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Measuring Ocean[edit]
Atleast 30 meters below the ocean, there is a zone called the "twilight zone". The twilight zone has a very complex ecosystem which actually contain some coral reefs, but they may be in major threat when it comes to extreme weather. Instead of providing a refuge of the storm or extreme weather, the deep down coral reefs can be vulnerable as their deep and shallow water parts. As a result from the extreme storm, deep coral reefs are being affected as they slowly die. As soon, reefs might die out.
Source:https://www.scientificamerican.com/video/corals-in-a-hurricane-deep-reefs-under-threat/
A Day For Pepperoni[edit]
On September 20th, there is actually a day just for the topping pepperoni as it is one of the world's most common and famous topping people want on pizza. There are actually places that celebrate this day by giving free pepperoni pizza. Some people don't even know this day exist but it's basically a very cool holiday just to admit as some actually are informed about this day since it is also on the internet. Another fact is that most of the people in different countries or cities actually like pepperoni as a pizza topping. People might not know it but it is very interesting so why won't they know and why won't they like it?
Hurricane's Appearance[edit]
People have seen hurricanes on news before such as Hurricane Sandy which was major since it damaged part of New York and flooded most of it, as a new major hurricane is gonna cause another impact in North Carolina. However, the mayor of CR are warning the others to evacuate to safer grounds and leave low grounds to reach higher grounds or places that is not near rivers. Other areas are heading there to make sure everyone safe or help the injured by evacuating and taking care of the injured ones. As this happens the news spread everywhere about Hurricane Florence and telling others to inform that anyone that has sibling in North Carolina or relatives should help move them to safer areas. As the hurricane is coming closer, strong wings are blowing in Myrtle Beach. However, two or people more people had died so far as they have discovered that a mother and an infant child was killed in the hurricane's occurrence. Hurricane Florence have so far been very deadly as who could know what will happen next.
Source:newsarticle.com
Ice Watching[edit]
People these days are living a modern life as soon they will find out that place that have a cold climate aren't able to relax. Unfortunately, ice are melting slowly as it becomes as small as the width of a pencil. NASA is actually informed about this and made a plan since 2003 to 2009 to keep watch of the ice. But they aren't really watching as they programmed satellites to watch the ice melt to tinier pieces. As this happens NASA teams are deciding what to do when all the ice melts. Today people are getting prepared by flying on plane heading towards Greenland to make sure everything is fine and nothing has gone out of control. While the ice melts, the sea level also increases and rises because of the melting ice. That's not only it, but the frozen areas on Earth also seem to be having melting ice around the area. NASA are even measuring the amount of ice still there and not melting. Right not even NASA can stop it from decreasing.
Source:newsatrticle.com
Sharknapper[edit]
There are some bad people out there as they act very dumb. A guy with a baby stroller tries to kidnap a shark at a public aquarium near the shark tank on camera. This was very dumb thing to do since there were many witnesses in the background filming them struggling to kidnap a shark. They kidnapped a shark but tried to get away as they forgot that there were a lot of security nearby which ended up messing them up. In addition, they were caught on camera shown in a video on news articles. They briefly got away as people actually thought there was a baby in the stroller, but found out they were sharknapper. Which was close since the security camera luckily caught a picture of them on the camera showing who the people were as they were acting suspicious looking at the sharks with an empty baby stroller. People might look suspicious but they aren't very smart at being suspicious sometimes.
Source:newsarticle.com
Elderly Power[edit]
Elderly are usually misunderstood as weak or fragile. But long before, during a bus hijack an elderly was attacked but an old woman ( the bus driver ) tricked the hijacker. The tape that recorded on the bus showed how the bus driver tells the hijacker to look at the side doors as she will lock the front doors, but instead she gave the advantage to the ones riding the bus to escape. However, her genius plan later traps the hijacker. While the hijacker stop at the side door of the bus, the bus driver quickly leaves the bus as the only person that was in the bus was the hijacker. That was not it, because the hijacker have no idea how to open the doors since the elderly bus driver locked the door on the way of sprinting out. The hijacker tries to drive away, but the bus driver also somehow took out the source of the bus on the way out. So the hijacker was later on arrested as the bus driver was interviewed on what had just happened.
