Marijuana Helps People With Chronic Gut Problems

A new study shows that marijuana can help chronic problems such as bowel diseases. Many IBD patients use cannabis products to help treat illness. The researchers discovered that in the gut, a thin later of epithelial cells mediates between our bodies and cells help neutrophils to cross into the gut and eat up some of the microbes. The chemical pathway produces substances that prevent neutrophils from getting through the epithelial cells and into the gut. Overall, the study proves that cannabinoids can provide relief for people with IBD because they perform the same function as the endocannabinoids.

https://www.popsci.com/inflammatory-bowel-cannabis#page-3



Disney Use Robots Instead of Humans


Disney is building flying machines so that robots can do difficult and dangerous stunts that humans can’t do. The flying machine is called Stickman, fearless robotic performer, which replaces human performers. Stickman has a body with three sections and two flexible joints. The brains consist of a micro controller, and two key sensor systems help it figure out what its body is doing in the air. In fact, Disney has humans performing stunts, but they cannot fly and their body can get tired performing over and over. Unlike humans, Stickman can perform without getting tired. For these reasons, Disney is using Stickman to do dangerous stunts.

https://www.popsci.com/disney-acrobatic-robots-stuntronics





Human Need Oxygen in Mars

It's hard for humans to survive in space without oxygen. One of the important problems with long-distance space flights is getting enough oxygen for astronauts to breathe and more fuel to power electronics. Unfortunately theirs not a lot of oxygen in space and the long-distances makes it hard to refill the oxygen quickly. A study shows that hydrogen and oxygen from water alone using a semiconductor material and sunlight in zero gravity can be reduce. Launching a rocket with water can produce into hydrogen and oxygen which can be used to sustain life. Hydrogen and oxygen can be combined using a fuel cell returning the solar energy taken in by the photo catalysis. This new study is the key to long distance space travel for humans. https://www.popsci.com/making-oxygen-from-water-in-space






Technological Exercise for Polar Bear

In today's existence, polar bears are endangered due to the decrease of climate change. Due to this change, scientist have put bears on horse treadmills to see how much energy it will take for a bear to walk. By doing this it can help scientist predict how much stamina will be needed to find food to survive. Polar bears are having to walk more and more each year across the sea ice due to lack of food. As a result, polar bears are having to use more energy than ever before, leading to their decline in population. Scientist have feared this day would come and have warned that if temperature continues to climb, polar bears could be extinct by 2100. However by rescuing polar bears from the wild like Tatqiq, researchers are on the way to saving these great creatures. https://www.popsci.com/polar-bear-treadmill#page-3








Vaping May Harm the Lung

Chemicals in e-cigarettes can damage lung tissue. E-cigarettes contain nicotine which is highly addictive. Researchers tested the effects of nicotine which caused inflammation in lung tissue. Vaping liquids contain solvents transformed into carbonyls which include formaldehyde and other compounds that are known or suspected of causing cancer. Some liquids used in e-cigarettes have been shown to contain heavy metals, silicates and other materials which can be toxic to the lungs. Irian Petrache, who is a doctor and lung specialist at Indiana University in Indianapolis, and her research team concluded that vaping would be no better for the lungs than cigarette smoking. https://www.sciencenewsforstudents.org/article/vaping-may-harm-lung




Chinese Space Station

The Chinese space station Tiangong- is falling towards earth sometime at the end of March or in the beginning of April. In 2016 Chinese officers said that they had lost control of the space station, which would de-orbit, breaking apart and burning up the planets atmosphere. The Chinese space station will hit the planet somewhere north of the bottom of Australia and south of top of the United States. Researcher calculated that the odds of anyone getting hit by space junk are roughly in 1 in 3,200. European space agency estimates that the likely hood of getting hit by a piece of Tiangong-1 is 10 million times smaller than the yearly chance of getting hit by lightning. Researchers believe that even if parts of the station do hit land, it still unlikely that they will hit someone. https://www.popsci.com/chinese-space-station-falling-out-sky






Termites are Cockroach

Scientists discovered that termites belong to the cockroach group called Blattodea. Researchers reported that several groups of microbes that digest wood in termite guts live in some wood-eating cockroaches. One biologist used DNA to figure out that termites evolved as a branch on the many-limned family tree of cockroaches. Cryptocercus roaches live in almost termite like style in the Appalachian Mountains. Monogamous pairs of Cryptocercus roaches eat tunnels in wood and raise young there. After years of debate, the American entomologists' organization voted to switch the new view of termites and the common names of individual termite species remained.

https://www.sciencenews.org/article/its-official-termites-are-just-cockroaches





Human Skin Bacteria Have Caner-Fighting Powers

      • Edited for spelling, do not copy the title of the original article; Human Skin Bacteria Have Cancer-Fighting Powers

Certain skin-dwelling microbes may lead to drugs that treat or prevent skin cancer.

