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	The events allowed the young man to think of a plan to catch the Cat King, is when the young man remembered about the cats talking about a dog named Schippeitaro and when the other mens were telling the young man about the dog. " Schippeitaro is the great dog that belongs to the overseer of our prince,’ said they; ‘and he lives not far away." Another evidence is , "As he listened to this story, the young man was filled with a great longing to rescue the maiden from her dreadful fate. The mention of the chapel set him thinking of the scene of the previous night, and he went over all the details again in his mind. ‘Who is Schippeitaro?’ he suddenly asked; ‘can any of you tell me?"Based on the events this gave him support on capturing the Cat king.		The events allowed the young man to think of a plan to catch the Cat King, is when the young man remembered about the cats talking about a dog named Schippeitaro and when the other mens were telling the young man about the dog. " Schippeitaro is the great dog that belongs to the overseer of our prince,’ said they; ‘and he lives not far away." Another evidence is , "As he listened to this story, the young man was filled with a great longing to rescue the maiden from her dreadful fate. The mention of the chapel set him thinking of the scene of the previous night, and he went over all the details again in his mind. ‘Who is Schippeitaro?’ he suddenly asked; ‘can any of you tell me?"Based on the events this gave him support on capturing the Cat king.

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		+	The events allowed the young man to think of a plan to catch the Cat King, is when the young man remembered about the cats talking about a dog named Schippeitaro and when the other mens were telling the young man about the dog. " Schippeitaro is the great dog that belongs to the overseer of our prince,’ said they; ‘and he lives not far away." Another evidence is , "As he listened to this story, the young man was filled with a great longing to rescue the maiden from her dreadful fate. The mention of the chapel set him thinking of the scene of the previous night, and he went over all the details again in his mind. ‘Who is Schippeitaro?’ he suddenly asked; ‘can any of you tell me?"Based on the events this gave him support on capturing the Cat king.
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		+	'''Corrections:'''
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		+	Two events allowed the young man to think of a plan to catch the Cat King. One event was him remembering the cats talking about a dog named Schippeitaro, and the other event was the men telling the young man about the dog.
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		+	***I split this up into two separate sentences, as the original sentence was a run-on sentence. This way, the sentences are shorter and more concise.
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		+	According to the text, “Schippeitaro is the great dog that belongs to the overseer of our prince,’ said they; ‘and he lives not far away."
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		+	***The quote was missing an introductory sentence. Without it, the evidence isn’t properly integrated into the paragraph. This way, the evidence flows better with the rest of the paragraph.
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		+	The text also states, "As he listened to this story, the young man was filled with a great longing to rescue the maiden from her dreadful fate. The mention of the chapel set him thinking of the scene of the previous night, and he went over all the details again in his mind. ‘Who is Schippeitaro?’ he suddenly asked; ‘can any of you tell me?"
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		+	***I edited the introductory clause as the original version wasn’t grammatically correct.
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		+	Based on these events, he got support to help him capture the Cat King.
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		+	***It should be “these” instead of “the,” as you are talking about multiple events. I also reworded the sentence to help improve the grammar of the sentence. Lastly, “king” needed to be capitalized as it’s being uses as someone’s name.
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		+	'''Final Version:'''
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		+	Two events allowed the young man to think of a plan to catch the Cat King. One event was him remembering the cats talking about a dog named Schippeitaro, and the other event was the men telling the young man about the dog. According to the text, “Schippeitaro is the great dog that belongs to the overseer of our prince,’ said they; ‘and he lives not far away." The text also states, "As he listened to this story, the young man was filled with a great longing to rescue the maiden from her dreadful fate. The mention of the chapel set him thinking of the scene of the previous night, and he went over all the details again in his mind. ‘Who is Schippeitaro?’ he suddenly asked; ‘can any of you tell me?" Based on these events, he got support to help him capture the Cat King.
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		+	Good work! Try making your sentences shorter to avoid run-on sentences.
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		+	Edited by Hayley Taylor

