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 '''Original:'''
    The Fox and the Goat are two different animals. The Goat is nice and the Fox is selfish because he breaks is promise.  The Goat doesn't break his promise.
                      To begin with, the Goat and Fox are different. I think this because the Goat agreed to help the Fox. But instead of helping the Goat, it just left. In the story,"the fox informed him of the difficulty they were both in and suggested a scheme for their common escape. “If,” said he, “you will place your forefeet upon the wall and bend your head, I will run up your back and escape, and will help you out afterwards.” The goat readily assented and the fox leaped upon his back. Steadying himself with the Goat’s horns, he safely reached the mouth of the well and made off as fast as he could." It also says that the Fox leaves without helping the goat. This is one reason why I think that they are different.
                        I think that the Goat is different because the Goat keeps his promise. According to the story, "they were both in and suggested a scheme for their common escape. “If,” said he, “you will place your forefeet upon the wall and bend your head, I will run up your back and escape, and will help you out afterwards.” The goat readily assented and the fox leaped upon his back. Steadying himself with the Goat’s horns, he safely reached the mouth of the well and made off as fast as he could. When the goat upbraided him for breaking his promise, he turned around and cried out, “You foolish old fellow! If you had as many brains in your head as you have hairs in your beard, you would never have gone down before you had inspected the way up, nor have exposed yourself to dangers from which you had no means of escape.” This is another reason why I think the Goat is different.
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   The Fox and the Goat are two different animals. The Goat is nice and the Fox is selfish because he breaks is promise.  The Goat doesn't break his promise.
-*** These sentences could be combined. Let's try: "The fox and the goat are two different animals. While the goat is nice and keeps his promise, the fox is selfish and breaks his.
+*** These sentences could be combined. Let's try: "The fox and the goat are two different animals. While the goat is nice and keeps his promise, the fox is selfish and breaks his promise.
    To begin with, the Goat and Fox are different
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 I think this because the Goat agreed to help the Fox. But instead of helping the Goat, it just left.
-*** You might have meant that the fox agreed to help the fox. You shouldn't start sentenced with "but," as they often sound choppy. You could say something like: "Instead of helping the goat, the fox just left." Great job!
+*** You might have meant that the fox agreed to help the goat. You shouldn't start sentenced with "but," as they often sound choppy. You could say something like: "Instead of helping the goat, the fox just left." Great job!

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 Tenzin Gelek:
-                Out of all the creatures the elephant is one of the largest and fascinating animals.
+                 Out of all the creatures the elephant is one of the largest and fascinating animals.
                    I believe that out of all the humongous creatures the Elephant is one of them. African elephants stand up to 13 feet or around that. Asian elephants might get up to about 11.5 feet. Mostly adult elephants eat up to 200-600 pounds of food. Overall, this is how the Elephant is a humongous creature.
                      Elephants stay in many places. For instance, the African Elephants live in Africa. And the Asian Elephants live in India, Sri Lanka, Malaysia, Indonesia, Thailand, Vietnam, Nepal, and other Southeast Asian countries. Most of the humans have destroyed their habitats.  After all, elephants do stay in many places.

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 Tenzin Gelek:
-                  Out of all the creatures the elephant is one of the largest animals.
+                Out of all the creatures the elephant is one of the largest and fascinating animals.
-                        Of all the
+                  I believe that out of all the humongous creatures the Elephant is one of them. African elephants stand up to 13 feet or around that. Asian elephants might get up to about 11.5 feet. Mostly adult elephants eat up to 200-600 pounds of food. Overall, this is how the Elephant is a humongous creature.

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 Tenzin Gelek:
-          The 2 soilders and the robber are different and similar.
+                  Out of all the creatures the elephant is one of the largest animals.
                         The two soldiers and the robber are different. This is because one of the soldiers are a coward and the other one was brave. In the text it says,"TWO SOLDIERS traveling together were set upon by a  Robber."" The one fled away;." The robber  says he should be the one encouraged because he is more brave than the other soldier. This is how they are different than each other.
                         They are similar because they all are against each other. Another reason why is because they are all  strong people. If they weren't strong, why would they become Soldiers? This is  why I think that they are all similar.

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 Tenzin Gelek:
            The 2 soilders and the robber are different and similar.
-                        The two soilders and the robber  are different. This is because  one of the  soilders  is a coward and that
+                        The two soldiers and the robber are different. This is because one of the soldiers are a coward and the other one was brave. In the text it says,"TWO SOLDIERS traveling together were set upon by a  Robber."" The one fled away;." The robber  says he should be the one encouraged because he is more brave than the other soldier. This is how they are different than each other.
+                       They are similar because they all are against each other. Another reason why is because they are all  strong people. If they weren't strong, why would they become Soldiers? This is  why I think that they are all similar.
+                       In conclusion, they are different and similar in their own ways.

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 Tenzin Gelek:
                    I think the Farmer feels irritated because the Raven was taking credit of the Farmer's hard work.  And Raven also treated the Farmer's hard work like a joke.
-                          In my opinion, I think the Farmer feels irritated because the Raven was taking credit for the things which weren't done by it. Another reason was that after the Raven finished taking credit for itself, the Raven made it a joke by laughing at the Farmer. According to the text,"One evening, as some cattle were wending their way home, a raven rode on the horns of a bull in the herd; and as he approached the cottage, cried to the farmer, "Friend, my work for the day is over; you may now take charge of your cattle." "What was your work?" asked the farmer. "Why," said the raven, "the arduous task of watching these cattle and bringing them home." "Am I to understand you have been doing all the work for me?" said the farmer. Quoth the farmer with surprise, "How many there are that take credit for things which they have never done!" It also states, "Friend, my work for the day is over; you may now take charge of your cattle.""Why," said the raven, "the arduous task of watching these cattle and bringing them home.""Am I to understand you have been doing all the work for me?" said the farmer. "Certainly," said the raven, and flew away with a laugh. Therefore, this is what I think the Farmer feels after what the Raven said.
+                          In my opinion, I think the Farmer feels irritated because the Raven was taking credit for the things which weren't done by it. Another reason was that after the Raven finished taking credit for itself, the Raven made the Farmer's hard work a joke by laughing at the Farmer. According to the text,"One evening, as some cattle were wending their way home, a Raven rode on the horns of a bull in the herd; and as he approached the cottage, cried to the farmer, "Friend, my work for the day is over; you may now take charge of your cattle." "What was your work?" asked the farmer. "Why," said the raven, "the arduous task of watching these cattle and bringing them home." "Am I to understand you have been doing all the work for me?" said the farmer. Quoth the farmer with surprise, "How many there are that take credit for things which they have never done!" It also states, "Friend, my work for the day is over; you may now take charge of your cattle.""Why," said the raven, "the arduous task of watching these cattle and bringing them home.""Am I to understand you have been doing all the work for me?" said the farmer. "Certainly," said the raven, and flew away with a laugh. Therefore, this is what I think the Farmer feels after what the Raven said.
                     I think the Farmer feels irritated because the Raven was taking credit for the Farmer's hard work. I also think that the Raven tried to make taking the credit for the Farmer's hard work a joke. In conclusion, this is what I think the Farmer felt after what the crow said to him.