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 THE TALE OF IVAN
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             Last, but not least, the final piece of advice to Ivan was, "Honesty is the best policy." The text states, "So Ivan and his wife went up to the castle, and there they pointed out the man to whom they had given the purse, and he had to give it up and was sent away from the castle. And the lord was so pleased with Ivan that he made him his servant instead of the thief. 'Honesty's the best policy!' said Ivan, as he skipped about in his new quarters. 'How joyful I am!' If Ivan hadn't told the truth, he would've been a lying thief to the whole world! Who knows what the lord would do to him! A servant sounds bad, but at least he's not a thief! Also, in the end of the story, the cake that the farmer's wife made for him actually had Ivan's wage in it! He earned that wage!
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             Rip Van Winkle is also the kindest person too! He helps many people when they're struggling with something, even if he doesn't know them! He still helps whoever in need. The text states, "The children of the village, too, would shout with joy whenever he approached. He assisted at their sports, made their playthings, taught them to fly kites and 5 shoot marbles, and told them long stories of ghosts, witches, and Indians. Whenever he went dodging about the village, he was surrounded by a troop of them, hanging on his skirts, clambering on his back, and playing a thousand tricks on him with impunity; and not a dog would bark at him throughout the neighborhood." He made children really happy because he's super nice! Not even a dog would bark at him, haha! I actually didn't really know about Rip Van Winkle's personality before! This was a pretty interesting article.
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		+	RIP VAN WINKLE
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		+	This biography-ish is about the one and only: Rip Van Winkle! The author starts the first two paragraphs about where Van Winkle lives. Even though their village is actually kind of beat, the author still gives off positive vibes about the place. He or she gives specific details and makes it look like their village is totally awesome! For example, the author states, "When the weather is fair and settled, they are clothed in blue and purple, and print their bold outlines on the clear evening sky; but sometimes, when the rest of the landscape is cloudless, they will gather a hood of grey vapors about their summits, which, in the last rays of the setting sun, will glow and light up like a crown of glory." It sounds awesome, right? Anyways, Van Winkle sounds like a really kind person! He sounds kinder than anyone I've ever met before! The article shows Van Winkle is caring and generous. The text states, "I have observed that he was a simple, good-natured man; he was, moreover, a kind neighbor, and an obedient, hen-pecked husband. Indeed, to the latter circumstance might be owing that meekness of spirit which gained him such universal popularity; for those men are apt to be obsequious and conciliating abroad, who are under the discipline of shrews at home. Their tempers, doubtless, are rendered pliant and malleable in the fiery furnace of domestic tribulation; and a curtain-lecture is worth all the sermons in the world for teaching the virtues of patience and long-suffering. A termagant wife may, therefore, in some respects, be considered a tolerable blessing; and if so, Rip Van Winkle was thrice blessed." This shows how the villagers blessed Van Winkle for being such a good person! He even became popular from where he lived!
		+	Rip Van Winkle is also the kindest person too! He helps many people when they're struggling with something, even if he doesn't know them! He still helps whoever in need. The text states, "The children of the village, too, would shout with joy whenever he approached. He assisted at their sports, made their playthings, taught them to fly kites and 5 shoot marbles, and told them long stories of ghosts, witches, and Indians. Whenever he went dodging about the village, he was surrounded by a troop of them, hanging on his skirts, clambering on his back, and playing a thousand tricks on him with impunity; and not a dog would bark at him throughout the neighborhood." He made children really happy because he's super nice! Not even a dog would bark at him, haha! I actually didn't really know about Rip Van Winkle's personality before! This was a pretty interesting article.

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		+	SCHIPPEITARO
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		+	The story of Schippeiaro was really interesting, although it was pretty weird that they didn't give the young man a name, I guess they do that sometimes. The story was about the young man trying to do a good deed to make his name famous. You might be wondering, why? Well, in the olden days, the custom was that as soon as a Japanese boy reaches manhood, he shall roam through the land for an adventure and come back home with his name famous! The young man, or youth, found it difficult to do something adventurous. He didn't stumble upon anything yet. Then, he saw a wild mountain and took the road that led there. The youth thought this could be a chance to do something good. Overnight, he heard some cats screeching, "Don't tell Schippeitaro! Keep it hidden and secret!" At first, the youth was just curious and didn't really care. But it was actually an event that led the youth to think of a plan for how to capture the cat king. Anyways, later, he found a maiden in a cask. The cats wanted something from the maiden and the young man decided to save her by going to Schippeitaro. When the youth heard the cats that night he knows that they were up to something.
