in 2015 in the lost species project. “It was more magnificent then I thought, even in death,” said entomologist Eli Wyman. <br />
+<br> '''The Edits'''<br />
+<br> There’s a bee named Wallace’s giant bee, a size of a walnut. <br />
+<br> ***Edited sentence: There’s a bee named Wallace’s giant bee, which is the size of a walnut. <br />
+<br> With a wingspan of the size of our thumbs. <br />
 <br> Spiders <br />

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 Largest Bee
 There’s a bee named Wallace’s giant bee, a size of a walnut. With a wingspan of the size of our thumbs. It lives in the Indonesian jungle and had been discovered in 1981.
 This bee is like a fictional creation. Being the largest bee and having jaws strong as a stag beetle. It had been placed in the most wanted list in 2015 in the lost species project. “It was more magnificent then I thought, even in death,” said entomologist Eli Wyman.

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 <br> Spiders <br />
 <br> ***Let's make this title a little more interesting! Maybe the one you had from before: Spiders Can Be Mean <br />
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 https://www.washingtontimes.com/news/2019/jul/30/will-any-candidate-say-a-curse-word-bookies-take-w/

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 <br> The Black Rhinos <br />
 <br> ***Good. <br />
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-Spiders

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-The Black Rhinos
+<br> The Black Rhinos <br />
-     The black rhino is a species that is currently about to go extinct, and it is critically endangered. Black rhinos are smaller than other rhinos in Africa. Around the 20th century, that is the time when the rhinos were dramatically decreasing, and the animals had no say in whether they wanted to die or live. Some companies want the black rhinos to make a recovery so animals don't go extinct, and we never see them again, but some people still kill them, for their horns, to sell off of the black market, which won't help at all if you really think about it. But after awhile, the species that was about to die off, tried their best to come back, and they did, and doubled there amount to 5400. But the bad people who are just greedy, might try again to kill the rhinos.
+<br> ***Good. <br />
-https://www.worldwildlife.org/species/black-rhino
+<br> '''Original Article'''<br />
+<br> The black rhino is a species that is currently about to go extinct, and it is critically endangered. Black rhinos are smaller than other rhinos in Africa. Around the 20th century, that is the time when the rhinos were dramatically decreasing, and the animals had no say in whether they wanted to die or live. Some companies want the black rhinos to make a recovery so animals don't go extinct, and we never see them again, but some people still kill them, for their horns, to sell off of the black market, which won't help at all if you really think about it. But after awhile, the species that was about to die off, tried their best to come back, and they did, and doubled there amount to 5400. But the bad people who are just greedy, might try again to kill the rhinos. <br />
+<br> https://www.worldwildlife.org/species/black-rhino <br />
+<br> The black rhino is a species that is currently about to go extinct, and it is critically endangered. <br />
 <br> Spiders can be mean <br />

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		+	The Black Rhinos
		+	The black rhino is a species that is currently about to go extinct, and it is critically endangered. Black rhinos are smaller than other rhinos in Africa. Around the 20th century, that is the time when the rhinos were dramatically decreasing, and the animals had no say in whether they wanted to die or live. Some companies want the black rhinos to make a recovery so animals don't go extinct, and we never see them again, but some people still kill them, for their horns, to sell off of the black market, which won't help at all if you really think about it. But after awhile, the species that was about to die off, tried their best to come back, and they did, and doubled there amount to 5400. But the bad people who are just greedy, might try again to kill the rhinos.
		+	https://www.worldwildlife.org/species/black-rhino
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	<br> Spiders can be mean <br />		<br> Spiders can be mean <br />
	<br> ***The first letter of each words needs to be capitalized: Spiders Can Be Mean <br />		<br> ***The first letter of each words needs to be capitalized: Spiders Can Be Mean <br />