      • Don't copy the sentences directly from the article, you need to restate the sentences in your own words.

Chemical makes compound that stops DNA formation in tumor cells.

      • This is not a complete sentence, you do not explain what chemical you are referring to; The bacteria make a chemical compound that stops DNA formation in tumor cells.

Mice slathered with one strain of Staphylococcus epidermidis that makes the compound developed fewer tumors after exposure to damaging ultraviolet radiation compared with those treated with a strain lacking the compound.

      • Again, this is plagiarism, you need to rewrite the information without copying directly from the article.

Staphylococcal species have many bacteria that live on human skin.

      • Good!

A strain of S. epidermidis that made a compound-6-N-hydroxyamninopourine (6-HAP) was discovered from antimicrobial powers of bacteria.

      • Edited for comma and article use; A strain of S. epidermidis that made a compound, 6-N-hydroxyamninopourine (6-HAP), was discovered from the antimicrobial powers of bacteria.

The researchers estimated that 20 percent of the human population have S. epidermidis strains that make 6-HAP on their skin which may prevent skin caner cells, block DNA synthesis in lymphomas cells, and cancerous immune system cells.

      • Edited for spelling; The researchers estimated that 20 percent of the human population have S. epidermidis strains that make 6-HAP on their skin which may prevent skin cancer cells, block DNA synthesis in lymphomas cells, and cancerous immune system cells.


Human Skin Bacteria Have Caner-Fighting Powers

Certain skin-dwelling microbes may lead to drugs that treat or prevent skin cancer. Chemical makes compound that stops DNA formation in tumor cells. Mice slathered with one strain of Staphylococcus epidermidis that makes the compound developed fewer tumors after exposure to damaging ultraviolet radiation compared with those treated with a strain lacking the compound. Staphylococcal species have many bacteria that live on human skin. A strain of S. epidermidis that made a compound-6-N-hydroxyamninopourine (6-HAP) was discovered from antimicrobial powers of bacteria. The researchers estimated that 20 percent of the human population have S. epidermidis strains that make 6-HAP on their skin which may prevent skin caner cells, block DNA synthesis in lymphomas cells, and cancerous immune system cells.

Human Skin Bacteria Have Cancer-Fighting Powers

Certain skin-dwelling microbes may lead to drugs that treat or prevent skin cancer. The bacteria make a chemical compound that stops DNA formation in tumor cells. Mice slathered with one strain of Staphylococcus epidermidis that makes the compound developed fewer tumors after exposure to damaging ultraviolet radiation compared with those treated with a strain lacking the compound. Staphylococcal species have many bacteria that live on human skin. A strain of S. epidermidis that made a compound, 6-N-hydroxyamninopourine (6-HAP), was discovered from the antimicrobial powers of bacteria. The researchers estimated that 20 percent of the human population have S. epidermidis strains that make 6-HAP on their skin which may prevent skin cancer cells, block DNA synthesis in lymphomas cells, and cancerous immune system cells.

      • You need to make sure that you do not copy directly from the article that you are summarizing. Try to work on spelling and using articles.

Edited by Laurel Copes

https://www.sciencenews.org/article/human-skin-bacteria-have-cancer-fighting-powers





Choosing To Amplify

      • Edited for clarity; Do Tree Crickets Choose to Amplify Their Calls?

Male crickets are known for their calls to attract females especially the tree crickets.

      • Edited for comma use; Male crickets are known for their calls to attract females, especially the tree crickets.

Tree crickets are known for using leaves to amplify their calls.

      • Edited for fluidity, I changed "are known for" since you used that phrase in the sentence before; These tree crickets use leaves as a baffle to amplify their calls.