		+	The text states, "Not a sound was heard through the whole forest for some hours, but at midnight there suddenly arose such a clamor that the young man, tired as he was, became wide awake in an instant. Peeping cautiously between the wooden pillars of the chapel, he saw a troop of hideous cats, dancing furiously, making the night horrible with their yells. The full moon lighted up the weird scene, and the young warrior gazed with astonishment, taking great care to keep still, lest he should be discovered. After some time he thought that in the midst of all their shrieks he could make out the words, ‘Do not tell Schippeitaro! Keep it hidden and secret! Do not tell Schippeitaro!’ Then, the midnight hour had passed, they all vanished, and the youth was left alone. Exhausted by all that had been going on around him, he flung himself on the ground and slept till the sun rose." This is the main event of how the man thought of a plan to capture the cat king. Since he heard the cats say, "Do not tell Schippeitaro! Keep it hidden and secret" the cats were obviously hiding something from that dog and if he found out, the dog would probably do something bad to them. Well, that's exactly what happened!
		+	The text states, " The monster looked eagerly about him, and his eyes sparkled with joy when he saw the cask. He bounded high into the air with delight and uttered cries of pleasure; then he drew near and undid the bolts. But instead of finding the maiden, Schippeitaro’s teeth were fastened in HIM, and the youth ran up and captured the Cat King with rope. The other cats were so astonished at the turn things had taken that they forgot to run away, and the young man and Schippeitaro between them captured several more before they thought of escaping." Haha, beat that Cat King! The plan was a success! The effect of the young man's planning really paid off! Now the youth can go back home for saving the maiden and capturing those evil cats! His name shall be famous!
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		+	-I think this is the longest "paragraph" I ever wrote, hehe. Thanks, I'll ask if I need any recommendations!
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		+	-Sirasa :p
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              Captain Crewe also loves buying so many things for his daughter! All he wants to do is to keep her really happy before he leaves off to India. The text states, "They bought, indeed, a great many more things than Sara needed; but Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired and everything he admired himself, so between them, they collected a wardrobe much too grand for a child of seven. There were velvet dresses trimmed with costly furs, and lace dresses, and embroidered ones, and hats with great, soft ostrich feathers, and ermine coats and muffs, and boxes of tiny gloves and handkerchiefs and silk stockings in such abundant supplies that the polite young women behind the counters whispered to each other that the odd little girl with the big, solemn eyes must be at least some foreign princess—perhaps the little daughter of an Indian rajah." Captain Crewe bought so many things for Sara, even more than she needed! It's like she was living in luxury! Captain Crewe would do anything to make his daughter happy, so he bought as many things as Sara liked and spent it all on her! She's like a princess, or rajah, now. Sara's father is super nice and kind and I can see how much he's going to miss Sara when she's gone, even though the text doesn't directly state that. But what I really hope is that Miss Minchin is not a bad person and she won't treat Sara like a slave.
 Oh my god, I can relate to you! This one time in summer camp, I brought a lot of books to read, and I found it so interesting, that I read it when we were in Coney Island! I don't remember what the book was called but all I know was that it was worth dying for.
