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	First Time In 87 Years That Two Tropical Storms Hit The Gulf Of Mexico At The Same Time		First Time In 87 Years That Two Tropical Storms Hit The Gulf Of Mexico At The Same Time

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		+	First Time In 87 Years That Two Tropical Storms Hit The Gulf Of Mexico At The Same Time
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		+	This article is about how Mexico got hit by two tropical storms at the same time. One reason is that the tropical storm Marco hit the Louisiana coast but shortly after that people have to deal with another storm. Second, although the first tropical storm Marco has been weakened the second tropical storm Laura has been strengthened. In addition, Marco hit it's peak intensity on Sunday evening. Last, Marco also hit the wind for 40 mph. In conclusion, this what I learned.
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		+	SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/environment/marco-laura-two-storms-gulf-of-mexico-2020/
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	Scientist Might Have Confirmed That You Could Get the COVID-19 Twice		Scientist Might Have Confirmed That You Could Get the COVID-19 Twice

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		+	Scientist Might Have Confirmed That You Could Get the COVID-19 Twice
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		+	The article is about how there is a chance that you could get the COVID-19 twice. One fact is that Hong Kong was the first to report about the reinfection of the COVID-19. Second, Anecdotal cases suggested that reinfection of the coronavirus could be very much possible. In addition, virus experts weren't surprised that the virus caused a reinfection. Last, researchers will do their best to confirm whether or not the reinfection of the COVID-19 is true or false. In conclusion, there might be a chance that people could get the Covid-19 twice.
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		+	SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/science/coronavirus-antibody-plasma-treatment-reinfection/
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	Oleander Plant Doesn't Cure The Coronavirus		Oleander Plant Doesn't Cure The Coronavirus

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		+	Oleander Plant Doesn't Cure The Coronavirus
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		+	This article is about how Oleander Plant can't cure the virus. One fact is that scientists are looking for plants because some plants can make a medicine or a cure. Second, even if the plants can make cures they still have risks like scientists haven't explored most of the plants that has a chemical makeup. In addition, the reason why scientists can't use the Oleander Plant for cures is because the plant is toxic. Last, the Oleandrin causes the plant Oleander to be toxic. In conclusion, the Oleander Plant can't make any cure.
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		+	SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/health/oleandrin-cure-coronavirus-poison/
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	<br> Tiny Dust Particles May Spread The Coronavirus <br />		<br> Tiny Dust Particles May Spread The Coronavirus <br />

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-Tiny Dust Particles May Spread The Coronavirus
+<br> Tiny Dust Particles May Spread The Coronavirus <br />
+<br> ***Good! <br />
-This article is about how the dust particles could spread the coronavirus. One fact is that the Nature Communications said that the microscopic particles transmits the flu. Second, viruses can travel with dust and go to the uninfected beings. In addition, the microscopic particles are called aerosolized fomites. Last, researchers tested on guinea pigs to see if the virus travels through microscopic particles. In conclusion, the coronavirus could spread with the help of dust particles.
+<br> '''Original Article'''<br />
+<br> This article is about how the dust particles could spread the coronavirus. One fact is that the Nature Communications said that the microscopic particles transmits the flu. Second, viruses can travel with dust and go to the uninfected beings. In addition, the microscopic particles are called aerosolized fomites. Last, researchers tested on guinea pigs to see if the virus travels through microscopic particles. In conclusion, the coronavirus could spread with the help of dust particles. <br />
-SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/health/dust-particles-virus-transmission/
+<br> SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/health/dust-particles-virus-transmission/ <br />
+<br> '''The Edits'''<br />
+<br> This article is about how the dust particles could spread the coronavirus. <br />
+<br> ***Tiny edit: This article is about how dust particles could spread the coronavirus. <br />
+<br> One fact is that the Nature Communications said that the microscopic particles transmits the flu. <br />
+<br> ***Edited sentence: One fact is that Nature Communications said that microscopic particles can transmit the flu. <br />
+<br> Second, viruses can travel with dust and go to the uninfected beings. <br />
+<br> ***Good. <br />
+<br> In addition, the microscopic particles are called aerosolized fomites. <br />
+<br> ***Good. <br />
+<br> Last, researchers tested on guinea pigs to see if the virus travels through microscopic particles. <br />
+<br> ***Small edits: Lastly, researchers tested on guinea pigs to see if the virus could travel through microscopic particles. <br />
+<br> In conclusion, the coronavirus could spread with the help of dust particles. <br />
+<br> ***Good! <br />
+<br> '''Final Edits''' <br />
-The Future May Reveal Tons Of Fire Tornados
+<br> This article is about how dust particles could spread the coronavirus. One fact is that Nature Communications said that microscopic particles can transmit the flu. Second, viruses can travel with dust and go to the uninfected beings. In addition, the microscopic particles are called aerosolized fomites. Lastly, researchers tested on guinea pigs to see if the virus could travel through microscopic particles. In conclusion, the coronavirus could spread with the help of dust particles. <br />
+<br> Edited by Kelli Hoeppner <br />
 <br> The U.S Has More Power Outages Than Developed Countries <br />