However, in recent years only very few of these crickets use these leaves to baffle their calls.

      • Edited for fluidity; However, in recent years very few of these crickets have been using this technique.

Scientist have found that when using leaves to maximize their calls, crickets use the perfect size leaves and revamp it to make the perfect call.

      • Edited for subject-verb agreement; Scientists have found that when using leaves to maximize their calls, crickets use the perfect size leaf and revamp it to make the perfect call.

Researchers have discovered that whether to baffle their calls with leaves or not is strictly inherited.

      • Good!

Although tree crickets have the ability to baffle their calls they rarely do so because their pay be a price to pay.

      • Used the wrong form of "there" and edited for spelling; Although tree crickets have the ability to baffle their calls they rarely do so because there may be a price to pay.

Choosing To Amplify

Male crickets are known for their calls to attract females especially the tree crickets. Tree crickets are known for using leaves to amplify their calls. However, in recent years only very few of these crickets use these leaves to baffle their calls. Scientist have found that when using leaves to maximize their calls, crickets use the perfect size leaves and revamp it to make the perfect call. Researchers have discovered that whether to baffle their calls with leaves or not is strictly inherited. Although tree crickets have the ability to baffle their calls they rarely do so because their pay be a price to pay.

Do Tree Crickets Choose to Amplify Their Calls?

Male crickets are known for their calls to attract females, especially the tree crickets. These tree crickets use leaves as a baffle to amplify their calls. However, in recent years very few of these crickets have been using this technique. Scientists have found that when using leaves to maximize their calls, crickets use the perfect size leaf and revamp it to make the perfect call. Researchers have discovered that whether to baffle their calls with leaves or not is strictly inherited. Although tree crickets have the ability to baffle their calls they rarely do so because there may be a price to pay.

      • You need to work on word choice and paragraph structure; think about how you can communicate the information in the most direct, logical way and try not to repeat phrases or information.

Edited by Laurel Copes

http://science.sciencemag.org/content/358/6370/twil





Long Sleeves on Doctors' White Coats May Spread Germs

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Doctors' should wear short sleeve coat in order to avoid contamination with viruses which can be transmitted to patients.

      • Edited for punctuation and subject-verb agreement; Doctors should wear short sleeve coats in order to avoid contamination with viruses which can be transmitted to patients.

Researcher had 34 health care workers wear either long or short sleeve white coats while they examined a mannequin that had been contaminated with DNA from the cauliflower mosaic virus.

      • Edited for subject-verb agreement and spelling; Researchers had 34 healthcare workers wear either long or short sleeve white coats while they examined a mannequin that had been contaminated with DNA from the cauliflower mosaic virus.

Health care workers with long sleeve coats had 25% of contamination in their sleeves or on their wrist. Health care workers with short sleeve coats had 0% of contamination with the virus DNA.

      • Edited for spelling; Healthcare workers with long sleeve coats had 25% of contamination in their sleeves or on their wrist. Healthcare workers with short sleeve coats had 0% of contamination with the virus DNA.

In 2007, the United Kingdom made a policy for hospitals which recommended that health care personal wear short sleeves.

      • Edited for spelling; In 2007, the United Kingdom made a policy for hospitals which recommended that healthcare personnel wear short sleeves.

Overall, the study shows that the doctors and health care workers should wear short sleeve coats or roll up the sleeves above the elbows to reduce the infections that can be spread in the hospital.

      • Edited for spelling and fluidity; Overall, the study shows that doctors and healthcare workers should wear short sleeve coats or roll up the sleeves above the elbows to reduce infections that can be spread in the hospital.

Long Sleeves on Doctors' White Coats May Spread Germs

Doctors' should wear short sleeve coat in order to avoid contamination with viruses which can be transmitted to patients. Researcher had 34 health care workers wear either long or short sleeve white coats while they examined a mannequin that had been contaminated with DNA from the cauliflower mosaic virus. Health care workers with long sleeve coats had 25% of contamination in their sleeves or on their wrist. Health care workers with short sleeve coats had 0% of contamination with the virus DNA. In 2007, the United Kingdom made a policy for hospitals which recommended that health care personal wear short sleeves. Overall, the study shows that the doctors and health care workers should wear short sleeve coats or roll up the sleeves above the elbows to reduce the infections that can be spread in the hospital.