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−	Sara is a nice and kind seven-year-old girl who absolutely loves reading books! You can give her any kind of book, that's big because she likes those more, and she'll read it! Sara is really mature for her age, and that's a good thing. Previously, in the last part, Sara's dad and Sara went to the Seminary for young ladies to talk to Mrs. Minchin. Captain Crewe thought all was well, but it actually wasn't. Miss Minchin looked pretty suspicious with that fishy smile. It's like she's up to something. This part, on the other hand, had a bit more lightening mood. Sara and her father spent so much time together! That's how Sara's dad shows his love and affection. He'll do anything for her. The text states, "Sara stayed with her father at his hotel for several days; in fact, she remained with him until he sailed away again to India. They went out and visited many big shops together, and bought a great many things." Sara really wanted to spend a lot of time with her father so she and Captain Crewe went out and did some Father-and-daughter things! Captain Crewe knows how much Sara will miss him, and even he's going to miss her. That's why he also wants to spend as much time as he can with his own lovely daughter. Furthermore, the text states, "They bought, indeed, a great many more things than Sara needed; but Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired and everything he admired himself, so between them, they collected a wardrobe much too grand for a child of seven. There were velvet dresses trimmed with costly furs, and lace dresses, and embroidered ones, and hats with great, soft ostrich feathers, and ermine coats and muffs, and boxes of tiny gloves and handkerchiefs and silk stockings in such abundant supplies that the polite young women behind the counters whispered to each other that the odd little girl with the big, solemn eyes must be at least some foreign princess—perhaps the little daughter of an Indian rajah." Captain Crewe bought so many things for Sara, even more than she needed! It's like she was living in luxury! Captain Crewe would do anything to make his daughter happy, so he bought as many things as Sara liked and spent it all on her! She's like a princess, or rajah, now. Sara's father is super nice and kind and I can see how much he's going to miss Sara when she's gone, even though the text doesn't directly state that. But what I really hope is that Miss Minchin is not a bad person and she won't treat Sara like a slave.	+	Sara is a nice and kind seven-year-old girl who absolutely loves reading books! You can give her any kind of book, that's big because she likes those more, and she'll read it! Sara is really mature for her age, and that's a good thing. Previously, in the last part, Sara's dad and Sara went to the Seminary for young ladies to talk to Mrs. Minchin. Captain Crewe thought all was well, but it actually wasn't. Miss Minchin looked pretty suspicious with that fishy smile. It's like she's up to something. This part, on the other hand, had a bit more lightening mood. Sara and her father spent so much time together! That's how Sara's dad shows his love and affection. He'll do anything for her. The text states, "Sara stayed with her father at his hotel for several days; in fact, she remained with him until he sailed away again to India. They went out and visited many big shops together, and bought a great many things." Sara really wanted to spend a lot of time with her father so she and Captain Crewe went out and did some Father-and-daughter things! Captain Crewe knows how much Sara will miss him, and even he's going to miss her. That's why he also wants to spend as much time as he can with his own lovely daughter.
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−	Oh my god I can relate to you! This one time in summer camp, I brought a lot of books to read, and I found it so interesting, that I read it when we were in Coney Island! I don't remember what the book was called but all I know was that it was worth dying for.
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−	~~-Sirasa uwu~~
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		+	Captain Crewe also loves buying so many things for his daughter! All he wants to do is to keep her really happy before he leaves off to India. The text states, "They bought, indeed, a great many more things than Sara needed; but Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired and everything he admired himself, so between them, they collected a wardrobe much too grand for a child of seven. There were velvet dresses trimmed with costly furs, and lace dresses, and embroidered ones, and hats with great, soft ostrich feathers, and ermine coats and muffs, and boxes of tiny gloves and handkerchiefs and silk stockings in such abundant supplies that the polite young women behind the counters whispered to each other that the odd little girl with the big, solemn eyes must be at least some foreign princess—perhaps the little daughter of an Indian rajah." Captain Crewe bought so many things for Sara, even more than she needed! It's like she was living in luxury! Captain Crewe would do anything to make his daughter happy, so he bought as many things as Sara liked and spent it all on her! She's like a princess, or rajah, now. Sara's father is super nice and kind and I can see how much he's going to miss Sara when she's gone, even though the text doesn't directly state that. But what I really hope is that Miss Minchin is not a bad person and she won't treat Sara like a slave.

		+	Oh my god, I can relate to you! This one time in summer camp, I brought a lot of books to read, and I found it so interesting, that I read it when we were in Coney Island! I don't remember what the book was called but all I know was that it was worth dying for.