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	This article is about how the dust particles could spread the coronavirus. One fact is that the Nature Communications said that the microscopic particles transmits the flu. Second, viruses can travel with dust and go to the uninfected beings. In addition, the microscopic particles are called aerosolized fomites. Last, researchers tested on guinea pigs to see if the virus travels through microscopic particles. In conclusion, the coronavirus could spread with the help of dust particles.		This article is about how the dust particles could spread the coronavirus. One fact is that the Nature Communications said that the microscopic particles transmits the flu. Second, viruses can travel with dust and go to the uninfected beings. In addition, the microscopic particles are called aerosolized fomites. Last, researchers tested on guinea pigs to see if the virus travels through microscopic particles. In conclusion, the coronavirus could spread with the help of dust particles.
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	SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/health/dust-particles-virus-transmission/		SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/health/dust-particles-virus-transmission/

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		+	Tiny Dust Particles May Spread The Coronavirus
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		+	This article is about how the dust particles could spread the coronavirus. One fact is that the Nature Communications said that the microscopic particles transmits the flu. Second, viruses can travel with dust and go to the uninfected beings. In addition, the microscopic particles are called aerosolized fomites. Last, researchers tested on guinea pigs to see if the virus travels through microscopic particles. In conclusion, the coronavirus could spread with the help of dust particles.
		+	SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/health/dust-particles-virus-transmission/
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	The Future May Reveal Tons Of Fire Tornados		The Future May Reveal Tons Of Fire Tornados

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		+	The Future May Reveal Tons Of Fire Tornados
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		+	This article is about how in the future there is going to be fire tornados. One fact is that fire tornados or Firenadoes is when the fire is so wild that it makes its own weather. Second, the heat inside large fires causes the air to rise. In addition, the fire tornados are much of a bigger whirl than regular tornados. Last, when there is a fire the moisture flung turns the clouds into pyrocumulonimbus clouds. In conclusion, in the future when the fire is so hot it will cause the fire tornado.
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		+	SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/environment/fire-tornado-2020-california/
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	<br> The U.S Has More Power Outages Than Developed Countries <br />		<br> The U.S Has More Power Outages Than Developed Countries <br />

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-The U.S Has More Power Outages Than Developed Countries
+<br> The U.S Has More Power Outages Than Developed Countries <br />
+<br> ***Nice title! <br />
-This article is about how the U.S has more power outages than developed countries. One fact is that when climate change occured there were more blackouts. Second, outages have been risen for the past few decades. In addition, the oldest power lines goes back go back to 1880s. Last, in Connecticut more than 4000 people didn't have power after a storm. In conclusion, this is what I learned from this article.
+<br> '''Original Article'''<br />
+<br> This article is about how the U.S has more power outages than developed countries. One fact is that when climate change occured there were more blackouts. Second, outages have been risen for the past few decades. In addition, the oldest power lines goes back go back to 1880s. Last, in Connecticut more than 4000 people didn't have power after a storm. In conclusion, this is what I learned from this article. <br />
-SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/environment/why-us-lose-power-storms/
+<br> SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/environment/why-us-lose-power-storms/ <br />
+<br> '''The Edits'''<br />
+<br> This article is about how the U.S has more power outages than developed countries. <br />
+<br> ***Good! <br />
+<br> One fact is that when climate change occured there were more blackouts. <br />
+<br> ***Let's write this in present tense: One fact is that when climate change occurs, blackouts are more likely to happen. <br />
+<br>  Second, outages have been risen for the past few decades. <br />
+<br> ***Small edits: Second, outages have risen in the past few decades. <br />
+<br>  In addition, the oldest power lines goes back go back to 1880s. <br />
+<br> ***Small edits: In addition, the oldest power lines go back to the 1880s. <br />
+<br> Last, in Connecticut more than 4000 people didn't have power after a storm. <br />
+<br> ***Edited sentence: Lastly, in Connecticut, more than 4,000 people didn't have power after a storm. <br />
+<br>  In conclusion, this is what I learned from this article. <br />
+<br> ***Good. <br />
+<br> '''Final Edits'''<br />
+<br> This article is about how the U.S has more power outages than developed countries. One fact is that when climate change occurs, blackouts are more likely to happen. Second, outages have risen in the past few decades. In addition, the oldest power lines go back to the 1880s. Lastly, in Connecticut, more than 4,000 people didn't have power after a storm. In conclusion, this is what I learned from this article. <br />
+<br> Edited by Kelli Hoeppner <br />
 <br> Social Distancing With Eating Disorders Will Make It Harder To Live <br />

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		+	The U.S Has More Power Outages Than Developed Countries
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		+	This article is about how the U.S has more power outages than developed countries. One fact is that when climate change occured there were more blackouts. Second, outages have been risen for the past few decades. In addition, the oldest power lines goes back go back to 1880s. Last, in Connecticut more than 4000 people didn't have power after a storm. In conclusion, this is what I learned from this article.
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		+	SOURCE: https://www.popsci.com/story/environment/why-us-lose-power-storms/
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	<br> Social Distancing With Eating Disorders Will Make It Harder To Live <br />		<br> Social Distancing With Eating Disorders Will Make It Harder To Live <br />