Long Sleeves on Doctors' White Coats May Spread Germs

Doctors should wear short sleeve coats in order to avoid contamination with viruses which can be transmitted to patients. Researchers had 34 healthcare workers wear either long or short sleeve white coats while they examined a mannequin that had been contaminated with DNA from the cauliflower mosaic virus. Healthcare workers with long sleeve coats had 25% of contamination in their sleeves or on their wrist. Healthcare workers with short sleeve coats had 0% of contamination with the virus DNA. In 2007, the United Kingdom made a policy for hospitals which recommended that healthcare personnel wear short sleeves. Overall, the study shows that doctors and healthcare workers should wear short sleeve coats or roll up the sleeves above the elbows to reduce infections that can be spread in the hospital.

      • You need to work on spelling and subject-verb agreement.

Edited by Laurel Copes

https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/long-sleeves-on-doctors-white-coats-may-spread-germs/




Winter Solstice Thanks

      • Edited for clarity; Why We Should Give Thanks for the Winter Solstice

Today marks the first day of Winter in North America and the first day of Summer in South America.

      • You do not need to capitalize the seasons; Today marks the first day of winter in North America and the first day of summer in South America.

The Winter Solstice and the summer Solstice are the longest and shortest days of the year.

      • Edited for capitalization; I would also specify which solstice is the longest and which is the shortest; The winter solstice and the summer solstice are the longest and shortest days of the year.

This is a good opportunity to imagine what a day would look like if we lived on another planet because most planets like Venus can't see the Solstice.

      • Edited for clarity and comma usage; This is a good opportunity to imagine what a day would look like from another planet, because most planets, like Venus, cannot see the solstices.

If the Artic Cirlce didn't begin 66 degrees North of the equator it would effect how much light the Northern hemisphere would recieve during the Winter months.

      • Edited for spelling, word choice, and capitalization; If the Arctic Circle didn't begin 66 degrees north of the Equator it would affect how much light the Northern Hemisphere would receive during the winter months.

Also if the Earth wasn't tilted the Northern hemisphere would have complete darkness during the Winter season.

      • Edited for comma usage; Also, if the Earth wasn't tilted, the Northern Hemisphere would have complete darkness during the winter season.

Since the Earth is tilted we have proper sun light that keeps us warm and alive.

      • Edited for fluidity and spelling; However, because the Earth is tilted, we have proper sunlight that keeps us warm and alive.

Winter Solstice Thanks

Today marks the first day of Winter in North America and the first day of Summer in South America. The Winter Solstice and the summer Solstice are the longest and shortest days of the year. This is a good opportunity to imagine what a day would look like if we lived on another planet because most planets like Venus can't see the Solstice. If the Artic Cirlce didn't begin 66 degrees North of the equator it would effect how much light the Northern hemisphere would recieve during the Winter months. Also if the Earth wasn't tilted the Northern hemisphere would have complete darkness during the Winter season. Since the Earth is tilted we have proper sun light that keeps us warm and alive.

Why We Should Give Thanks for the Winter Solstice

Today marks the first day of winter in North America and the first day of summer in South America. The winter solstice and the summer solstice are the longest and shortest days of the year. This is a good opportunity to imagine what a day would look like from another planet, because most planets, like Venus, cannot see the solstices. If the Arctic Circle didn't begin 66 degrees north of the Equator it would affect how much light the Northern Hemisphere would receive during the winter months. Also, if the Earth wasn't tilted, the Northern Hemisphere would have complete darkness during the winter season. However, because the Earth is tilted, we have proper sunlight that keeps us warm and alive.

      • You need to work on using commas and capitalization.

Edited by Laurel Copes

https://www.nytimes.com/2017/12/20/science/winter-solstice-december-21.html





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This is Mr. Steve. You must condense your article to:
1. Headline
2. Topic sentence
3. Fact 1 sentence
4. Fact 2 sentence
5. Fact 3 sentence
6. Fact 4 sentence
7.Concluding sentence
8. Source: (The URL - the website that you got the news articles from. Like this: Source: https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/long-sleeves-on-doctors-white-coats-may-spread-germs/ )
Try to edit this one as I explained above and then I'll have it edited.