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-     Ms. March seems like a very kind, reliable and gentle person because of the her actions. In the text it states, "Mrs. March gave the mother tea and gruel, and comforted her with promises of help...". This shows to me that Ms. March is kind and reliable because she promises to help the mother and she also gives her tea. These show acts of kindness. According to the text it states, " 'I thought you'd do it,' said Mrs. March, smiling as if satisfied. 'You shall all go and help me, and when we come back we will have bread and milk for breakfast, and make it up at dinnertime.' " As you can see Ms March has a gentle personality because she doesn't yell at the girls or force them to do her bidding. She is gentle and she is kind when she is talking to the girls.
+     Ms. March seems like a very kind, reliable and gentle person because of the her actions. In the text, it states, "Mrs. March gave the mother tea and gruel, and comforted her with promises of help...". This shows to me that Ms. March is kind and reliable because she promises to help the mother and she also gives her tea. These show acts of kindness. According to the text it states, " 'I thought you'd do it,' said Mrs. March, smiling as if satisfied. 'You shall all go and help me, and when we come back we will have bread and milk for breakfast, and make it up at dinnertime.' " As you can see Ms March has a gentle personality because she doesn't yell at the girls or force them to do her bidding. She is gentle and she is kind when she is talking to the girls.
   Beth was scared because of her turn to sit in the chair. In the text it states, “ ‘I used to be so frightened when it was my turn to sit in the chair with the crown on and see you all come marching round to give the presents, with a kiss.’” This shows us that Beth was frightened by her turn to sit in the chair with the crown on her birthday. According to the text it states, “ I liked the things and the kisses, but it was dreadful to have you sit looking at me while I opened the bundles,’ said Beth, who was toasting her face and the bread for tea at the same time.“ As you can see Beth uses the term “dreadful” so this shows us that it was hard to open the bundles while her family looks at her.

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-      Beth was scared because of her turn to sit in the chair. In the text it states, “ ‘I used to be so frightened when it was my turn to sit in the chair with the crown on and see you all come marching round to give the presents, with a kiss.’” This shows us that Beth was frightened by her turn to sit in the chair with the crown on her birthday. According to the text it states, “ I liked the things and the kisses, but it was dreadful to have you sit looking at me while I opened the bundles,’ said Beth, who was toasting her face and the bread for tea at the same time.“ As you can see Beth uses the term “dreadful” so this shows us that it was hard to open the bundles while her family looks at her.
+    Ms. March seems like a very kind, reliable and gentle person because of the her actions. In the text it states, "Mrs. March gave the mother tea and gruel, and comforted her with promises of help...". This shows to me that Ms. March is kind and reliable because she promises to help the mother and she also gives her tea. These show acts of kindness. According to the text it states, " 'I thought you'd do it,' said Mrs. March, smiling as if satisfied. 'You shall all go and help me, and when we come back we will have bread and milk for breakfast, and make it up at dinnertime.' " As you can see Ms March has a gentle personality because she doesn't yell at the girls or force them to do her bidding. She is gentle and she is kind when she is talking to the girls.
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        Beth was scared because of her turn to sit in the chair. In the text it states, “ ‘I used to be so frightened when it was my turn to sit in the chair with the crown on and see you all come marching round to give the presents, with a kiss.’” This shows us that Beth was frightened by her turn to sit in the chair with the crown on her birthday. According to the text it states, “ I liked the things and the kisses, but it was dreadful to have you sit looking at me while I opened the bundles,’ said Beth, who was toasting her face and the bread for tea at the same time.“ As you can see Beth uses the term “dreadful” so this shows us that it was hard to open the bundles while her family looks at her.
    Demi is loving and caring, the soul and body worked perfectly together. For example, the text states, " The natural refinement which nothing but home influence can teach, gave him sweet and simple manners: his mother had cherished an innocent and loving heart in him". This shows us how Demi is caring and sweet with his manners because of influence and his mom has cherished an innocent and a very kind heart in Demi. According to the text it states, "his father had watched over the physical growth of his boy, and kept the little body straight and strong on wholesome food and exercise and sleep" As you can see his dad has watched over his physical body of Demi, which is also how the soul and the body work peacefully with each other.

