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https://www.nytimes.com/interactive/2019/10/21/climate/hawaii-coral-bleaching.html


"Water You Waiting For" Scientists at NASA analyzed laboratory studies, sets of LR tests, microbiological tests in order to question the existence of life on Mars. Labeled Release (LR) tests uncovered curves on mar, signaling the detection of microbial respiration, which also appeared on LR tests run on Earth’s soil. It is not possible for Mars to be completely sterile of microorganisms so there is still hope for life on this planet. CO2 is being regenerated on Mars, a quality of Earth’s atmosphere there keeps organisms alive. Water sources, sufficient enough to sustain life on Mars, were found on the surface of the planet. NASA scientists are awaiting their next expedition to the red planet in hopes of confirming their research and the numerous aspects of Mars that make life possible on the seemingly barren planet. Source: https://blogs.scientificamerican.com/observations/im-convinced-we-found-evidence-of-life-on-mars-in-the-1970s/ '

"Water You Waiting For"
Scientists at NASA *** analyzed laboratory studies, sets of ***LR tests, ***microbiological tests in order to ***question ***the existence*** of life on Mars.

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Labeled Release*** (LR) tests uncovered curves on mar***, signaling*** the detection of microbial respiration, which also ***appeared on LR tests run on Earth’s soil***.

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It is ***not possible*** for Mars to be completely sterile of microorganisms so there is ***still*** hope for life on this planet.

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CO2 is being regenerated on Mars, a quality of ***Earth’s atmosphere there keeps organisms alive***.

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Water sources, *** sufficient enough to sustain life on Mars, were found on the surface of the planet.

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NASA scientists are awaiting their next expedition to the red planet in hopes of confirming their research*** ***and the numerous aspects of Mars that make life possible on the seemingly barren planet.***

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Source: https://blogs.scientificamerican.com/observations/im-convinced-we-found-evidence-of-life-on-mars-in-the-1970s/

Water You Waiting For
Scientists at NASA recently analyzed laboratory studies, Labeled Release (LR) tests, and microbiological tests in order to find an answer to the question of life on Mars.
LR tests uncovered curves on Mars, signalling the detection of microbial respiration, which also appears in LR tests done in Earth soil. It is impossible for Mars to be completely sterile of microorganisms so there is serious hope for life on this planet. CO2 is being regenerated on Mars, the quality of which can sustain organisms. Water sources, also sufficient enough to sustain life on Mars, were found on the surface of the planet.
NASA scientists are awaiting their next expedition to the red planet in hopes of confirming their discoveries and the numerous aspects of Mars that make life possible on the seemingly barren planet.
Source: https://blogs.scientificamerican.com/observations/im-convinced-we-found-evidence-of-life-on-mars-in-the-1970s/

Keep Calm and "Go[..] Gentle:" In recent years, in avoidance of living low-quality lives, more older adults are changing their lifestyle habits. Social interaction is a signifier of the quality of one's life because at an older age having someone to confide in is emotionally and mentally healthy. Elders living in empty residents far from familiar people when involved in health accidents have a greater risk of developing a long term disability than those who are more socially active. Though uncomfortable and difficult to misinterpret, sitting down with your parent to plan their living will, talk about the possibility of death. A 2017 study showed that more people in America pass away at home than in any other surveyed location. It is never too late in life to change habits that can lead to fulfillment. Source: https://www.knowablemagazine.org/article/health-disease/2019/end-of-life-care

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Keep Calm and "Go[..] Gentle:"

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In recent years, in avoidance of living low-quality lives***, more older adults*** are changing their lifestyle habits.

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Social interaction is a signifier of the quality of one's life ***because*** at an older age having someone to confide in is emotionally and mentally healthy.***

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Elders living in empty residents*** far from familiar people when involved in health accidents have a greater risk of developing a long term disability than those who are more socially active.

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Though uncomfortable and ***difficult*** to misinterpret, ***sitting down with your parent*** to plan their living will, *** talk about the possibility of death.

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A 2017 study showed that more ***people in America pass away at home than in any other surveyed location.