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		+	The events allowed the young man to think of a plan to catch the Cat King, is when the young man remembered about the cats talking about a dog named Schippeitaro and when the other mens were telling the young man about the dog. " Schippeitaro is the great dog that belongs to the overseer of our prince,’ said they; ‘and he lives not far away." Another evidence is , "As he listened to this story, the young man was filled with a great longing to rescue the maiden from her dreadful fate. The mention of the chapel set him thinking of the scene of the previous night, and he went over all the details again in his mind. ‘Who is Schippeitaro?’ he suddenly asked; ‘can any of you tell me?"Based on the events this gave him support on capturing the Cat king.
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	Both Captain Crewe and Sara show their affection for each other by making sgins.According to the text "A Little Princess: Sara Part 3" it states that, "And upstairs in the locked room Sara and Emily sat on the floor and stared at the corner around which the cab had disappeared, while Captain Crewe looked backward, waving and kissing his hand as if he could not bear to stop.".This shows that he is showing the sign of kisses because he was blow kissing her and that is a sign of love.It also states that, "Captain Crewe would really have enjoyed the shopping tremendously".He would have enjoyed it because she was there.Based on this i can conclude that Captain Crewe and Sara show affection differently then others.		Both Captain Crewe and Sara show their affection for each other by making sgins.According to the text "A Little Princess: Sara Part 3" it states that, "And upstairs in the locked room Sara and Emily sat on the floor and stared at the corner around which the cab had disappeared, while Captain Crewe looked backward, waving and kissing his hand as if he could not bear to stop.".This shows that he is showing the sign of kisses because he was blow kissing her and that is a sign of love.It also states that, "Captain Crewe would really have enjoyed the shopping tremendously".He would have enjoyed it because she was there.Based on this i can conclude that Captain Crewe and Sara show affection differently then others.

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	Both Captain Crewe and Sara show their affection for each other by making sgins.According to the text "A Little Princess: Sara Part 3" it states that, "And upstairs in the locked room Sara and Emily sat on the floor and stared at the corner around which the cab had disappeared, while Captain Crewe looked backward, waving and kissing his hand as if he could not bear to stop.".This shows that he is showing the sign of kisses because he was blow kissing her and that is a sign of love.It also states that, "Captain Crewe would really have enjoyed the shopping tremendously".He would have enjoyed it because she was there.Based on this i can conclude that Captain Crewe and Sara show affection differently then others.		Both Captain Crewe and Sara show their affection for each other by making sgins.According to the text "A Little Princess: Sara Part 3" it states that, "And upstairs in the locked room Sara and Emily sat on the floor and stared at the corner around which the cab had disappeared, while Captain Crewe looked backward, waving and kissing his hand as if he could not bear to stop.".This shows that he is showing the sign of kisses because he was blow kissing her and that is a sign of love.It also states that, "Captain Crewe would really have enjoyed the shopping tremendously".He would have enjoyed it because she was there.Based on this i can conclude that Captain Crewe and Sara show affection differently then others.

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		+	Both Captain Crewe and Sara show their affection for each other by making sgins.According to the text "A Little Princess: Sara Part 3" it states that, "And upstairs in the locked room Sara and Emily sat on the floor and stared at the corner around which the cab had disappeared, while Captain Crewe looked backward, waving and kissing his hand as if he could not bear to stop.".This shows that he is showing the sign of kisses because he was blow kissing her and that is a sign of love.It also states that, "Captain Crewe would really have enjoyed the shopping tremendously".He would have enjoyed it because she was there.Based on this i can conclude that Captain Crewe and Sara show affection differently then others.
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		+	Both Captain Crewe and Sara show their affection for each other by making signs.
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		+	***I fixed the spelling of “signs.”
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		+	According to the text "A Little Princess: Sara Part 3" it states that, "And upstairs in the locked room Sara and Emily sat on the floor and stared at the corner around which the cab had disappeared, while Captain Crewe looked backward, waving and kissing his hand as if he could not bear to stop."
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		+	***Good! I just fixed the lack of space after the period at the beginning of the sentence.
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		+	Using the sign for kisses signifies that he loves her.
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		+	***I reworded the sentence to make it less wordy.
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		+	It also states that, "Captain Crewe would really have enjoyed the shopping tremendously.”
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		+	***Place the period inside the quotation mark.
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		+	Captain Crewe would have enjoyed it because she was there.
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		+	***I added his name at the beginning to make it clear to the reader who you are talking about.
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		+	In conclusion, Captain Crewe and Sara show affection differently than others.
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		+	***I edited the sentence by removing the personal pronouns to make it sound more objective. Also, it needs to be “than” as you are using it to compare something.
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		+	'''Final Version:'''
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		+	Both Captain Crewe and Sara show their affection for each other by making signs. According to the text "A Little Princess: Sara Part 3" it states that, "And upstairs in the locked room Sara and Emily sat on the floor and stared at the corner around which the cab had disappeared, while Captain Crewe looked backward, waving and kissing his hand as if he could not bear to stop." Using the sign for kisses signifies that he loves her. It also states that, "Captain Crewe would really have enjoyed the shopping tremendously.” Captain Crewe would have enjoyed it because she was there. In conclusion, Captain Crewe and Sara show affection differently than others.
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		+	Good work!