Source:cnn.com
Mars' Mission[edit]
NASA have went to the Earth’s moon before but did you know that they are gonna go on another mission to the moon? You maybe wondering “Why are they going to the moon and don’t they already know about the moon.” But the problem is that in 2030 NASA are gonna send astronauts to Mars’ moon. Also, since this is because people are trying to figure out if Mars is actually habitable. Before, they have actually figured out that Mars had water on the planet formed by ice but no one knows if it’s habitable. It’s not like anyone want to risk their lives to find out. So in 2030, astronauts were expected to go to Mars’ moon and explore it to make sure it has the right amount of materials human need to use to live.
Source:newsarticle.com
Educational Fun[edit]
Many adults thinks that’s technology, video games, cartoons, and consoles are bad for kids but they are wrong. These years, teachers has actually thought of ideas to teach kids with education and fun. The teachers suddenly thinks of games and technology. Some teacher showed their student movies and games. They find out that the kids are learning faster than being teached and they learn more. The teacher takes this as an advantage to help students learn. That not only it but it also help student learn new thing and remember thing more often. People tried it and learned that it’s actually efficient. So when teachers or parents say that technology or games are bad for you, they are wrong!
Source:newsarticle.com
Miracle Occurs[edit]
Have you ever believed in a miracle, well a 13 year old has experienced one. As a kid, he hanged out with his friend at the friend’s house as they rode a buggy. However, little did he know that the friend pressed on the brakes to stop as Trenton flew out the buggy hitting his head. Trenton was rushed to USA Medical Center and found out he had seven skull fractures. That wasn’t it since the doctor said they didn’t know if they could fix him. So the parents were convinced to sign a paper to donate his organs to other kids before he dies. However, a miracle occurs to Trenton as he regains consciousness and woke up. Luckily, Trenton was patched up and was alright just in time before the doctor took out his organs.
Source:newsarticle.com
Robot Dogs[edit]
People have made many high tech tachnology such as cars, computers, flying cars, robots, and machinery. But who know they made a robot version of a man’s best friend. People usually refer a man’s best friends as puppies and dogs. But it’s true, scientist are deciding if they should put a prototype experimented robotic dog for sale in 2019. It would have many commands such as going to areas, you want it to go. The robotic dog is impressive since it could also lift boxes, go for a walk, and run very fast. However the robodog is awesome since it doesn’t only run but it rideable. The robot dog has functions that allows you to drive the dog and has many other cool functions. Well scientist wants to sell these to people’s house as soon as they can. It’s coming out on 2019!
Source:newsarticle.com
Flying Cars?[edit]
Technology has been increasing and become better than the original. People know what cars are, but have they ever heard of a flying car? Kitty Hawk funded by Google cofounder Larry Page and led by Thrun, teased its Flyer prototype. Now a girl named Rachel experiments the flying car even though she doesn’t have a pilot license. After the experiment, the flying car was actually perfect and rideable. That was not only it because the flying car could run 20mph and go more than 25 miles. People would expect it to be difficult to drive but it’s easy as playing Minecraft since there’s only a joystick to drive the car.
Source:newsarticle.com
Forming Island[edit]
Near a volcano called Kilauea, islands have been forming near it. It is located near Hawaii where other tiny islands are forming. An island of lava was discovered on a Thursday, on the the northern edge of the Big Island. A Hawaii Volcano Observatory crew noticed the island on a Friday morning flight. The island is a part of lava flow that extends underwater away from the coastline. The agency said that the underwater pressure pushed lava up forming the island which is common and it’s called a tumulus. As they are still looking for other causes.
Source:cnn.com
Glittery Lake[edit]
13 miles east of Yosemite National Park, an ancient lake called Mono Lake which retrieves salt and minerals from a stream called Sierra Stream. All these materials creates a substance which is a calcium carbonated spices called tufa towers which rises majorly from water. Tufa tower later leaves salt which is twice as salty as the oceans. This gives it a chance to attract people to buoyant swim during warmer summer months. In winter the snow glitters on the tufts.
Source:cnn.com
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