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-Sara is a nice and kind seven-year-old girl who absolutely loves reading books! You can give her any kind of book, that's big because she likes those more, and she'll read it! Sara is really mature for her age and that's a good thing. Previously, in the last part, Sara's dad and Sara went to the Seminary for young ladies to talk to Mrs. Minchin. Captain Crewe thought all was well, but it actually wasn't. Miss Minchin looked pretty suspicious with that fishy smile. It's like she's up to something. This part, on the other hand, had a bit more lightening mood. Sara and her father spent so much time together! That's how Sara's dad shows his love and affection. He'll do anything for her. The text states, "Sara stayed with her father at his hotel for several days; in fact, she remained with him until he sailed away again to India. They went out and visited many big shops together, and bought a great many things." Sara really wanted to spend a lot of time with her father so she and Captain Crewe went out and did some Father-and-daughter things! Captain Crewe knows how much Sara will miss him, and even he's going to miss her. That's why he also wants to spend as much time as he can with his own lovely daughter. Furthermore, the text states, "They bought, indeed, a great many more things than Sara needed; but Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired and everything he admired himself, so between them, they collected a wardrobe much too grand for a child of seven. There were velvet dresses trimmed with costly furs, and lace dresses, and embroidered ones, and hats with great, soft ostrich feathers, and ermine coats and muffs, and boxes of tiny gloves and handkerchiefs and silk stockings in such abundant supplies that the polite young women behind the counters whispered to each other that the odd little girl with the big, solemn eyes must be at least some foreign princess—perhaps the little daughter of an Indian rajah." Captain Crewe bought so many things for Sara, even more than she needed! It's like she was living in luxury! Captain Crewe would do anything to make his daughter happy, so he bought as many things as Sara liked and spent it all on her! She's like a princess, or rajah, now. Sara's father is super nice and kind and I can see how much he's going to miss Sara when she's gone, even though the text doesn't directly state that. But what I really hope is that Miss Minchin is not a bad person and she won't treat Sara like a slave.
+Sara is a nice and kind seven-year-old girl who absolutely loves reading books! You can give her any kind of book, that's big because she likes those more, and she'll read it! Sara is really mature for her age, and that's a good thing. Previously, in the last part, Sara's dad and Sara went to the Seminary for young ladies to talk to Mrs. Minchin. Captain Crewe thought all was well, but it actually wasn't. Miss Minchin looked pretty suspicious with that fishy smile. It's like she's up to something. This part, on the other hand, had a bit more lightening mood. Sara and her father spent so much time together! That's how Sara's dad shows his love and affection. He'll do anything for her. The text states, "Sara stayed with her father at his hotel for several days; in fact, she remained with him until he sailed away again to India. They went out and visited many big shops together, and bought a great many things." Sara really wanted to spend a lot of time with her father so she and Captain Crewe went out and did some Father-and-daughter things! Captain Crewe knows how much Sara will miss him, and even he's going to miss her. That's why he also wants to spend as much time as he can with his own lovely daughter. Furthermore, the text states, "They bought, indeed, a great many more things than Sara needed; but Captain Crewe was a rash, innocent young man and wanted his little girl to have everything she admired and everything he admired himself, so between them, they collected a wardrobe much too grand for a child of seven. There were velvet dresses trimmed with costly furs, and lace dresses, and embroidered ones, and hats with great, soft ostrich feathers, and ermine coats and muffs, and boxes of tiny gloves and handkerchiefs and silk stockings in such abundant supplies that the polite young women behind the counters whispered to each other that the odd little girl with the big, solemn eyes must be at least some foreign princess—perhaps the little daughter of an Indian rajah." Captain Crewe bought so many things for Sara, even more than she needed! It's like she was living in luxury! Captain Crewe would do anything to make his daughter happy, so he bought as many things as Sara liked and spent it all on her! She's like a princess, or rajah, now. Sara's father is super nice and kind and I can see how much he's going to miss Sara when she's gone, even though the text doesn't directly state that. But what I really hope is that Miss Minchin is not a bad person and she won't treat Sara like a slave.
 Oh my god I can relate to you! This one time in summer camp, I brought a lot of books to read, and I found it so interesting, that I read it when we were in Coney Island! I don't remember what the book was called but all I know was that it was worth dying for.