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Hi I my name is Jeannie Nieto These are two activities that seem like they might be the most fun. I think mad lib are the most fun because mad libs is a hilarious way for kids to brush up for there speech. Mad libs are cheap things that make you laugh. Mad libs will cement concept such as noun, verbs,and adjectives while coming with ridiculous stories.


Fun and Affordable At-Home Activities
I added a title since you didn't have one.

These are two activities that seem like they might be the most fun.
This is a good attention grabber! I'm interested to read about these activities that you think might be fun. However, it's important that you have some more introduction to the topic of your paragraph.
With schools being closed and activities shut down, it's hard to stay busy. Here are two activities for students that I think seem super fun!

I think mad lib are the most fun because mad libs is a hilarious way for kids to brush up for there speech.
Since Mad Libs is a proper noun, it has to be capitalized - make sure you capitalize it! Since you mentioned Mad Libs once in this sentence, you can use the pronoun "they" the second time instead (that way you don't sound repetitive). Also make sure that you are using the correct form of there/their/they're; in this case, you would use "their". Why? "Their" is a possessive word, and in this case, the kids own the speech, so you would say "their speech". The sentence you used is almost exactly what is in the article, so make sure you're using your own words! Your word choice here is great! "Hilarious" is a wonderful word to describe Mad Libs and it makes the reader want to try them out; however, the reader doesn't know what Mad Libs are, so make sure you give a short description at the beginning!
Mad Libs are hilarious word games that help kids keep up with parts of their speech.

Mad libs are cheap things that make you laugh.
"cheap things" isn't a very good descriptor, but that's okay because we added the explanation of what Mad Libs are in the sentence before this! Instead, maybe mention how Mad Libs only cost $5 and are very funny; however, since the sentence after this one keeps describing Mad Libs, we will put that one first.
They help reaffirm concepts such as nouns, verbs, and adjectives all while creating crazy stories that each have special themes. Mad Libs aren't just funny and educational, but the booklets also only cost $5!

Mad libs will cement concept such as noun, verbs,and adjectives while coming with ridiculous stories.
This sentence is almost exactly the word from the text, and that's something you could get in trouble for in the future, so it's important that you avoid this and use your own words! Sometimes it can be difficult to use your own words, but just think if you were trying to explain Mad Libs to someone else, and then use that!

Fun and Affordable At-Home Activities

With schools being closed and activities shut down, it's hard to stay busy. Here are two activities for students that I think seem super fun! Mad Libs are hilarious word games that help kids keep up with parts of their speech. They help reaffirm concepts such as nouns, verbs, and adjectives all while creating crazy stories that each have special themes. Mad Libs aren't just funny and educational, but the booklets also only cost $5! http://theworldforfreedom.com/Writing_Topic

You were supposed to have one more activity in your paragraph, so make sure you read all of the directions next time! Your word choice in this was great, you must have a large vocabulary! Keep using your word skills in other parts of your paragraphs to be more descriptive and create a better idea for the reader. Make sure you're paying attention to the difference between there, their, and they're and know when to use them. Also make sure you're not just copying what the article says and using that as your own - you can get in big trouble for that in the future! It's important to use your own words. Remember to add a title at the beginning and the source at the end of your paragraph. This is a good start, keep working hard! Edited by Lainey Morris