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-Beth was scared because of her turn to sit in the chair. In the text it states, “ ‘I used to be so frightened when it was my turn to sit in the chair with the crown on and see you all come marching round to give the presents, with a kiss.’” This shows us that Beth was frightened by her turn to sit in the chair with the crown on her birthday. According to the text it states, “ I liked the things and the kisses, but it was dreadful to have you sit looking at me while I opened the bundles,’ said Beth, who was toasting her face and the bread for tea at the same time.“ As you can see Beth uses the term “dreadful” so this shows us that it was hard to open the bundles while her family looks at her.
+      Beth was scared because of her turn to sit in the chair. In the text it states, “ ‘I used to be so frightened when it was my turn to sit in the chair with the crown on and see you all come marching round to give the presents, with a kiss.’” This shows us that Beth was frightened by her turn to sit in the chair with the crown on her birthday. According to the text it states, “ I liked the things and the kisses, but it was dreadful to have you sit looking at me while I opened the bundles,’ said Beth, who was toasting her face and the bread for tea at the same time.“ As you can see Beth uses the term “dreadful” so this shows us that it was hard to open the bundles while her family looks at her.
    Demi is loving and caring, the soul and body worked perfectly together. For example, the text states, " The natural refinement which nothing but home influence can teach, gave him sweet and simple manners: his mother had cherished an innocent and loving heart in him". This shows us how Demi is caring and sweet with his manners because of influence and his mom has cherished an innocent and a very kind heart in Demi. According to the text it states, "his father had watched over the physical growth of his boy, and kept the little body straight and strong on wholesome food and exercise and sleep" As you can see his dad has watched over his physical body of Demi, which is also how the soul and the body work peacefully with each other.

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		+	Beth was scared because of her turn to sit in the chair. In the text it states, “ ‘I used to be so frightened when it was my turn to sit in the chair with the crown on and see you all come marching round to give the presents, with a kiss.’” This shows us that Beth was frightened by her turn to sit in the chair with the crown on her birthday. According to the text it states, “ I liked the things and the kisses, but it was dreadful to have you sit looking at me while I opened the bundles,’ said Beth, who was toasting her face and the bread for tea at the same time.“ As you can see Beth uses the term “dreadful” so this shows us that it was hard to open the bundles while her family looks at her.
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	Demi is loving and caring, the soul and body worked perfectly together. For example, the text states, " The natural refinement which nothing but home influence can teach, gave him sweet and simple manners: his mother had cherished an innocent and loving heart in him". This shows us how Demi is caring and sweet with his manners because of influence and his mom has cherished an innocent and a very kind heart in Demi. According to the text it states, "his father had watched over the physical growth of his boy, and kept the little body straight and strong on wholesome food and exercise and sleep" As you can see his dad has watched over his physical body of Demi, which is also how the soul and the body work peacefully with each other.		Demi is loving and caring, the soul and body worked perfectly together. For example, the text states, " The natural refinement which nothing but home influence can teach, gave him sweet and simple manners: his mother had cherished an innocent and loving heart in him". This shows us how Demi is caring and sweet with his manners because of influence and his mom has cherished an innocent and a very kind heart in Demi. According to the text it states, "his father had watched over the physical growth of his boy, and kept the little body straight and strong on wholesome food and exercise and sleep" As you can see his dad has watched over his physical body of Demi, which is also how the soul and the body work peacefully with each other.