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It is never too late in life to ***change habits that can lead to*** fulfillment.

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Source: https://www.knowablemagazine.org/article/health-disease/2019/end-of-life-care


Keep Calm and Go Gentle
In recent years, to avoid living low-quality lives, more older adults than ever before are changing their lifestyle habits.
Social interaction is emotionally and mentally healthy, and having someone to confide in is a signifier of the quality of one's life at an older age. Elders living in empty residence far from familiar people when involved in health accidents have a greater risk of developing a long term disability than those who are more socially active. Though uncomfortable and easy to misinterpret, it's important to sit down with your parents to plan their living will, and talk about the possibility of death. A 2017 study showed that more elderly in America pass away at home than in any other surveyed location.
It is never too late in life to set up a foundation for fulfillment.
Source: https://www.knowablemagazine.org/article/health-disease/2019/end-of-life-care

One Size (Protein) Fits All (Common Colds):
Viruses are always mutating to form cells that are resistant to drugs, which causes proteins or other virus-fighting agents difficulty in binding to the right cells. Microbiologist Jan Carette and his team researches for a universal vaccine that will defend against the common illness. When exposed to infections, some cells developed illnesses; Carette's team intended to track which genes were missing in cells that continued to flourish even after the infection. To test the effectiveness of protein SETD3 against viruses, Carette and his colleagues introduced numerous distinct viruses into separate SETD3-deficient cell dishes and was surprised to discover that the dishes lacking SETD3 had a significantly less virus replication rate. However, through an experiment done on rats, Carette uncovered that the lack of the protein SETD3 leads to difficulty in females giving birth because SETD3 modifies actin, which is an important protein that contributes to cell division and shaping. Working backward, Carette's team is still working with SETD3 protein to find the drug for its target.
Source: https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/a-newly-identified-protein-may-be-the-key-to-vanquishing-the-common-cold/

One Size (Protein) Fits All (Common Colds):

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Viruses are always mutating to form cells that are resistant to drugs, which causes proteins *or* other virus-fighting agents difficulty in binding to the right cells.

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Microbiologist Jan Carette and his team ***researches*** for a universal vaccine that will defend against the common illness.

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***When exposed to infections, some cells developed illnesses***;*** *** Carette's team ***intended to*** ***track*** which genes were missing in cells that continued to flourish even after the infection.

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To test the effectiveness of protein SETD3 against viruses, Carette and his colleagues introduced numerous distinct viruses into separate SETD3-deficient cell dishes and ***was*** surprised to discover that the dishes lacking ***SETD3 had a significantly less virus replication rate.

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However, through an experiment done on rats, Carette uncovered that the lack of the protein SETD3 leads to difficulty in females giving birth because ***SETD3*** modifies actin, which is an important protein that contributes to cell division and shaping.

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Working ***backward***, Carette's team is still working with *** SETD3 protein to find ***the*** drug for its target.

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Source: https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/a-newly-identified-protein-may-be-the-key-to-vanquishing-the-common-cold/

One Size (Protein) Fits All (Common Colds):
Viruses are always mutating to form cells that are resistant to drugs, which causes proteins and other virus-fighting agents difficulty in binding to the right cells.
Microbiologist Jan Carette and his team have been researching for a universal vaccine that will defend against the common illness. They conducted experiments wherein some cells developed illnesses after being exposed to infections, and Carette's team tracked which genes were missing in cells that continued to flourish even after the infection. To test the effectiveness of protein SETD3 against viruses, Carette and his colleagues introduced numerous distinct viruses into separate SETD3-deficient cell dishes and were surprised to discover that the dishes lacking this gene had a significantly less virus replication rate. However, through an experiment done on rats, Carette uncovered that the lack of the protein SETD3 leads to difficulty in females giving birth because the gene modifies actin, which is an important protein that contributes to cell division and shaping.
Working backwards, Carette's team is still working with the SETD3 protein to find a drug for its target.
Source: https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/a-newly-identified-protein-may-be-the-key-to-vanquishing-the-common-cold/