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−	-	+	The traits that Ivan had to allow him to be blessed with luck and wealth were trust and understanding because when Ivan listened and followed the master's advice luck and wealth started to come his way. For example, the article has stated "they took the new road Ivan kept to the old one. And robbers fell upon them before they had gone far from Ivan as they were going by the fields of the houses in the meadow." This quote is proving that Ivan had understood his master's advice and went through the old road and misfortune did not fall upon him but to the ones who had taken the new road. Furthermore, the article has also stated "When they came to the place where they used to lodge, Ivan, said, "I must see the host." "The host," they cried; "what do you want with the host? Here is the hostess, and she's young and pretty...So he went into the kitchen to see the host; he found him a weak old man turning the soup. "Oh! oh!" quoth Ivan, "I'll not lodge here, but will go next door."...they were taken and carried to prison, till at last Ivan came to them. "Alas! alas! Ivan," cried they, "bad luck sticks to us; our host was kidnapped last night, and we shall be imprisoned for it." " This shows that Ivan had also trusted his master because he decided to heed his master's advice and luck was on his side. This shows how the traits Ivan had allowed him to be blessed with luck and wealth.

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	<br>Some accomplishments that William has achieved include raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people into donating food. According to the article “he talked shoppers into buying food — 1,400 pounds worth — to send home.” This quote explains that William accomplished talking people into donating food. Furthermore, the article has also stated "he’s collected more than 55,000 pounds of food, raised $63,000 and been recognized as a Prudential Spirit of Community honoree." This quote proves that William has accomplished raising 55,000 pounds of food. These are some accomplishments that William has achieved including raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people into donating food.<br />		<br>Some accomplishments that William has achieved include raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people into donating food. According to the article “he talked shoppers into buying food — 1,400 pounds worth — to send home.” This quote explains that William accomplished talking people into donating food. Furthermore, the article has also stated "he’s collected more than 55,000 pounds of food, raised $63,000 and been recognized as a Prudential Spirit of Community honoree." This quote proves that William has accomplished raising 55,000 pounds of food. These are some accomplishments that William has achieved including raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people into donating food.<br />
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              Some accomplishments that William has achieved is raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people into donating food. According to the article has stated "he talked shoppers into buying food — 1,400 pounds worth — to send home." This quote explains that William accomplished talking people into donating food. Furthermore, the article has also stated " he’s collected more than 55,000 pounds of food, raised $63,000 and been recognized as a Prudential Spirit of Community honoree." This quote is proving that William has accomplished raising 55 pounds of food. These are some accomplishments that William has achieved like raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking to people into donating food.
 Dear. Penny Yagake
 I question why you would edit my work. Is there a purpose to this? Are you doing this out of your own goodwill or were you hired by someone to edit work?
 -Franklin Tjong

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 Dear. Penny Yagake
 I question why you would edit my work. Is there a purpose to this? Are you doing this out of your own goodwill or were you hired by someone to edit work?
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−	Some accomplishments that William has achieved is raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people ~~to donate~~ food. According to the article has stated "he talked shoppers into buying food — 1,400 pounds worth — to send home." This quote explains that William accomplished talking people ~~to donate~~ food. Furthermore, the article has also stated " he’s collected more than 55,000 pounds of food, raised $63,000 and been recognized as a Prudential Spirit of Community honoree." This quote is proving that William has accomplished raising 55 pounds of food. ~~This is~~ some accomplishments William has achieved.	+	Some accomplishments that William has achieved is raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people into donating food. According to the article has stated "he talked shoppers into buying food — 1,400 pounds worth — to send home." This quote explains that William accomplished talking people into donating food. Furthermore, the article has also stated " he’s collected more than 55,000 pounds of food, raised $63,000 and been recognized as a Prudential Spirit of Community honoree." This quote is proving that William has accomplished raising 55 pounds of food. These are some accomplishments that William has achieved like raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking to people into donating food.

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−	Some accomplishments that William has achieved is raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people to donate food. According to the article has stated "he talked shoppers into buying food — 1,400 pounds worth — to send home." This quote explains that William accomplished talking people to donate food. Furthermore, the article has also stated " he’s collected more than 55,000 pounds of food, raised $63,000 and been recognized as a Prudential Spirit of Community honoree." This quote is proving that ~~william~~ has ~~accomplishesd~~ raising 55 pounds of food	+	Some accomplishments that William has achieved is raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people to donate food. According to the article has stated "he talked shoppers into buying food — 1,400 pounds worth — to send home." This quote explains that William accomplished talking people to donate food. Furthermore, the article has also stated " he’s collected more than 55,000 pounds of food, raised $63,000 and been recognized as a Prudential Spirit of Community honoree." This quote is proving that William has accomplished raising 55 pounds of food. This is some accomplishments William has achieved.

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		+	Some accomplishments that William has achieved is raising 55,000 pounds of food and talking people to donate food. According to the article has stated "he talked shoppers into buying food — 1,400 pounds worth — to send home." This quote explains that William accomplished talking people to donate food. Furthermore, the article has also stated " he’s collected more than 55,000 pounds of food, raised $63,000 and been recognized as a Prudential Spirit of Community honoree." This quote is proving that william has accomplishesd raising 55 pounds of food
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	In order to prevent yourself from getting the virus, some ways to protect yourself are to wash your hands for at least 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue instead of sneezing in the air. the article states "reducing the spread of viruses. Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds." this is saying that student or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce virus spread. Furthermore, the article states "Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets. This quote is explaining that it is recommended to cough or sneeze in tissues to stay safe. This is how the article proves that there are some ways to protect yourself like washing your hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.		In order to prevent yourself from getting the virus, some ways to protect yourself are to wash your hands for at least 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue instead of sneezing in the air. the article states "reducing the spread of viruses. Students and staff alike should wash with soap and water for at least 20 seconds." this is saying that student or others should wash their hands for twenty seconds to keep clean and reduce virus spread. Furthermore, the article states "Coughing or sneezing into a tissue or the crook of an elbow can help reduce the spread of airborne virus droplets. This quote is explaining that it is recommended to cough or sneeze in tissues to stay safe. This is how the article proves that there are some ways to protect yourself like washing your hands for 20 seconds and coughing or sneezing into a tissue.

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	Someways students can learn best while studying online by removing all distractions and scheduling their plans so they can do online studying. For example, the article has stated "having a dedicated space at home to take online courses can make your learning more effective. Remove any distractions from the space, and if possible" This is stating that to learn you should remove all distractions as possible. Furthermore, the article also stated ". Open your calendar and choose a predictable, reliable time that you can dedicate to watching lectures and completing assignments. This helps ensure that your courses won’t become the last thing on your to-do list. So, schedule time to study on your calendar." This quote is stating that you should make time for online studying. This is someways students can learn best while studying online by removing distractions and scheduling their plans.		Someways students can learn best while studying online by removing all distractions and scheduling their plans so they can do online studying. For example, the article has stated "having a dedicated space at home to take online courses can make your learning more effective. Remove any distractions from the space, and if possible" This is stating that to learn you should remove all distractions as possible. Furthermore, the article also stated ". Open your calendar and choose a predictable, reliable time that you can dedicate to watching lectures and completing assignments. This helps ensure that your courses won’t become the last thing on your to-do list. So, schedule time to study on your calendar." This quote is stating that you should make time for online studying. This is someways students can learn best while studying online by removing distractions and scheduling their plans.
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