Phsa - Revision history

98.15.57.237 at 23:43, 26 August 2020

2020-08-26T23:43:21Z

98.15.57.237 at 23:42, 26 August 2020

2020-08-26T23:42:42Z

98.15.57.237 at 22:49, 25 August 2020

2020-08-25T22:49:29Z

98.15.57.237 at 01:07, 25 August 2020

2020-08-25T01:07:55Z

98.14.153.72 at 21:03, 23 August 2020

2020-08-23T21:03:42Z

76.232.26.9 at 17:19, 20 August 2020

2020-08-20T17:19:45Z

98.15.57.237 at 01:19, 20 August 2020

2020-08-20T01:19:31Z

98.15.57.237 at 22:49, 18 August 2020

2020-08-18T22:49:52Z

67.162.10.137 at 19:36, 18 August 2020

2020-08-18T19:36:40Z

98.15.57.237 at 20:25, 17 August 2020

2020-08-17T20:25:33Z

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 <br> Phentsok Sangmo: <br />
-      Signs that your cat lives you
+      Signs that your cat loves you
   There are many people who has pet cats who doesn't know if their pet likes them. Here are the signs that helps you know if your cat loves you, the first one is when they twitch their tails, this shows that you pet is extra happy. Another one is when they purr to you, this shows that they like you. The third one is that when they give a soft nibbling, this shows how they re calm and also another way of saying i love you. The last way to know if you cats love you is when they chat a lot to you but in their cat laguage not human laguage. These are thing and ways to know if your cats love you, but this doesn't go for all cats, every cats are differen t and has different ways of showing love, but these are the most coomon ways that they show love.
 Source: https://kittentoob.com/10-surprising-signs-that-your-cat-likes-you/?utm_source=zergnet.com&utm_medium=referral&utm_campaign=zergnet_5318032.

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 <br> Phentsok Sangmo: <br />
     Why should you use peanut butter while trimming your dogs nails?
   Many people have hard times trying to cut their dogs nails,but some people use peanut butter to help and it does work, here is the reason why you should use peanut butter while trimming your dogs nails. The reason is because when you put peanut butter on your forehead, it help you keep calm. And the dogs can gives a natural clam sensation, one way is by using which is using CBD oil. You can put this in your dogs mouth or food 30 minutes before clipping their nails. If your dog weighs under 20 pounds, a quarter cup is enough and if your dog weighs between 50 and 100 pounds can drink half a cup. This can help dogs but not all of them and these are the reason why you should use peanut butter while trimming your dogs nails.

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 <br> Phentsok Sangmo: <br />
      Why you should not let your pets sleep on your bed with you
    There are many people who loves their pets and would let their pets sleep with them ,but there are some things that they don't know that can have a bad effect on them. One reason why you shouldn't let you pets sleep with you is because you could get bubonic plague, this is carried by dogs and cats. Another reason is because you can get parasites, these are kind of like lice, but they come from your pets. The third reason is because you could get scratched by your pets even though they don't do it on purpose, animals are born with sharp claws so when you sleep with them, you might get scratched in the night. The last reason is because your pet might poop on your bed and you might sleep on the poop by accident while you sleeping with your pet. These are reasons why you should never sleep with your pets.

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 <br> Phentsok Sangmo: <br />
        What does a white cat with blue eyes mean
     There are many things to know about white cat with blue eyes. One thing that you should know about them is that they bring good luck to you, so when you see one in front of your door, you better keep that cat and make it a member of your family for good luck. Another thing that you should know is that these kinds of cats is that they might be born deaf, but not all are born deaf, it depends. Another thing that you should know is that these kinds of cats aren't known to be born blind only the Abyssinian cats. The last thing that you should know is that not all cats with blue eyes are white, some can be gray with white or any other colors. These are things that you should know about white cats with blue eyes.

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 <br> Phentsok Sangmo: <br />
 <br> Places to find bats( a lot of them) <br />
 <br> ***Let's just leave the title as: Places To Find Bats <br />