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		+	Demi is loving and caring, the soul and body worked perfectly together. For example, the text states, " The natural refinement which nothing but home influence can teach, gave him sweet and simple manners: his mother had cherished an innocent and loving heart in him". This shows us how Demi is caring and sweet with his manners because of influence and his mom has cherished an innocent and a very kind heart in Demi. According to the text it states, "his father had watched over the physical growth of his boy, and kept the little body straight and strong on wholesome food and exercise and sleep" As you can see his dad has watched over his physical body of Demi, which is also how the soul and the body work peacefully with each other.
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	The author uses personification by doing the same things to the plants as it happens to us humans too. For example, the text says "Then it was laid in water, as if it were to be drowned." Us humans drown in water to just like how the author is explaining that the flax was left in the water, left to be drowned. According to the text it states, " By experiencing evil as well as good we become wise." Flax says that the plants won't be smarter if they have no experience, since he has had experience he says he has been smarter because of it. When we make mistakes or mess something up because it's our first time doing that job that is going to our experience. Sure it's not like drowning or setting up in flames but still a problem is a problem and we will know how to solve it AFTER we mess up because NO ONE i s perfect and won't get everything right on their first try.		The author uses personification by doing the same things to the plants as it happens to us humans too. For example, the text says "Then it was laid in water, as if it were to be drowned." Us humans drown in water to just like how the author is explaining that the flax was left in the water, left to be drowned. According to the text it states, " By experiencing evil as well as good we become wise." Flax says that the plants won't be smarter if they have no experience, since he has had experience he says he has been smarter because of it. When we make mistakes or mess something up because it's our first time doing that job that is going to our experience. Sure it's not like drowning or setting up in flames but still a problem is a problem and we will know how to solve it AFTER we mess up because NO ONE i s perfect and won't get everything right on their first try.

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		+	The author uses personification by doing the same things to the plants as it happens to us humans too. For example, the text says "Then it was laid in water, as if it were to be drowned." Us humans drown in water to just like how the author is explaining that the flax was left in the water, left to be drowned. According to the text it states, " By experiencing evil as well as good we become wise." Flax says that the plants won't be smarter if they have no experience, since he has had experience he says he has been smarter because of it. When we make mistakes or mess something up because it's our first time doing that job that is going to our experience. Sure it's not like drowning or setting up in flames but still a problem is a problem and we will know how to solve it AFTER we mess up because NO ONE i s perfect and won't get everything right on their first try.
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	The article is mainly about how the apple tree is feeling towards the flowers and the grass, the tree feels bad and brags about himself. In the text it states, " "Poor despised herbs," said the apple branch; "there is really a difference between them and such as I am. How unhappy they must be if they can feel as those in my position do!" This evidence shows us how the tree branch is feeling bad for the herbs and he is sort of mocking the herbs for being so short. The tree branch also is saying that the herbs would be happier if they were the same height as him. According to the text it states, " And the apple branch looked with a sort of pity upon them, especially on a certain little flower that is found in fields and in ditches. No one bound these flowers together, they were too common,—they were even known to grow between the paving stones, shooting up everywhere like bad weeds,—and they bore the very ugly name of "dog flowers," or "dandelions." " In short, the tree branch is also making fun of the flowers because of their ugly name. The tree branch also makes fun of the poor flower by saying the flowers grow everywhere like bad weeds.		The article is mainly about how the apple tree is feeling towards the flowers and the grass, the tree feels bad and brags about himself. In the text it states, " "Poor despised herbs," said the apple branch; "there is really a difference between them and such as I am. How unhappy they must be if they can feel as those in my position do!" This evidence shows us how the tree branch is feeling bad for the herbs and he is sort of mocking the herbs for being so short. The tree branch also is saying that the herbs would be happier if they were the same height as him. According to the text it states, " And the apple branch looked with a sort of pity upon them, especially on a certain little flower that is found in fields and in ditches. No one bound these flowers together, they were too common,—they were even known to grow between the paving stones, shooting up everywhere like bad weeds,—and they bore the very ugly name of "dog flowers," or "dandelions." " In short, the tree branch is also making fun of the flowers because of their ugly name. The tree branch also makes fun of the poor flower by saying the flowers grow everywhere like bad weeds.