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 '''Having Rain Is Just as Bad As Having A Drought'''
-         Due to climate change, there have many droughts and rain fall in throughout America.  Droughts have served as threatening force to nature, as well as extreme raining.  For instance, raining in the Northeast has become harsher, increasing by 53% since 1996.  As stated in the text, "Here, many people are already plagued by the persistent beep of flash flood warnings, or the stench of sewage backing up into the basement."  Rain can cause serious damages to towns, such as flooding, pollution, and property destruction.  In conclusion,  climate change has been affecting precipitation across the nation.
+<br>Due to climate change, there has been many droughts and heavy rainfall throughout America.
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 '''Marijuana'''
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 '''How To Make Sure No One Is Spying On Your Computer'''
-          Cyber hacking is very common nowadays.  In order to protect information on your computer or your computer altogether, there are steps to take.  Firstly, one should secure his or her system with an upgraded and updated software.  Secondly, be wary of what you install on your computer to prevent infections, or viruses. Furthermore, know the warning signs. For instance, if your computer is slowing down, it is most often a sign. that your computer is being messed with.  In summary, one should be careful on what is done on one's computer.
+*** DO NOT copy the title of the article and use it as your own. Be original and create your own title.
+*** How does this title relate to the topic of the article summary, you have not written anything about spying on a computer.
-Source: https://www.popsci.com/find-and-remove-spyware
+<br>Cyber hacking is very common nowadays.
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 '''A Parallel Universe of Clinical Trials'''

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 '''Marijuana'''
-<br>There is some controversy about the marijuana policy in some states on whether to make marijuana legal.
+<br>There is some controversy about the marijuana policy in some states on whether to make marijuana legal.  (There is controversy in some states if marijuana should be legal.)
-<br>To begin with, marijuana was at first a titled Schedule I substance under the CSA.
+***You could begin with eliminating some unnecessary word choices, for example I eliminated some in the sentence. There is no need to say marijuana twice in the sentence. I combined the sentence to say "... if marijuana should be legal."
 <br>There are some potential public health benefits if marijuana is legalized.
 <br>For example, medical marijuana is legalized in some states because it aids people with some illnesses.

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 <br>To begin with, marijuana was at first a titled Schedule I substance under the CSA.
 <br>There are some potential public health benefits if marijuana is legalized.
-<br>For example, medical marijuana is legalized in some states because it aids people with some illnesses.  <br>However, there can be negative impacts for medical marijuana users if not used in great care.
+<br>For example, medical marijuana is legalized in some states because it aids people with some illnesses.
 <br>In conclusion, before deciding legalization of marijuana, one has to contemplate about the health benefits.

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		+	'''Having Rain Is Just as Bad As Having A Drought'''
		+	Due to climate change, there have many droughts and rain fall in throughout America. Droughts have served as threatening force to nature, as well as extreme raining. For instance, raining in the Northeast has become harsher, increasing by 53% since 1996. As stated in the text, "Here, many people are already plagued by the persistent beep of flash flood warnings, or the stench of sewage backing up into the basement." Rain can cause serious damages to towns, such as flooding, pollution, and property destruction. In conclusion, climate change has been affecting precipitation across the nation.
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		+	Source: https://www.popsci.com/climate-change-extreme-rain
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	'''Marijuana'''		'''Marijuana'''

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 '''Marijuana'''
-         There is some controversy about the marijuana policy in some states on whether to make marijuana legal.  To begin with, marijuana was at first a titled Schedule I substance under the CSA.  There are some potential public health benefits if marijuana is legalized.  For example, medical marijuana is legalized in some states because it aids people with some illnesses.  However, there can be negative impacts for medical marijuana users if not used in great care.  In conclusion, before deciding legalization of marijuana, one has to contemplate about the health benefits.
+<br>There is some controversy about the marijuana policy in some states on whether to make marijuana legal.
 Source: https://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/NEJMp1805432?query=featured_secondary