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
-Phentsok Sangmo:
+<br> Phentsok Sangmo: <br />
-   Places to find bats( a lot of them)
+<br> Places to find bats( a lot of them) <br />
- There are many places to see many different kind of animals, here are places where you can find bats. The first place is Bracken Cave, Texas, this place has over 15 million Mexican free-tailed bats. The second place is called Congress Avenue Bridge: Austin, Texas, this place is also in Texas and they have 1.5 million bats there. The third place is called Carlsbad Caverns, New Mexico, they have bats that don't only live in the cave but also live on trees and cliffs. The next one is called Kasanka National Park, Zambia, this place has 10 million straw-colored fruit bats. These are places that has a lot of bats, there are more places, but these are few of the places where you can find bats.
+<br> ***Let's just leave the title as: Places To Find Bats <br />
-Source: https://www.smithsonianmag.com/travel/best-places-around-world-see-bats-180953185/?page=4.
+<br> '''Original Article'''<br />
+<br> There are many places to see many different kind of animals, here are places where you can find bats. The first place is Bracken Cave, Texas, this place has over 15 million Mexican free-tailed bats. The second place is called Congress Avenue Bridge: Austin, Texas, this place is also in Texas and they have 1.5 million bats there. The third place is called Carlsbad Caverns, New Mexico, they have bats that don't only live in the cave but also live on trees and cliffs. The next one is called Kasanka National Park, Zambia, this place has 10 million straw-colored fruit bats. These are places that has a lot of bats, there are more places, but these are few of the places where you can find bats. <br />
+<br> Source: https://www.smithsonianmag.com/travel/best-places-around-world-see-bats-180953185/?page=4. <br />
+<br> '''The Edits''' <br />
+<br> There are many places to see many different kind of animals, here are places where you can find bats. <br />
+<br> ***Edited sentence: You can find different animals in all kinds of places around the world; here is where you can find bats. <br />
+<br> The first place is Bracken Cave, Texas, this place has over 15 million Mexican free-tailed bats. <br />
 ----
-      Places that will make you feel like your in Europe
+<br> Places that will make you feel like your in Europe <br />
-   There are may places that remind you of something, some might remind you of a person or a country. The first place that will make you feel like as if you were in Europe is Poulsbo, Washington,this place has a population of 10,927 people there. The next place is called New Britain, Connecticut, this place has a population of 72,495 people. The third place is called Holland, Michigan, they have a population of 33,327 people there. The last place is Leavenworth, Washington, this place has a population of 2,010 people there. These are some of the places that will make you feel has if you were in Europe.
+<br> ***The correct 'your' we need here is 'you're'. Edited title: Places That Will Make You Feel Like You're In Europe. <br />
-Source: https://www.smithsonianmag.com/travel/ten-american-towns-feel-europe-180975340/.
+<br> '''Original Article'''<br />
+<br> There are may places that remind you of something, some might remind you of a person or a country. The first place that will make you feel like as if you were in Europe is Poulsbo, Washington,this place has a population of 10,927 people there. The next place is called New Britain, Connecticut, this place has a population of 72,495 people. The third place is called Holland, Michigan, they have a population of 33,327 people there. The last place is Leavenworth, Washington, this place has a population of 2,010 people there. These are some of the places that will make you feel has if you were in Europe. <br />
+<br> Source: https://www.smithsonianmag.com/travel/ten-american-towns-feel-europe-180975340/. <br />
+<br> '''The Edits'''<br />
+<br> There are may places that remind you of something, some might remind you of a person or a country. <br />
+<br> ***Edited sentence: Some places may remind you of something, or someone. <br />
+<br> The first place that will make you feel like as if you were in Europe is Poulsbo, Washington,this place has a population of 10,927 people there. <br />
+<br> ***Let's say: The first place, Poulsbo, Washington, will make you feel as if you are in Europe. <br />
+<br> The next place is called New Britain, Connecticut, this place has a population of 72,495 people. <br />
+<br> ***Small edits: The next place is called New Britain, Connecticut; this place has a population of 72,495 people. <br />
 ----

@@ Line 1: / Line 1: @@
 Phentsok Sangmo:
-ways to stop smoking
+<br> 10 ways to stop smoking <br />
-  There are many people in the world that have hard time stopping themselves from smoking. These are ways to help you stop smoking, one you can change the brand of cigarette so that it would taste different to you and you will slowly lose the habits.Another way is to cut back on caffeine, the reason is because caffeine enhance the taste of cigarettes. The third reason is that you should exercise more because it makes you calm when you are not smoking. The last way to prevent yourself from having cravings for more cigarettes is to eat more fruits and vegetables because that helps worsened the taste of cigarettes, which will then help you to stop smoking. These are ways to help you stop smoking, but there are still more ways to stop smoking.
+<br> ***Make sure to capitalize the first letter of each word in your title. Edited title: 10 Ways To Stop Smoking <br />
-Source:https://bestlifeonline.com/best-way-to-stop-smoking/.
+<br> '''Original Article''' <br />
+<br> There are many people in the world that have hard time stopping themselves from smoking. These are ways to help you stop smoking, one you can change the brand of cigarette so that it would taste different to you and you will slowly lose the habits.Another way is to cut back on caffeine, the reason is because caffeine enhance the taste of cigarettes. The third reason is that you should exercise more because it makes you calm when you are not smoking. The last way to prevent yourself from having cravings for more cigarettes is to eat more fruits and vegetables because that helps worsened the taste of cigarettes, which will then help you to stop smoking. These are ways to help you stop smoking, but there are still more ways to stop smoking. <br />
+<br> Source:https://bestlifeonline.com/best-way-to-stop-smoking/. <br />
+<br> '''The Edits'''<br />
+<br> There are many people in the world that have hard time stopping themselves from smoking. <br />
+<br> ***Small edits: There are many people in the world that have a hard time stopping themselves from smoking. <br />
+<br> These are ways to help you stop smoking, one you can change the brand of cigarette so that it would taste different to you and you will slowly lose the habits. <br />
+<br> ***Edited sentence: Although it is difficult, there are a handful of ways that will help you quit smoking. The first is changing the brand you smoke; the different in taste will make you want to quit. <br />
+<br> Another way is to cut back on caffeine, the reason is because caffeine enhance the taste of cigarettes. <br />
+<br> ***Small edits: You can also cut back on caffeine; this is because caffeine enhances the taste of cigarettes. <br />
 ----