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	Sara likes to read history , English,biography and poems.According to the text it states,"French and German as well as English—history and biography and poets, and all sorts of things." Drag her away from her books when she reads to much.Make her ride her pony in the Row or go out and buy a new doll. She ought to play more with dolls."These two details explain to me that she loves to read these types of books make her obsessed and when somebody is obsessed they love it so much and they like it.Based on this she likes to read different types of books that she is interested.		Sara likes to read history , English,biography and poems.According to the text it states,"French and German as well as English—history and biography and poets, and all sorts of things." Drag her away from her books when she reads to much.Make her ride her pony in the Row or go out and buy a new doll. She ought to play more with dolls."These two details explain to me that she loves to read these types of books make her obsessed and when somebody is obsessed they love it so much and they like it.Based on this she likes to read different types of books that she is interested.

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		+	Sara likes to read history , English, biography and poems.According to the text it states,"French and German as well as English—history and biography and poets, and all sorts of things." Drag her away from her books when she reads to much.Make her ride her pony in the Row or go out and buy a new doll. She ought to play more with dolls."These two details explain to me that she loves to read these types of books make her obsessed and when somebody is obsessed they love it so much and they like it.Based on this she likes to read different types of books that she is interested.
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		+	Sara likes to read history, English, biographies, and poems.
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		+	***I fished the spacing issues and made biography plural to match the other nouns.
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		+	According to the text, "French and German as well as English—history and biography and poets, and all sorts of things."
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		+	***I deleted “it states” so the introductory clause would be less wordy.
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		+	It also states, “Drag her away from her books when she reads too much. Make her ride her pony in the Row or go out and buy a new doll. She ought to play more with dolls."
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		+	***There needed to be an introductory clause before the quotation so it was better integrated into the paragraph.
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		+	These are two details that explain her love of these types of books, making her obsessed with them.
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		+	***I reworded the sentence so it was shorter. I also took out the personal pronoun to make it sound more objective.
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		+	Based on this, she likes to read different types of books that interest her.
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		+	***I added a comma and edited the sentence to improve the grammar.
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		+	'''Final Version:'''
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		+	Sara likes to read history, English, biographies, and poems. According to the text, "French and German as well as English—history and biography and poets, and all sorts of things." It also states, “Drag her away from her books when she reads too much. Make her ride her pony in the Row or go out and buy a new doll. She ought to play more with dolls." These are two details that explain her love of these types of books, making her obsessed with them. Based on this, she likes to read different types of books that interest her.
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		+	Great work! Make sure to add a few words before your quotes to integrate them into the paragraph.
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		+	Edited by Hayley Taylor

