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	In conclusion nothing on the earth is. Bigger than a whale well no animal is bigger than the whale well no animal exept if you count the prehistoric time animals. It is also one of the mammals that live in the water also it is one of the animals that are in the endangered list.		In conclusion nothing on the earth is. Bigger than a whale well no animal is bigger than the whale well no animal exept if you count the prehistoric time animals. It is also one of the mammals that live in the water also it is one of the animals that are in the endangered list.
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		+	Essay on bees
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		+	Today i am going to explain about bees here are the things i am going to explain about bees were they live what they eat and last of all what they produce
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		+	The original habitats of the honey bee are tropical climates and heavily forested areas. Honey bees can thrive in natural environments. Though they prefer to live in woodlands ,orchards, meadows and other areas where flowering plants or abundant. Bees collect honey and nectar which produce energy. So bees particularly get energy from honey and nectar
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		+	Bees eat nectar and pollen collected from older bees who have strong flying muscles some older bees gather nectar which they store in an elastic pouch ‘’their stomach’’ other older bees collect the honey by packing them in ‘’baskets’’ their rear legs.
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		+	In conclusion bees collect pollen and nectar which apparently gives them energy. Bees live in woodlands and orchards.

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+                                                                              Essay on wales
+Of all the creatures on the earth, none can compare to the amazingly humongous, aquatic mammal.
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+Additionally the whales have been on the endangered list since 1987 all over the world whales were hunted for their blubber and their oil. Currently Japanese people also hunt whales for their meat and sometimes they hunt them for traditions.
-   The boy was able to get out of the Stomach of the fish by cutting of a piece of the liver, therefore, the fish vomited up the boy.
+In conclusion nothing on the earth is. Bigger than a whale well no animal is bigger than the whale well no animal exept if you count the prehistoric time animals. It is also one of the mammals that live in the water also it is one of the animals that are in the endangered list.

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	In my opinion I think that the police officers in the story were like not brave at all because on of the police officers like ran away like literally ran of leaving his partner behind wile his partner took out his stout I think that’s some sort of weapon oh and the robber is like way more brave than the cops because when the robber saw the cop he didn’t run of instead he took out a sword like a literal sword I think it’s like ya know the swords in the ninja movies		In my opinion I think that the police officers in the story were like not brave at all because on of the police officers like ran away like literally ran of leaving his partner behind wile his partner took out his stout I think that’s some sort of weapon oh and the robber is like way more brave than the cops because when the robber saw the cop he didn’t run of instead he took out a sword like a literal sword I think it’s like ya know the swords in the ninja movies

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	In my opinion the farmer was surprised because he actually did all the work and then the crow was on the bulls head and the crow told the farmer it was a hard day and then the farmer asked why afterwards the crow said because i did all the work the farmer said really and the crow said yeah and flew of laughing.		In my opinion the farmer was surprised because he actually did all the work and then the crow was on the bulls head and the crow told the farmer it was a hard day and then the farmer asked why afterwards the crow said because i did all the work the farmer said really and the crow said yeah and flew of laughing.
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		+	In my opinion I think that the police officers in the story were like not brave at all because on of the police officers like ran away like literally ran of leaving his partner behind wile his partner took out his stout I think that’s some sort of weapon oh and the robber is like way more brave than the cops because when the robber saw the cop he didn’t run of instead he took out a sword like a literal sword I think it’s like ya know the swords in the ninja movies

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 The monkey played the song the scarecrow on his fiddle the music was sooooo bad that the wolf admired that the fiddle was not actual his and that the bow and arrow belonged to the monkey.

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-       The boy was able to get out of the Stomach of the fish by cutting of a piece of the liver, therefore, the fish vomited up the boy. According to the text,”... he became very hungry, the boy looked around and saw the fishes liver hanging right over his head. Thinking it was dried meat, he tried to cut of a piece with a muscle shell he had been playing with before and still held in his. Wile the operation sickens in the stomach it vomited the boy out. So, the boy got hungry and cut a piece of the fishes liver and the fish vomited him out
+       The boy was able to get out of the Stomach of the fish by cutting of a piece of the liver, therefore, the fish vomited up the boy. According to the text,”... he became very hungry, the boy looked around and saw the fishes liver hanging right over his head. Thinking it was dried meat, he tried to cut of a piece with a muscle shell he had been playing with before and still held in his. Wile the operation sickens in the stomach it vomited the boy out. So, the boy got hungry and cut a piece of the fishes liver and the fish vomited him out. In conclusion, the boy was able to get out of the fish because it vomited him out.

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	The boy was able to get out of the fish's stomach by cutting off a piece of its liver, which caused the fish to vomit up the boy. According to the text,”... he became very hungry. The boy looked around and saw the fish's liver hanging right over his head. Thinking it was dried meat, he tried to cut off a piece with a muscle shell he had been playing with before and still held in his hand. The boy made the fish sick when his liver was cut open and it vomited the boy out. So, the boy got hungry and cut a piece of the fishes liver and the fish vomited him out.		The boy was able to get out of the fish's stomach by cutting off a piece of its liver, which caused the fish to vomit up the boy. According to the text,”... he became very hungry. The boy looked around and saw the fish's liver hanging right over his head. Thinking it was dried meat, he tried to cut off a piece with a muscle shell he had been playing with before and still held in his hand. The boy made the fish sick when his liver was cut open and it vomited the boy out. So, the boy got hungry and cut a piece of the fishes liver and the fish vomited him out.
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		+	The monkey played the song the scarecrow on his fiddle the music was sooooo bad that the wolf admired that the fiddle was not actual his and that the bow and arrow belonged to the monkey.

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−	Great Claus took away little clauses horse. The reason why Great Claus took away Little Clauses horse is because little Claus had only 1 horse and Big Claus had 4 so big Claus gave his 4 horses to little Claus on holidays. And they were as good as own on that one day. And when people passed bye he said giddy up my fine horses. And then Big Claus appears and told him not to say that Little Claus promised not to say again but when Great Claus was gone little Claus said giddy up my fine horses and then someone said oh i will giddy up your horses and it was Great Claus and he took the horses ~~far away~~.	+	Great Claus took away little clauses horse. The reason why Great Claus took away Little Clauses horse is because little Claus had only 1 horse and Big Claus had 4 so big Claus gave his 4 horses to little Claus on holidays. And they were as good as own on that one day. And when people passed bye he said giddy up my fine horses. And then Big Claus appears and told him not to say that Little Claus promised not to say again but when Great Claus was gone little Claus said giddy up my fine horses and then someone said oh i will giddy up your horses and it was Great Claus and he took the horses faraway.
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		+	In my opinion when the Jonny cake was proud of himself because he beat every animal and every human well except the fox the fox caught the Jonny cake because he acted smart unlike the others who thrived tho catch them and i have a tip for the people who tried to catch Jonny cake next time try not run after something that can never get tired also try not to catch something that can outrun you everyday if he wanted to.