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 '''Marijuana'''
           There is some controversy about the marijuana policy in some states on whether to make marijuana legal.  To begin with, marijuana was at first a titled Schedule I substance under the CSA.  There are some potential public health benefits if marijuana is legalized.  For example, medical marijuana is legalized in some states because it aids people with some illnesses.  However, there can be negative impacts for medical marijuana users if not used in great care.  In conclusion, before deciding legalization of marijuana, one has to contemplate about the health benefits.
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 Source: https://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/NEJMp1805432?query=featured_secondary
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 '''Ban on New Uber and Lyft Cars'''
            The latest ban is causing turmoil among New York City, where almost everyone relies on public transportation.  Firstly, this ban hinders Ubers and Lyfts to expand with new cars in the city.  To be specific, these vehicles need to be licensed by TLC (New York City's Taxi Limousine Commission).  People have different views on this new ban.  For instance, those on the opposing side say that Ubers and Lyfts are very helpful to the people.  On the other hand, advocates of the ban indicate that it's for the better, such as decreasing congestion and pay for the "for-hire" drivers.  To conclude, this year, some New Yorkers who depend on the ride-hailing apps will have to rely on the train, bus, or regular green and yellow taxis.
 Source: https://www.popsci.com/new-york-city-bans-new-uber-and-lyft-vehicles
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 '''Screens Affect Your Sight'''
            Bright lights from a screen can damage one's eyesight.  In a spectrum of light, the shorter the wavelength of the light travels the more harmful it is.  For example, blue light can kill and damage photoreceptors in your eyes, in which blindness can occur.  As stated in the article, "...prolonged exposure to the 445 nanometer shortwave called "blue light" can trigger damage irreversible damage in eye cells."  Furthermore, blue light occurs in sunlight that looking directly into the sun for a long time can ruin your eyes, as it contains forms of UV, infrared and visible light rays.  In conclusion, you shouldn't spend too much time on electronics.
 Source: https://www.popsci.com/screens-killing-eyes-blue-light
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 '''Did Scientists Discover a New Shape?'''
            The discovery of the new shape, scutoid (in the epithhelial cells making up human skin), has caused a great deal of thinking for many.  To begin with, people wonder whether there can be new shapes.  In the same manner, according to Matthew Gursky, a professor of mathematics, what matters is how the "paper" defines it.  To be specific, the "paper" discusses about how the scutoid is relevant to biological objects, like the epithelial cells. When scientists stated a shape being "new", "it means that it's shape that has never been mathematically described and studied", as commented by Gursky.  To sum up, the scutoid still needs to go under some questioning on whether it's a "shape" or not.
 Source: https://www.popsci.com/new-shape-scutoid#page-2
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               Scientists believe that they may have found a possible new organ, the interstitium.  To begin with, the interstitium is a network of tissues that wrap around the digestive tract. However, they rediscovered that there were fluid-filled sacs.   As stated in the document, "When researchers took a closer look at this stuff with out squishing it down, that's when they identified the network of fluid-filled sacs."  Additionally, organs are defined as self-contained and sufficient, but the interstitium isn't an organ yet.  Moreover, if it were an organ, it could help figure out mechanisms in the body that aren't still fully understood.  The author comments, "Understanding better how this system works may enable us to find new ways to treat or prevent all these diseases..."  To sum up, the interstitium may be a useful piece of discovery scientists can observe to become more knowledgeable of the human body.

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		+	'''Marijuana'''
		+	There is some controversy about the marijuana policy in some states on whether to make marijuana legal. To begin with, marijuana was at first a titled Schedule I substance under the CSA. There are some potential public health benefits if marijuana is legalized. For example, medical marijuana is legalized in some states because it aids people with some illnesses. However, there can be negative impacts for medical marijuana users if not used in great care. In conclusion, before deciding legalization of marijuana, one has to contemplate about the health benefits.
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		+	Source: https://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/NEJMp1805432?query=featured_secondary

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 <br>Try to edit the articles again '''ONLY''' as I explained above.
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 '''Why (almost) Everyone Needs To Stretch When They Exercise'''