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		+	Both Captain Crewe and Sara show their affection for each other by making sgins.According to the text "A Little Princess: Sara Part 3" it states that, "And upstairs in the locked room Sara and Emily sat on the floor and stared at the corner around which the cab had disappeared, while Captain Crewe looked backward, waving and kissing his hand as if he could not bear to stop.".This shows that he is showing the sign of kisses because he was blow kissing her and that is a sign of love.It also states that, "Captain Crewe would really have enjoyed the shopping tremendously".He would have enjoyed it because she was there.Based on this i can conclude that Captain Crewe and Sara show affection differently then others.
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		+	Sara likes to read history , English,biography and poems.According to the text it states,"French and German as well as English—history and biography and poets, and all sorts of things." Drag her away from her books when she reads to much.Make her ride her pony in the Row or go out and buy a new doll. She ought to play more with dolls."These two details explain to me that she loves to read these types of books make her obsessed and when somebody is obsessed they love it so much and they like it.Based on this she likes to read different types of books that she is interested.
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	The bangs on the door was to make every one happy and to get everyone to the table everyone to the table.According to the text it states , "Merry Christmas, Marmee! Many of them! Thank you for our books. We read some, and mean to every day," they all cried in chorus.".This shows that they are they are happy because they say merry Christmas and you say that when you are merry and that means happy and you say this when you are happy.The text also states that Another bang of the street door sent the basket under the sofa, and the girls to the table, eager for breakfast.".This shows that the bang made everyone want to go to the table for their breakfast.Based on this i can conclude that they made the bang for a reason.		The bangs on the door was to make every one happy and to get everyone to the table everyone to the table.According to the text it states , "Merry Christmas, Marmee! Many of them! Thank you for our books. We read some, and mean to every day," they all cried in chorus.".This shows that they are they are happy because they say merry Christmas and you say that when you are merry and that means happy and you say this when you are happy.The text also states that Another bang of the street door sent the basket under the sofa, and the girls to the table, eager for breakfast.".This shows that the bang made everyone want to go to the table for their breakfast.Based on this i can conclude that they made the bang for a reason.

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-      The characters sang during the evening and night.In the text "LITTLE WOMEN PART 4", "The first sound in the morning was her voice as she went about the house singing like a lark, and the last sound at night was the same cheery sound".this shows that they were all singing thats why itsays she heard the same voice at night.This story also states that "At nine they stopped work, and sang, as usual, before they went to bed.".This shows that they sang in the evening and night because 9:00 is the night so they did sing in the evening and night.Based on what i read i can conclude that they like to sing.
+      The bangs on the door was to make every one happy and to get everyone to the table everyone to the table.According to the text it states , "Merry Christmas, Marmee! Many of them! Thank you for our books. We read some, and mean to every day," they all cried in chorus.".This shows that they are they are happy because they say  merry Christmas and you say that when you are merry and that means happy and you say this when you are happy.The text also states that Another bang of the street door sent the basket under the sofa, and the girls to the table, eager for breakfast.".This shows that the bang made everyone want to go to the table for their breakfast.Based on this i can conclude that they made the bang for a reason.
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	The characters sang during the evening and night.In the text "LITTLE WOMEN PART 4", "The first sound in the morning was her voice as she went about the house singing like a lark, and the last sound at night was the same cheery sound".this shows that they were all singing thats why itsays she heard the same voice at night.This story also states that "At nine they stopped work, and sang, as usual, before they went to bed.".This shows that they sang in the evening and night because 9:00 is the night so they did sing in the evening and night.Based on what i read i can conclude that they like to sing.		The characters sang during the evening and night.In the text "LITTLE WOMEN PART 4", "The first sound in the morning was her voice as she went about the house singing like a lark, and the last sound at night was the same cheery sound".this shows that they were all singing thats why itsays she heard the same voice at night.This story also states that "At nine they stopped work, and sang, as usual, before they went to bed.".This shows that they sang in the evening and night because 9:00 is the night so they did sing in the evening and night.Based on what i read i can conclude that they like to sing.

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		+	The characters sang during the evening and night.In the text "LITTLE WOMEN PART 4", "The first sound in the morning was her voice as she went about the house singing like a lark, and the last sound at night was the same cheery sound".this shows that they were all singing thats why itsays she heard the same voice at night.This story also states that "At nine they stopped work, and sang, as usual, before they went to bed.".This shows that they sang in the evening and night because 9:00 is the night so they did sing in the evening and night.Based on what i read i can conclude that they like to sing.
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		+	'''Corrections:'''
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		+	The characters sang during the evening and night.
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		+	***Good!
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		+	The text "Little Women Part 4” states, "The first sound in the morning was her voice as she went about the house singing like a lark, and the last sound at night was the same cheery sound.”
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		+	***The title of the text does not need to be in all capitals. Also, punctuation (periods and commas) need to go inside quotation marks. Lastly, I edited the introductory clause as the grammar was incorrect, as it didn’t lead into the quotation correctly. You need to say “states” so there’s more of a transition between the two clauses.
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		+	That’s why she heard the voices un the evening and night.
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		+	***The first letter of the sentence needs to be capitalized. Also, there needs to be an apostrophe in “that’s” as it’s a contraction of “that is.” I also edited the sentence for grammar.
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		+	This story also states that "At nine they stopped work, and sang, as usual, before they went to bed.”
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		+	**I deleted the extra period placed after the quotation mark.
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		+	This shows that they sang in the evening and night because nine is considered nighttime.
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		+	***I edited the end of the sentence as it was redundant as you said a similar thing at the beginning of the sentence. Also, spell out numbers instead of using figures.
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		+	Based on the text, it can be concluded that they like to sing.
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		+	***I deleted the personal pronouns in the sentence so it would sound more objective.
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		+	Good job! Make sure to check your work for punctuation errors and repetitive issues.
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		+	'''Final Version:'''
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		+	The characters sang during the evening and night. The text "Little Women Part 4” states, "The first sound in the morning was her voice as she went about the house singing like a lark, and the last sound at night was the same cheery sound.” That’s why she heard the voices un the evening and night. This story also states that "At nine they stopped work, and sang, as usual, before they went to bed.” This shows that they sang in the evening and night because nine is considered nighttime. Based on the text, it can be concluded that they like to sing.

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		+	The characters sang during the evening and night.In the text "LITTLE WOMEN PART 4", "The first sound in the morning was her voice as she went about the house singing like a lark, and the last sound at night was the same cheery sound".this shows that they were all singing thats why itsays she heard the same voice at night.This story also states that "At nine they stopped work, and sang, as usual, before they went to bed.".This shows that they sang in the evening and night because 9:00 is the night so they did sing in the evening and night.Based on what i read i can conclude that they like to sing.
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	The thing that made everybody very happy is when Mrs.March said there was a treat and when they realized it was a letter about their dad.According to the text it states that, "Mrs. March said, with a particularly happy face, "I've got a treat for you after supper."A quick, bright smile went round like a streak of sunshine.".This shows that they were happy because they put the words "bright smile".The text also states that, "Beth clapped her hands, regardless of the biscuit she held, and Jo tossed up her napkin, crying, "A letter! A letter! Three cheers for Father!"".This shows that the kids were so happy to see the letter about their dear father.Based on this the most important thing to them is their father that is far away from them.		The thing that made everybody very happy is when Mrs.March said there was a treat and when they realized it was a letter about their dad.According to the text it states that, "Mrs. March said, with a particularly happy face, "I've got a treat for you after supper."A quick, bright smile went round like a streak of sunshine.".This shows that they were happy because they put the words "bright smile".The text also states that, "Beth clapped her hands, regardless of the biscuit she held, and Jo tossed up her napkin, crying, "A letter! A letter! Three cheers for Father!"".This shows that the kids were so happy to see the letter about their dear father.Based on this the most important thing to them is their father that is far away from them.

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	The thing that made everybody very happy is when Mrs.March said there was a treat and when they realized it was a letter about their dad.According to the text it states that, "Mrs. March said, with a particularly happy face, "I've got a treat for you after supper."A quick, bright smile went round like a streak of sunshine.".This shows that they were happy because they put the words "bright smile".The text also states that, "Beth clapped her hands, regardless of the biscuit she held, and Jo tossed up her napkin, crying, "A letter! A letter! Three cheers for Father!"".This shows that the kids were so happy to see the letter about their dear father.Based on this the most important thing to them is their father that is far away from them.		The thing that made everybody very happy is when Mrs.March said there was a treat and when they realized it was a letter about their dad.According to the text it states that, "Mrs. March said, with a particularly happy face, "I've got a treat for you after supper."A quick, bright smile went round like a streak of sunshine.".This shows that they were happy because they put the words "bright smile".The text also states that, "Beth clapped her hands, regardless of the biscuit she held, and Jo tossed up her napkin, crying, "A letter! A letter! Three cheers for Father!"".This shows that the kids were so happy to see the letter about their dear father.Based on this the most important thing to them is their father that is far away from them.

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		+	The thing that made everybody very happy is when Mrs.March said there was a treat and when they realized it was a letter about their dad.According to the text it states that, "Mrs. March said, with a particularly happy face, "I've got a treat for you after supper."A quick, bright smile went round like a streak of sunshine.".This shows that they were happy because they put the words "bright smile".The text also states that, "Beth clapped her hands, regardless of the biscuit she held, and Jo tossed up her napkin, crying, "A letter! A letter! Three cheers for Father!"".This shows that the kids were so happy to see the letter about their dear father.Based on this the most important thing to them is their father that is far away from them.
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		+	The thing that made everybody very happy is when Mrs. March told them about the letter from their dad.
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		+	***I took out some of the end of the sentence about it being a “treat” is it is not necessary, as by saying it made them happy you can assume it can be considered a treat. Also, there should be a space after “Mrs.”
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		+	Mrs. March states in the text that “‘I've got a treat for you after supper.’ A quick, bright smile went around like a streak of sunshine.”
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		+	***I edited the first clause so it would sound less clunky. I also placed single quotation marks outside the dialogue that’s inside the entire quotation. I also deleted “Mrs. March said” and added it into the introductory clause instead.
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		+	This shows that they were happy because they put the words "bright smile.”
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		+	***The period should go inside the quotation mark at the end of the sentence.
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		+	The text also states that, "Beth clapped her hands, regardless of the biscuit she held, and Jo tossed up her napkin, crying, ‘A letter! A letter! Three cheers for Father!’"
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		+	***You don’t need a period at the end of the sentence because there’s an exclamation mark. I also used single quotation marks again outside the dialogue.
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		+	This shows that the kids were so happy to see the letter about their dear father.
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		+	***Good!
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		+	Based on this, the most important thing to them is their father who is far away from them.
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		+	***I added a comma after “based on this” as it is an introductory clause. I also replaced “that” with “who” as you are referring to a person and not a thing, so “who” is proffered.
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		+	The thing that made everybody very happy is when Mrs. March told them about the letter from their dad. Mrs. March states in the text that “‘I've got a treat for you after supper.’ A quick, bright smile went around like a streak of sunshine.” This shows that they were happy because they put the words "bright smile.” The text also states that, "Beth clapped her hands, regardless of the biscuit she held, and Jo tossed up her napkin, crying, ‘A letter! A letter! Three cheers for Father!’" This shows that the kids were so happy to see the letter about their dear father. Based on this, the most important thing to them is their father who is far away from them.

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		+	The thing that made everybody very happy is when Mrs.March said there was a treat and when they realized it was a letter about their dad.According to the text it states that, "Mrs. March said, with a particularly happy face, "I've got a treat for you after supper."A quick, bright smile went round like a streak of sunshine.".This shows that they were happy because they put the words "bright smile".The text also states that, "Beth clapped her hands, regardless of the biscuit she held, and Jo tossed up her napkin, crying, "A letter! A letter! Three cheers for Father!"".This shows that the kids were so happy to see the letter about their dear father.Based on this the most important thing to them is their father that is far away from them.
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	Beth scared about when it was her birthday .According to "LITTLE WOMEN PART 2", ""I used to be so frightened when it was my turn to sit in the chair with the crown on and see you all come marching round to give the presents, with a kiss."This shows that she was scared because it says she was frightened and that means scared.The story also stated, " I liked the things and the kisses, but it was dreadful to have you sit looking at me while I opened the bundles".This shows that she was scared because she says it was dreadful and that mean she did not like it and that scared her, so she got scared when it was her birthday since she knew that they were going to do that.Based on this it tells me that you should tell the person that please don't do that i don't like it.		Beth scared about when it was her birthday .According to "LITTLE WOMEN PART 2", ""I used to be so frightened when it was my turn to sit in the chair with the crown on and see you all come marching round to give the presents, with a kiss."This shows that she was scared because it says she was frightened and that means scared.The story also stated, " I liked the things and the kisses, but it was dreadful to have you sit looking at me while I opened the bundles".This shows that she was scared because she says it was dreadful and that mean she did not like it and that scared her, so she got scared when it was her birthday since she knew that they were going to do that.Based on this it tells me that you should tell the person that please don't do that i don't like it.